AvNeil SS: Broken Promises ~ Part 7 | Page 21 (21-01-2018)

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Smitakshi Guha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Beautiful start and so well written ..
I could totally feel avni's pain.
Please update the next part soon. Eagerly waiting :)

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iykyk

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Thank you for the response everyone! Part 2 is up. Please shower your love for tis one too. I'll reply to the comments soon.

Love,

Ashi.

Edited by Ashi3 - 7 years ago

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nina282

@nina282

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Wow!!! I'm hooked. Can't wait for the next one!

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AvNeil123

@AvNeil123

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Just read part 2, finally Neil realised his wifey was missing. Then trying the communicate with her through eye contact.

So eager to know who got shot, update again soon :)

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Omg!
What a cliffhanger!
Please update the next part..won't be able to sleep in this restlessness.

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1070625

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Amazing story dear.

Loved both chapters.

Fabulous!

Continue as soon as possible..

Cannot wait to read more:)

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Sash

@sash4love

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Wow please continue darling. So well written.
Love the story line... and clarifying that Mishti is NOT Neils daughter
Hate the current ongoing track
Feel so sorry for Avni

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840837

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Beautiful update. Keep it coming! Can't wait to read the next part!

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

What a cliffhanger ! This will never happen in the show . CVs alag si duniya se aye hai . At least Avni felt hurt in your story . Dunno whether they will show her hurting as the reunion happens on-screen or according to recent OLV Neil learns Misti is Vidyut's daughter😕