RS:Juhi's bachha track : (08-10-2017) last part on pg 14 - Page 13

Originally posted by: Kshailja

Chalo ye happy happy update mood Khush kr diya...

Dhanyawad for such a lovely update..

And naughty Avni is fun to watch and read...

Neil bachhu ab bhugto shadi beech mein chhod k jane ka punishment.

Originally posted by: nimarious

offcourse it was awesome...
I loved whatever juhi told...
sachiii...wow...jaldi krna...waiting waiting...confusion clear krna h😛

Rs dedicated to me? Since u call me shone I will take it as that... but if it is then thank u so so much sanju baby for this wonderful rs a lot really loved all the parts even though u made this as os but im happy everyone made u write more parts to it... the way described avni emotion was worth reading like I actually felt emotional while reading it... really felt like crying when avni was crying hugging the pillow poor avni was really broken...she tried not to show her tears in front of everyone when she came down in her usual clothes with her mangalsutra and sindhoor and how she said "neil ke ghar anne ka wait kareinge... the way she had trust on neil and didn't want to think of anything until he doesn't come and say anything...they way how avni was sitting in her room and looked at the pics on the wall and how she caressed her ring with a small smile on her face but then that quick change in her emotion which changed from hurt to anger was lovely...wow neil came back at 3:30am... really felt sorry for avni when she came running down and stopped in her steps to see neil holding juhi hand and carrying a small girl... the way how u describe everyone silent at the moment and neela looking at avni and thinking the history is repeating itself was written well could actually imagine neela looking at avni...the way u described the way avni felt at the moment was lovely I actually felt like crying at the moment...thanks to avni mobile that slipped from her hand which fell down and finally neil looks at avni.. actually was happy that he was able to read her eyes and notice the pain like how neil smiled at avni softly where avni closed her eeys and opened it with a gentle nod and gave a small smile to neil ...she trusted neil and went back in her room knowing he will come.

Loved the second part I had actually expected neil to come to their roo and give explanation but nothing like that had happened she was able to hear his voice where he was telling the family thre kid was his that must have pained her a lot...avni still waited for neil it was 6 in the morning but he still didn't come...and when she goes down she gets to know from bheema that everyone was in their room and when she askd about neil and how bheema told her the neil is in the guest rook with juhi must have pained avni heart... they was how avni started moving towards the guest room where the door was left ajar... the way she saw neil on the bed leaning against the headrest while the small girl in his arm sleeping peacefully made avni heart sink and the way u described how she felt at the moment was lovely sanju baby... loved how u described neela bit she was really worried for avni...thank god shweta went to check on avni and realised she was not in the room... when neil asked what happened and shweta decide to ignore him I was like yh go ahead do that im not happy with neil right now...thanks to bheema neil got to know avni saw him with the small girl in th egues room... its good bebe told prakash to call neela and put the phone on the loud speaker..avni was so lost that she didn't know who was on the phone and everyone heard what avni said which also broke neil hand and trust me her questions boughts tears in my eyes when she asked neela "mama mere barre mein jaankar app ne kaisa react kiya?.. apko mujhein dhek ke gussa nahin aya? Mujhse nafrat nahi hui apko... heari ng avni say this made neils get tears I his eyes and that made hoim realise how broken avni was and walked to their room

Loved the last part sanju baby... the way neil called avni name in the car but she decided to ignore him and increased the volume while neil was thinking of how to say sorry to her... loved the flashback scene...thank god this vidyut pandit was not clever as his mom... thank god that his men didn't notice avni had a phone...the way u described how juhi felt seen vidyut pnadit dead body and how she remembered all the pain she had suffered due to this man...liked how when avni was close to tears neil gently wrapped his arms around her to comfort her...what I loved the most was when juhi decided to go away fro anveil life and stay with her mother and daughter but the thing that touched my heart was when she deiceded to name her daughter avni and said "aaj avni ka naamkaran hua hai avni and how she wants her daughter to be strong as avni... Awww avni is angry the way neil tried to hold her hand but avni pulled it away and called bebe saying they r coming home and how she walked away followed by neil...haha the way avni tells the family that all is sorted and how she wont speak to neil and so should none of them and shouldn't melt at all seems like avni is playing a prank on neil...haha poor neil when he came to the room he couldsnt evne say anything to avni... loved how when avni left the room and came down laughing and how she told bebe what happened...aww poor neil the whole day went like that but no luck for the guy... opps the next day how neil finally stopped her and said sorry for what he did and how avni slapped him thank god it wasn't too hard... Its strange to see our super cop tillu to see so confused as to y the family is behaving strange but loving it...finally the 3^rd day neil succeeded and finally happy the both shared everything... loved how avni actually told neil how she had felt and didn't try to hide anything on how she felt when he had left her at the wedding making her remember how her father had left her mother,,liked how he touched her forehead with his...and the way he said he would never leave her and would love her till his last breath was amazing.,...omg avni gave a kiss on neil lips but loved neil reaction where he was shocked for a sec but he loved it...hayee just loved it when neil took a mangalsutra from his pocket and the avni laughs and shows it around her neck and the way he said "avni could actually imagine that..hayee loved their kiss actually was imagining a scene like that...haha the way the broke the kiss and how said he still will get a punishment for leaving her alone... and then came this vrat thing loved how avni was standing behind bebe and came to take hew of her saree and then went and stodd behind bebe again and stuck her tongue out making neil blabber something...

Wonderful rs sanju baby u r actually good at writing stuff like this and I love reading it... lots of love from your shone

Originally posted by: ...san...

Aapko uss mein kya confusing laga?

I'll try to explain that scene again ...😳

that flashback part ...
I m lil bit confused at that 😳

Originally posted by: -AvniNeil-

LOved the ending

Shona ...yes its u...😊

Originally posted by: nimarious

that flashback part ...
I m lil bit confused at that 😳

Originally posted by: ...san...

Shona ...yes its u...😊

Thankyousooomuch ❤️

I believe u liked it...

And im super happy...

🤗

thanks sanju baby u dont know how i am really loved it to the core no i didnt like it i love it baby... hehe i will comment on the other rs soon lots of love from your shona

Amazing story dear!

Originally posted by: preya_radev

thanks sanju baby u dont know how i am really loved it to the core no i didnt like it i love it baby... hehe i will comment on the other rs soon lots of love from your shona