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Hi fandom buddies I'm just gonna pen down my thoughts hope it's not unbearable this is my first ff in my entire life so sorry in advance if there are any typos or mistakes in my post
So let's get started
Summary:
Basically in this story avneil have returned home back rescuing mishti from Vidyut everybody think mishti is Neil's daughter including avneil and entire family now the twist is firstly mishti doesn't accept neil and chuhi she becomes sick due to sudden havoc in her life (I mean suddenly someone claiming to be her parents )so avneil chuhi are sad taking care of mishti day and night now since days pass by with Neil's behaddd pyaar barsaana aur Kohinoor mummy ki Jaap ki asar se upar se itna pyaara modern parivaar ke unconditional love ki wajah se especially hamari pyaari angel ji ki advice sun sun ke mishti has accepted Neil and Kohinoor as parents
Now I will start the story
At Khanna mansion:
Misti:papa(yuck)...
Juhi ka Neil:Haan beta papa ki princess
Misti:papa why don't sleep with me and mummy in our room
Juhi ka Neil:shocked to hear and stammering wohhh betttaaa
Kohinoor mummy:misti beta papa (yuck)aise thodi Na Tang karte hey achi bachi ho na chalo aberi saath
Mishti :nooo I will not sleep till papa agrees to stay tonight with us in our room
Juhi ka Neil:it's k Juhi I will manage signing Juhi he goes to guestroom and puts mishti on bed in middle of chuhi and Neil listening to papa(yuck)behad pyaar Bhari batein she sleeps
After mishti sleeps Neil leaves the room
Kohinoor mummy thanks Neil for his love on misthi
Avni angel looking all this with moist eyes from the door
Neil goes to Avni
Chuhi ka Neil:Avni I'm sorry
Avni angel:nahi Neil tumhe kuch kehne ki zaroorat nai hai I understand
Neil :tum itni ni swaadh kaise ho sakthi ho Avni
Avni angel:meine Apne dono maa se yahi toh sikha hai ki Sacha pyaar me koi sharth nai honi chahiye(my foot)
Neil:I'm so lucky to have you Avni
Avni angel:Neil maa called me so I'm going to meet her
Neil:ok Avni
Avni goes to neela house
Neela :aagayi tum I was waiting for you
Avni:Haan ma woh ihad some work in home that's why I had to come late
Avni is upset and worried after seeing that cute family conversation between chuhi Neil mishti she feels guilty of being third wheel in their story but at same she is jealous deep inside and hurt to hear mishti calling Neil papa(yuck)
Please.Note:in this story Avni is bit human she is not robot so she is having some human emotions like jealously possessiveness
Neela ma understands Avni's pain in her eyes
So she calls Ali to her house making avni sit in her room and plans to cheer her mood up
Avni:where is this ma she left me alone and disappeared
She calls out maa
The hall is completely dark without any lights
Avni turns around finding no one becomes screda bit she screams ma
The lights come showering flowers on Avni
Neela ma and Ali start playing music and dance crazily to cheer Avni
At first Avni is indifferent but later to not turn their mood off joins them faking smile suddenly the lights goes again this time a video is played in projector where Avni Neela ma and Ali's childhood memories are shown after seeing all this Avni forgets her pain for sometime and decides to be happy till she is here with them in Neela ma house
Ali starts teasing Avni which end ups both in a serious argument Neela finds them cute and happy that her plan worked
Now Ali makes Avni eat all her favourite foods Neela ma also joins them
Neil misses Avni so he also comes to neela house to pick up Avni back home
Neil stands at the doorstep and sees Avni Ali and Neela ma having good time teasing eating and most importantly Avni laughing out loud
Neil somewhere feels guilty that amid all this issues Avni has forgot to laugh like this and he himself is responsible for that so he didn't disturb their fun moment he just stood there admiring Avni
Ali throwed cake on Avni which made her furious so she ran behind him to take revenge and unknowingly throwed the cake on Neela now all the three are running behind each other to smear cake on each other
Suddenly Neela and Ali disappear
Avni reached pool side she is pushed in the pool
She falls and shouts what the hell
Neela ma and Ali laughs at her
Avni screams ma and you Ali I won't leave you both
Yeh kya bachpana hey I hate you guyz
Neela says to Ali look at her how cute she is looking
Ali also teases Avni
Avni :enough hogaya ab Dil khush toh please help me come out and extends her towards both of them
Neela says hold my hand
Avni asks both of them to help her
She pulls both neela and Ali in the pool and she herself runs out of the pool quickly
Both Ali and Neela ma scream Avni ki bachi
Then finally they too come out of the pool
Here comes Neil
Neil:seems like all are having great time and you wifey not missing me busily enjoying here with your mother and friend
Said Neil coming close to Avni
Neela:arrey neil when did you come
I came long back saw you guyz enjoying thought not to disturb your moments
Ali:so Avni ji your husband has come now why will you spend time with us your eyes will on him so we are leaving saying this Ali and Neela leave but not before pushing avneil inside the pool
Both avneil being drenched scream what the hell to which Neela and Ali say start your romance and run away from there leaving them in pool
Neil moves close to Avni holds her face
Avni moved away saying let's get out of here or we will get sick
Neil pulls her again towards him
This time his grip on her is too tight for her to escape
She is lost in his eyes
Neil is mesmerized by her beauty slowly pecks a kiss on her forehead then cheeks and when he is about to capture her lips
His phone rings he doesn't respond he is lost in Avni
Avni jerks away hearing the phone ringing
Neil gets irritated and attends the call
Chuhi:Neil mishti ka fever aur bad Gaya hey so please come home immediately
Chuhi Ka Neil:ok Juhi I will come soon
Avni angel:what happened Neil ?
