RS: O Yaara : #13 updated (25-12-2017) - Page 6

Just read Chapters 1-10 in ago... like your thoughts and narration of the story. The lil flashback was nice and the way Bebe got their truth out was cute too. I am liking this confused Avni and at least this one here seems to be aware of her feelings towards Neil.. keen to know what's in that diary.. I am assuming that they're staying at old khanna place still here hence excited to know how will you get the story unfold further.


Really hope the next update comes soon and do update more frequent if can... not many stories are on Avneil and you're one who has written few on them. Great work.. keep it going.. thank you

Hey Sanju... Update yaar. Please.

Exam time .. sorry.. I'll surely update soon after exams..😳

hai la sanju baby here i thought u havent updated this one yet but u updated it long back promise i will comment on the remaining parts once i finish reading it... plus i commented on the 5S story and i loved it... lots of love from your shona just a request please update your first rs miss reading that

Ohkay so this is quiet long.
11parts alltogether.!
I m excited to read this.!
Will be back after reading soon.

Originally posted by: docritu99

Ohkay so this is quiet long.
11parts alltogether.!
I m excited to read this.!
Will be back after reading soon.

sanju baby nearly dont with my comments and i will post them by later on... dont get tired to tired with the long comment 😉
and thank u for the lovely birthday wish
lots of love from your shona

Originally posted by: preya_radev

sanju baby nearly dont with my comments and i will post them by later on... dont get tired to tired with the long comment 😉
and thank u for the lovely birthday wish
lots of love from your shona

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

loved it
update soon