AvNeil OS: My Paradise (October 23)

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

It was a beautiful closure ! U made me ache for such things played on-screen . 💔 U gave justice to even Juhi . I loved that part . You are a wonderful writer . I had happy tears reading last part where they shared the kiss with sunset in background . Don't they deserve whole world's happiness . I always wonder who is luckier to have the other as partner Avni or Neil ?

Keep writing ! Love u loads 🤗

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chanellepears

@chanellepears

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

such a beautiful os smitz

i got tears in my eyes in the ending :')

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GumnaamHaiKoii

@GumnaamHaiKoii

Stunner

+ 26

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

The Build up was interesting.

And end was beautiful n logical.

Perfect logic was given for Avneil lplan.

Hope u keep writing.

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shreya

@shreya2202

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

This is best os on avneil I ever read

U really fab writer,

The way I have described avneil relationship is just so magical.n pure even CVS r fail to express their essence n depth of their relationship , love , n understanding.. u nhaveportrayed every bit of avneil thoroughly. Loved Neil's monologue.. hope CVS will give that one ..

U r really amazing ..

Me just in love with yiur writing style...

Please write n more on avneil

Big hug to u for giving such an awesome os🤗

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nandu_nan

@nandu_nan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

OMG this is sooo beautiful ..

You justified juhi s behaviour ...

Loved the way you explained avneil s relationship ...

words used by you is sooo magical ...

loved it ..

and that kiss 😭

write more ...

if you can thn give a second part to this OS ...

A happy wala HM ..

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Atyay

@Atyay

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

The most logical and beautifully written OS on the present track. Loved it absolutely. 👏
How I wish something simillar happens in the show as well...

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Smitakshi Guha

@SimiSays

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Atyay

The most logical and beautifully written OS on the present track. Loved it absolutely. 👏
How I wish something simillar happens in the show as well...

@bold: I am sure it won't, that's why wrote this OS. 😆

They are turning the show into a full-fledged drama, wiping out even the little remnants of romance by the looks of it.

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Sitey

@ramaasita

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

You have me crying and smiling at the same time and goddammit I just need to give you a tight hug the first thing, because this is one of the best FFs I've read, and I've read a lot of them in a lot of different fandoms. I just...god you have me speechless because it's just so beautiful and blissful that I just cannot express how much I absolutely adore it. Somehow you've found ways to make me love AvNeil, especially Neil even more and God I cannot thank you enough for that. Thank you so much for this! And dear god, never stop writing about them.

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