AVNEIL SS - LIFELINE: CHAP 4 ON PG 4

AVNEIL SS - LIFELINE


****Prologue
It appears to the Khanna family, Neela, Nanno and Ali that Neil has no intension of looking for Avni and DD is also not doing anything since Neil has not given him permission to do anything and they can't risk his job no matter how close to a family they are to him. The most astounding thing is that after Neil has been informed about Avni's whereabouts in Goa, but Neil has taken off to Auckland to search to his so called daughter with Juhi. It's not like they don't understanding what he is going through but they can't seem to understand what is going on in his head, they can't seem to find to find the Neil they know. The Neil who is madly, deeply and totally in love with his Avni. The Neil they seem to be seeing these days is the one seems to be only concerned about Juhi and her daughter, so they decided to do something about it. They will find their Avni on their own. They already have a clue that she is in Goa. They are going to be travelling to Goa to meet Ali there and they are going to stay there until they find their daughter.


****HELLO guys, my name is Mahwish and i am obsessed with AvNeil. This is my first story on them. I have been having this thought running in my head since the beginning of this track. I couldn't type it because I was having semester exams in my school. I just finished on the 18th and thought to post this here. I really hope you like it. I will continue if I receive good feedback. Please like and comment. It will keep me motivated. Thank you.



INDEX:
Chapter one- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4909202&PID=144477476&#p144477476
chapter 2- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4909202&PID=144498468&#p144498468
NOTE-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4909202&PID=144510772&#p144510772
CHAPTER 3-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4909202&PID=144543153&#p144543153
CHAPTER 4- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4909202&PID=144588191&#p144588191
CHAPTER 5-

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CHAPTER 1

It was a Wednesday evening, the cloud was cloudy and the grass was green. The atmosphere was so peaceful and perfect that you can help but feel so happy at the moment. But I t was a different story with Avni. At that moment she is just feeling resentful, angry and jealous all at the same time. The reason because she had a date with the love of her life, her dear darling hubby is flirting with another girl right in front of her. It started with Neil coming late for their date and Avni being annoyed with Neil when he came and was apologizing to Avni trying to explain to Avni the reason why he was late Avni ignored him and when a guy came and was asking Avni weather she was together with Neil, she replied with "no, I don't know him. I am single. At first Neil was annoyed and jealous because his wifey is giving attention to a guy other than him. Just as he was thing about going and giving the guy a few punches on the face showing him that Avni was only his and no guy is to go close to her. That was when a thought came to his mind. He thought to give it back to her in kind. Neil knew, his wifey might be tube light' as he often refers to her seeing as she is clueless when it comes to romance, but he also knew that his wifey is very possessive about him. She is almost just as much possessive about him as he is about her. Neil feels that it is impossible for someone to love another the way he loves Avni. Avni is life, his life, his junoon, his ibadat, his adaat, his mohabbat and most importantly his lifeline. He will simply seize to exist without his Avni by his side. To love, to cherish and also to protect even though he knows that she is more than capable to take care of herself, sometimes she stands as a shield between himself and any impending harm or danger coming to him. This one attitude of hers that he loves and hate at the same time. He remembered how she promised to shot her own younger brother who she loves almost more than anything in the world only if he dared to leave a scratch on him. He remembered having that feeling ion his heart where you feel like your heart is trying to jump out of his chest due to the euphoria he felt at that moment. Remembering all this in his head he move towards a standing at a distance to him whom he noticed since he arrived at the beach side caf has been eying him. In all honesty he is not interested in the girl, he doesn't even really know how she looks like and he has been talking to her for more than 3 minutes. But is MRS Khanna wants to play this game, MR Khanna is all up for it.



*** Hey guys, it me again with the first part of the SS. I hope you like it. Please like, vote and comment. It will keep me motivated to write more. All opinions and reviews are welcome, I would like to know how you found it.

Haayyyeee...

CHAPTER 2


"Okay, enough is enough Neil said in his head. He has been her flirting with this girl whom he can't seem to even remember her name for the past 20 minutes, but his dearest wifey doesn't appear to even be affected by him giving her rightful time to another person. She is there sitting having chips and orange juice in peace. It was as if he isn't even there. Saying a hasty goodbye to the girl that has been talking his ear off and quickly made way to his wife, because it seems that if he doesn't come on his own, she is not going to go to him and claim her rights on him, his plan to make her jealous is not working, it kind of back fired at him.
Sitting on the extra chair that is at the table she was sitting at he tried making conversations with his wifey but seems like she doesn't even have time for him.
" sun na yaar Avni, please talk to me Neil pleaded to his wife for the 10th time but Avni just ignored him and carried on with what she was doing before he came and that is eating and pressing her phone.
" please baby talk to me, I am very sorry, please Avni, I was just late by some minutes please he pleaded making that cute adorable pouty face, knowing that it will definitely melt Avni's heart because she or any other female out there can't seem to resist his pouty face. And it worked, even though Avni has not totally forgiven him for having the guts to go flirt with another girl right in front of her, but heart has melted somewhat seeing his pouty face. God knows she can't ignore that face.
What Neil doesn't know is that even if Avni did not physically react to his flirting with that witch as she has dubbed the girl in her head with, each moment that Neil spent with that girl made her heart burn in a raging hot fire, she felt to go drag him by his hair and take him away from the girl, but she knew the game Neil was playing and she is not going to give him what he wants; that is seeing her getting all possessive other him. At least not now, maybe later, maybe in the future and maybe when he is not trying to provoke her, then she will surely show Mr. Neil Khanna how much possessive about him Mrs. Avni Ayesha Neil Khanna can be.
Turning her face a little to look at him for a moment and then she turned her face to the other side after meeting his eyes and continued ignoring him.
"What is this yaar Avni, you can't really be that angry for a little bit of harmless flirting with another girl when it was you that started it
"What! Avni exclaimed in shock, "what do you mean by I started it!?
"Well you are the one that said you are single first
"So? Avni said with an unbelievable expression on her face seeing as he was trying to blame her for his flirting with the wit... uh sorry girl.
"It's true and don't give me that face baby, I should be that one that is annoyed here not you
"And how so, please tell me my dear husband Avni said to Neil waiting for him to explain how all this was her fault.
"Aha! You just called me your husband after you just said to someone earlier that you are single, dO you know what I felt at that moment? I just thought to give it back to you the way you handed it to mE"




