Kabbadi

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Humko humise chura lo-Steal me from myself
Dil mein kahin tum chupa lo-Hide me somewhere in your heart
Humko humise chura lo- Steal me from myself
Dil mein kahin tum chupa lo-Hide me somewhere in your heart
Hum akele kho na jaaye-I don't want to be lost alone
Door tumse ho na jaaye-I don't want to be away from you
Paas aao gale se laga lo-Come near and take me in your arms


Goa kids sports Camp!!

Match between Parents and Teachers!!)

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NEIL!, NEIL!,!NEIL!" the whole crowd cheered for him as his team was in lead

Everyone knew he was a clear winner, no one could ever defeat him in the past 2!rounds he made 4 OUT.

AND its AVNI TEAM turn,now that they would have to face off 3 OUT.

" Heyy why are you silent? We have to cheer for Avni " Angel ,Misthy said to Her friends.:
" Neil will sure win...

What's the fun to Cheer for Avni ,like this when you already know the winner?" answered another Hottest mother with a disinterested look...
" OMG I wish he could be mine..." said a girl who was busy dreaming about Neil...
" He is hot... But a devil.. I think I wouldn't like to spend my life with him..." said another Mom to Avni..


" So what? The girl who will marry him will be lucky... Handsome man, intelligent, rich... Man she would be really lucky... " the girl said looking at the Game again...




AVNI not liking all these women after her Husband Neil.. with fuming eyes goes
To have turn and steps on a rock!!

" Avni angel be careful" said Misthy who was seeing her Angel lil trip .
NEIL hands in air coming for Avni, sees Avni signaling him to look at the around who was has eyes on them..

Neil comes back to his position with eyes on Avni and her skin hugging dress. Neil is being helpless to see Avni in that dress thinking how sexy Avni looks in the dress!!. The next team is having his mouth open and openly gazing at Avni. The same guy earlier when entering the court was so praising Avni , like being hot and beautiful. He was ogling on her and also says he will ask Avni number like he will get it straight .. that is my Avni and she can't be easily giving...This is it?? Thought Neil have to make sure Avni wears more loose fitte clothes.. gritting his teeth and with glare glare to his team mate tries to make him comfortable by paying attention on game...


Neil sees Avni coming towards him saying kabbadi. And then Avni wink to him


Avni winks at Neil and Neil who was not expecting this move from Avni ,with his thoughts already wandering around Avni, Stays rooted to his spot, making his teammate trip over him and fall.
Avni quickly touches Neil teammate and tries to run off and falls off on the line in fast to reach back to her team and bangs her head to the ground hard .
All gasp from their cheering mode of winning 2 points making a tie as they see Avni fall hard on the ground.
NEIL out of trance hearing Avni ahhh.. runs up to Avni with a frown looked up to see his Avni with pain...
He got angry but seeing Avni hurt and all crowding her he comes pushes the nearby person in saying he can do first aid.

NEIl is not feeling good for not able to hold Avni in his lap but holds her head slightly knowing the premises and checks her bump which is turning deep red.
Asks for first aid box. One of the female goes in to grab the box!!
Gosh this girl what is the need to play when she is so beautiful wait beautiful ..I mean she is so cute wait cute !!! Neil Neil focus man don't get turn on you are in public and on mission leave all for later...



Lifting Avni by her elbow Neil makes Avni sit asking are u ok Miss. Avni nods and assured with her eyes blinking that she is alright.
Avni looking at another mom tells she is doing fine and will be ok by lunch time reminding Neil lunch time so that they can meet in private.
Neil puts some ice packs and sprays first aid spray to make Avni pain go away. Everyone starts to leave for lunch area..!

Avni tries to go too but Neil steps on with a leg in front of Avni making her stop and giving her look asking to stay .. he is also looking all around and making sure no one notices.
And acting around as applying some more medicine.

Avni says to Misthy to go and wait in line for lunch.



Part 2 continued below

Great start, looking forward to reading more

Taking this opportunity Neil holds Avni as the premises is clear, goes behind a gazebo and hugs her tight in a jolt leaving Avni trembling back but Avni retains back as she was tightening up in Neil's hug.
Neil is feeling so lost and Avni knows how much Neil has missed her out since 6days.



Neil calling Avni !!! Avni Yaar please never ever leave me like that . We were on this mission together why did u come ahead of me.

We Planned to come together saying as Honeymoon but why did U leave suddenly. I was so scared and thought I lost my breath again...
not knowing why did u leave me again and here did u go. I felt maybe u reallly felt bad that I left u at altar.


Neil Neil relax !! Neil we are doing this for JUHI and her child truth.
I thought JUHI needs support and u coming with me leaving her will irk her and she might do something again.
And we don't want that to happen right.

NEIL your call on your way to hospital saying Sorry for leaving suddenly alerted me and made me think about family and us leaving to Goa to find the child.
So made a plan and left, sorry I didn't leave you how and where I was leaving.
If I wrote in the letter then anyone can see it again.
I wrote the letter as family will be going chaos with me going away. So left a letter to keep them all cool and relaxed.
And as per my hubby, I thought super cop Tillu my husband will figure out easily. And you did thank you for the non-traceable phone. And sorry for not talking on the phone.
I didn't bcoz your might be tapped too.

NEIL !!I'm ok and I can take care of myself and handle this mission.
With your support.


Neil: Stop it Avni, I can't see you hurt caressing her head bump blowing air tries to make Avni realize how scared he was when she left him alone with no trace for few hours.


Avni feels!!! Neil blowing air, shivers and holds Neil tight close to her.
Neil is shocked by Avni hold and figures out Avni state ,.as their proximity is also effecting him more than Avni.

Crabs her to his nearest Cabin locks the door and kisses hardly landing lips on Avni sweet luscious lips.


Neil is so lost and Avni is no where in this world.
Tasting each other making them feel what they feel for each other all is luring out in the kiss.
As Avni is never been kissed , After deep long kissing Avni tries to reciprocate too.

Suddenly they hear notices and break the kiss where Avni is lost with closed eyes. Neil checking Avni out and her state smirks and holds Avni and gives a bone crashing hug again as they share THIER first kiss.
Avni slowly leaving Neil in shy says she has to go see Misthy.


Neil not again Avni.. my lady Don can go for any mission and face some random person but can't open up and talk her feelings to her pyaarasa husband.
Not fair wify. Avni say something please u didn't like it.
Avni teasing Neil says what are u saying?? like what is that you are talking?? Neil holds Avni tight on her waist line and pulls her towards him making Avni land on Neil.. talking in low tone in Avni ears..AVNI was it not good or rough please let me know your feelings Avni...
Avni slowly lifting Neil's hand turning towards him says .. I like it and rushed away to see Misthy...



More of boyfriend and girlfriend romance on beach ...as Avni wants a boyfriend..


Sneak peak..next chapter

Neil: So Madam needs a boyfriend and want to go on date. You won't accept but u are jealous Yaar Avni .
Avni: I'll see him today what he thinks of himself, screaming ...NEIL!! here I was planning to have some time alone and that Mom what's to go with Neil on a date. How openly she asked Neil saying she is single .
Neil where are u??
Neil:: how is that Avni will convince to come with me .. I've a idea.

Being flirting is romantic my wify saying Neil picks up a rose from the vase.

Ms. Avni, can u be my date tonight at the dance party!!!

Originally posted by: -AvniNeil-

Great start, looking forward to reading more

Am writing for the first time.
😉 thank you. AVNINEIL.

Superb.😊do write more.cont soon pls.

Superb yaar Madhavi,took me definitely to Avneil world hope this will happen in show too😳