AvNeil TS Shattered Hopes (Shot II, page 3) |9/10/17| COMPLETED

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SilentAvNeil

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Loved it.

When I saw the olv of Neil running, I was not sad just for this reason. You nailed it in your story. Neelama's advice, Avni's reasoning everything was perfect. You maintained the essence of Avni and Neil.

I am hoping the CV would do the same and we may get the old AvNeil with all the tashanq back again for a week or two.

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Shailja

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Loved it yaar...

Its really awesome...

Neil got his punishment and finally they got married...

Keep writing..

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pri12

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Amazinggg...I want Cvs to handle this track beautifully like this

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srinithi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Beautiful ending ! It was like fairytale wedding . It really cracked me up when she thought she was being kidnapped 😆

I loved her punishment . It was so cute .

CVS aise hi kuch karein ! kash

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srividhya68

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

wow
awesome upt
loved it so much

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Thesweetsoul

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Nanak_Arshi

I agree people were agitated with the olv. Seriously it came as a shock because everyone were peeparing to see AvNeil's remarriage and some light moments after a month of high voltage drama. I hope Hegde doesn't mess things up .

Glad that our thoughts clashed. So if you write one in future I can read something similar of what I want to read right 😉

Shamsika, omg is that really you? Thank you for remembering that OS. It's an OS so it ended that way. Try my other try called 'Strangers in a knot' Thank You for reading and yeah I still do watch Manmarziyan every now and then 😃

no i am not shamshika,i am samiksha nandhu.. and i would surely do see ..

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