Neil: sorry Avni I have to go misti is not well
Avni angel:ok Neil you go chuhi and misti needs you
Neil :are you not coming home let's go
Avni :no Neil please don't misunderstand me tonight I want to stay here please
Neil finds it strange :ok Avni take care I'll come in the morning
to pick you
Avni nods and Neil leaves
Neela :why didn't you go with Neil?is everything okay between you and Neil?
Avni:nods her head can't I stay with you one night
Neela:it's okay Avni tell me truth what's going on
Do you think you will fake a smile and behave normal like everything is cool and I will believe it?
Avni runs inside her room and locks the bathroom door opens the shower and sobs
Neela runs behind her knocks the door of bathroom but Avni doesn't respond she puts force on the lock to open it and unlocks it runs to Avni
Avni is weeping under the shower Neela hugs her
What happened bacha speak out Avni what's wrong with you tell me Na I will make every thing okay trust me
Avni hugs Neela and cries loudly
In between her son's she says how will you make every thing okay ma how nothing is gonna be okay nothing will change I don't deserve true love I don't Neil I don't deserve anything in this world
Neela is shocked to hear her
Neela:hua kya hai saaf saaf Bata na bacha
Avni maa I failed trying to become stronger like you I cannot be so selfless as you were I have become possessive and selfish for Neil I cannot share him with anyone I can't bear it when misti calls Neil as papa(yuck) no ma this pain is killing me to see my husband my Neil showing concern care love towards his ex and her bachi I can give up my life for Neil but I can't share him ma I can't I failed I'm not a good wife I became selfish I have spoiled mishti and juhi's life too because of me Neil cannot accept them wholeheartedly why ma why is this happening with me its feels like someone has shot bullet on me this time in the right side of my heart I can't take this ma
Neela:no bacha Neil loves you only you he will never let become Aisha or Neela and he is not Ashish trust me Avni just give him some time everything will be okay trust me Avni
Avni:noo nothing is going to be okay ma
She cries endlessly falling asleep in neela's lap Neela too cries seeing her daughter becoming another Neela and suffering in pain
Neela makes Avni rest in her bed and makes her sleep
Neil also misses Avni in home and is unable to sleep without her by his side
It's morning :
Neel gets ready checks misthi's fever and leaves to pick up Avni from neela's house
Neela wakes up and bring coffee to Avni
Neela:Avni bacha wake up its 9Am
Avni doesn't respond
Neela goes near her and touches her forehead and realises that she has high fever
She panics and calls doctor to home
Doctor checks and says viral fever and prescribes some medicine
Neil comes to neela house seeing doctor leaving home he rushed to neela and asks is everything ok
Neel sees Avni covered with blanket and shivering in fever he goes near her Neela pulls his wrist and signs him to come out
Worried neil asks Neela is Avni ok
Neela asks him not to worry and she will take care of Avni
Neil says don't worry Neela ma I will take her home and take care of her
Neela says no Neil I want her to be here for some days till she gets fine completely
Neil :but Neela ma I can take care of her
Neela:no Neil I know you will but now have two other people in your life who also needs to be taken care of
So you please go and take care of them and leave Avni with me alone for a while
Neil shocked :why are you saying like this Neela ma please tell me directly if your annoyed please you have the right to scold me
Neela:Neil just answer my one question today you have two choices either too choose Avni or Juhi and mishti
Neil:what kind of a question is this Neela ma
Neela:I don't want to argue just answer me this is very important to decide Avni's future
Neil:you know Na Neela ma I love only Avni
Neela: so you chose Avni am I right?
Neil:yes Neela ma but Juhi and her bachi is also my responsibility I cannot run from it you know everything but still asking me such a question
Neela:what responsibility Neil ok if you have to choose between your responsibility and love still who is your choice
Neil:I'm sorry Neela ma I cannot answer this
Neela:ok fine as you wish if you are confused or if you want both your past and present then I cannot help but to break your relation with Avni do that atleast my Daughter future is happy
Neil shocked :what happened Neela ma suddenly why are you behaving like this even after knowing everything is this you who is telling me to leave Avni ?
Neela:yes Neil even after knowing everything I kept mumb because Avni did not react she assured me that she can deal with this that's why I remained silent but now it's too much you know what Neil my daughter is broken into pieces she loves you madly that neither she wants to leave you nor can bear Juhi and mishti last night she kept weeping the entire night that's why she is having fever I have never seen her breaking down being shattered and helpless this much ever in all these 15 years what have you made her Neil and your love had become my Avni's weakness she is breaking inside every second not only Avni no women in the world would share her husband with anyone how could you do this Neil why did you put my daughter in this situation why I believed you I trusted you that you will not break her heart your love will heal her wounds but seems like your love has become her new wound that have hit her so hard that she is no more the same avni
Neil breaks down hearing Neela ma
He has no answers his eyes are filled with pain now at this moment he realises that his love has forced Avni to become selfless he regrets how much amid saving Juhi and mishti he have hurt Avni
Neela:if Avni was in your place will you share her with someone else will you be ok with Avni's concern for her ex and her child will you do everything she did to Juhi and mishti risking life and self respect answer me Neil then why do you expect her to take it lightly why
Neil shattered and he feels ashamed to face Neela left the place running with tears filled in eyes towards his car he breaks his car glass with hand with a bleeding hand he cries aloud calling Avni he curses his fate he curses himself for being in a helpess situation
To be continued ...
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