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iykyk

@iykyk_3

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Winxcute
Interesting and different plot. Both of them know each other from childhood good. Waiting for next part. Update soon. 😊

Thank you! Working on the next part. Will try to update soon. 😊

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iykyk

@iykyk_3

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: AgnesFan
So Neil and Avni are childhood friends . I'm taken to days where Neil was speculated to be Akash .
Hey is Akshay a cop or Mitali I would love to see Ali and Mitali 😆
Update soon

Thank you! :)

About Akshay & Mitali, you'll have to wait for that. You'll get to know more about each character in the upcoming updates.

I'll try to update as soon as possible. 😊

Edited by Ashi3 - 8 years ago

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iykyk

@iykyk_3

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: srividhya68
interesting prologue
cont soon

Thanks dear! 😊

I was demotivated in between due to recent OLVs & articles. Will try to update soon. I'm halfway done with the next chapter.

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iykyk

@iykyk_3

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Tumpa12
interesting
update soon

Thanks dear! :)

Updated.

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iykyk

@iykyk_3

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

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Hi friends,

Sorry for being late in updating. I was a bit busy. Coming to the story, I'll update the character sketch before I update the next part. That would make it easier for you people to understand the characters better. You'll have to wait a bit more for Avni. Please do leave your feedback after reading.

Love,

Ashi.

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srinithi

@AgnesFan

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Bad ass Mitali ! I loved it . Are Mitali and Ali in relationship ?

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IsisEirene

@IsisEirene

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Hey... Finally found this. I was waiting for you to update this Ashi.

I liked Ali and Mitali as a pair. They managed to escape so fast.. oh wow. I must say i am impressed. ANd Neil and DD reached there just on time. Truly soul brothers. I am waiting to see how Neil will chew them up. 😆 You know you have made the story intriguing. I can't wait for the next part.

And yes, I am waiting for Avni. No issues if it takes time for her appearance. I am sure it will be worth the wait.

If you are in the habit of sending PM's, do add me to your pm list.

Love

Isis.