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Way to go girl, Mrs. Avni Ayesha Neil Khanna...

NOTE


Hello guys, this is Faiyzah/ Mahwish, anything you wish to call me. So this note is a brief overview about the story and also it will give answers to so of your requests. When I started writing this story I never thought that people might actually like it, so before anything THANK YOU to all the people that have taken out their time to read, like and comment on my story.
I was irritated with all the chuhi drama that was going on TV, so I decided to write and also I had the idea running through my head. So I intended it to be pure AVNEIL and their cute romance. I wanted a place I could go and not find Juhi.
So... For people asking for Vidyut entry, I won't promise anything, but Insha Allah I will see what I can do.
Also, people asking for longer updates, that too Insha Allah I will see to it. The thing is that I am currently treating a very bad case of hemorrhoids, and doing anything except, lifting my hand and shaking my head is rather painful. Ingot some times that I can kneel and that's when I can type. My mum asked me why do I have to type, but I enjoy it. Have always wanted to be a writer in like and Insha Allah I will see to it that my dream comes true (duuno wat I'm doing in engineering. lol).
So have a wonderful night and yay!! tomorrow is Monday. Can't wait for the kabaddi episode on Tuesday, what about you guys??? BYE FOR NOW
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CHAPTER 3


Neil: aha! You just called me your husband after you just said to someone that you are single. Do you know what I felt at that moment? I just thought to give it back to you as you did.
Avni: well, just because I said to someone that I was single that does not warrant you to do what you did. You started flirting with a girl. Flirting Neil!! I was not flirting with the guy and you know that according to the plan I am single, then why are you behaving like this Neil?
Neil: but Avni, baby the plan only holds when we are in camp, in front of people. We decided that today was our day to enjoy and be free with each other without pretense and anything, that the reason why we planned this date. When we are alone Avni, you are Avni not Ananya. And I am Neil not Mr. Trainer. Husband and wife.
Avni: but we have to take precautions of not getting caught Neil. We can't become careless. We have to be constantly vigilant. We don't know who might be hiding in some corner. What if someone from the camp also decided to chill today too like us? This place is not really that far from the camp Neil, and also the other reason why I told that guy I was single apart from the plan was because I was annoyed and pissed at you! You came late. I was here for more than 15 minute waiting for you. How dare you arrive late on your first date with your wifey?
He has been quite since she began talking but now seeing that she was getting more annoyed as she speaks and has even stopped facing him turning her face to the side like she did earlier when he arrived. Neil moved forward on his chair and held Avni's hand that was holding her cup and said.
Neil: okay baby, you win. I am sorry for flirting with that girl. I did it just to annoy you. I have been saying sorry since I arrived here. Please baby, let's not fight and forget everything that happened here. Let's pretend it never happened. We came here to enjoy and spend time with each other. We have limited time to spend here, let's not waste it by fighting with each other please. As I said earlier we have limited time and if we waste it with you been angry and me manofying you, phir...
Avni tuned her face again to look at Neil and said to him interrupting what he was going to say
Avni: achha thik hai, I forgive you. Stop giving me that puppy face. And the only this time. If you do it again.. phir to main tumse kabhi nahin baat karungi. Understand Mr. Tillu?
Neil: understood Mrs. Tillu. But if you have really forgiven me, then why are you still frowning your face? You know I find you very beautiful when you smile baby.
Neil was simply trying to flirt with his wife, trying to make her smile, but his wifey Avni is tube light as always she did not get what he was trying to say to her. Looking at Neil squarely in the eye, taking in his smiling face. Avni frowned and said
Avni: you are calling me ugly, that's just what you mean by that statement now. Thank you Neil now I know what you really think of me.
"Okay! Where do these kinds of thoughts come from inn Mrs. ajooba's head? When did I called her ugly Neil thought puzzled and confused.
Neil: now when did I call you ugly?
Avni: right here, right now. You just said it. Didn't you just say that I am only pretty when I smile? That means that whenever I am not smiling then I am not pretty and beautiful.
"Oh god! My cute tube light wifey Neil though while smiling after hearing his wife's latest complain about him.
seeing a smile appearing on Neil's face and witnessing it growing into a full on grin Avni became extremely annoyed with Neil because she thought that he was laughing at her making her to feel very stupid at that moment.
Avni: now why are you grinning like a madman? Are you laughing at me? Why am I even asking when I already know that indeed you are laughing at me? I am a fool that I came here in the first place!
Immediately after saying this, she stood up requested for bill, which was given to her immediately as it was already ready, and left the caf immediately after paying.
All that happened so fast that Neil could not even understand what was going on as he sat frozen on his chair in shock of how much of a tube light his wifey really is.




**So here it is guys, chapter 3 is up and I will be waiting for your feedback. please like/vote and comment. thank you