AvNeil SS: Broken Promises ~ Part 7 | Page 21 (21-01-2018)

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swati

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Waiting for part 3 eagerlyy

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rinku95

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Superb
Who fired shot?
Continue soon

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Kanika

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

It's very well written... update soon

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docritu99

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Good one..!!
This is exactly what Neil deserves..
Bring it on..

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Bookmarking.

This one is aptly penned and brilliantly constructed. The emotions are bang on and the pace is good as well. It's a well-thought of and a crisp write up, I would say. You have handled the story as well as the characters really well.

Avni was FINALLY hurt. That was logical. Neil was finally feeling the guilt. Guilty of having ignore, even though it was unintentional he ignore his wife, his wifey.

Vidyut has to be the show stealer for me. Damn this character has got real layers to itself.

Amazing job done. I hope you update this sooner because I am definitely getting impatient with this story now.

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840837

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Please update! I know weekend hai and you may have other things to do but it's well written and gripping. So please update soon!

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prathe

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

do try to update soonish yaar😳😛

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iykyk

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: -AvniNeil-
Please update soon, amazing start :)

Thanks dear!

Will update soon. :)

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iykyk

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Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Simi1711
Beautiful start and so well written ..
I could totally feel avni's pain.
Please update the next part soon. Eagerly waiting :)

Thanks dear!

Will update soon.