RS: new shot by IsisEirene (2-11- 2017)

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Sanvee_R

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Posted: 8 years ago

Check out the New shot below(7th post)...by IsisEirene..😊

Rs:15-6-17 kya tum mujhse pyaar karti ho?

let me know how is this shot..

it has been just a month and very thing has come to end..dayawanti's chapter is closed now..forevr...neil held avni's hand and made her sit in the car...ali was talking something to nanno...neela was observing neil...his face didn't show any emotion...neil looked up to see neela once through the windscreen ...as if he wanted to ask permission ...neela nodded and returned a soft smile...ali turned back and saw the car speeding away...hey tried to callout ...but neela stopped him and said no...the journey back home has been a silent one...

prakash explained everything to shweta and bebe...both were shocked to know about avni..In this one month ananya ..sorry avni had created a place in their family ...both shweta and bebe were confused...

shweta: toh..ye ananya kal chalijayegi?

prakash: avni..

shweta : ha avni..chaleejayegi..?

bebe: bahu hai woh iss ghar ki...aise kaise chalejayegi..

shweta: bebe aap rok lo usse..

prakash: nahi bebe..ye unn dono ke decision hogi...hum kuch nahi kahenge...

they rush to the main door when they heard sound of the car...

neil didn't look at avni ..atleast once in the whole journey...and avni couldn't stop looking at him...

as they walked into the house...

Shweta: omg...aap dono theek ho na...?

avni decided to talk...

Avni: bebe..shweta aunty...mai ..woh...

bebe: avni bahu..

neil : bebe..baatein baad mein kartein hai na...

saying that he held her hand and went to their room...

shweta: mai doc ko bulati hu...

prakash: nahi...woh theek hi lag rahe hai..

avni: neil...

he turns back...

neil: ha ...kuch kehna hai?

she pulls him by his wrist and makes him sit on the couch...get's the first aid box and starts cleaning the wound on his forehead...

neil pulls back...takes the cotton from her...

neil: mai karlunga...he moves to the mirror...

avni: mai karti hu na...

neil: kal se kya karunga mai?..tum toh yaha nahi rahogi na..

then she realises the situation..

neil:sojao...kal subha utkar packing karlena...it's already 2AM..

avni keeps staring at him as he goes to his side of the bed and lies down...and avni goes to her side...

he didn't turn towards her...he didn't say goodnight...he didn't talk about anything after saying goodnight..

she turned towards his side...and kept looking at him...

a lone tear escaped her eyes and disappeared in the pillow...

'she won't meet him again?...she'll have to leave this family?...she remembered shweta scolding her pushing another morsel in her mouth when she skipped her lunch last week...bebe ...she cared for avni like she is her grandmom not neil's...and papa?...she never expected that she'll ever experience that fatherly love in her life...but she got that in prakash's form...she wont be part of his life?...anymore?...neil wudn't be there to calm her when she wakesup due to nightmares?...she won't be able to see him sleep like a child with his mouth opened a bit every morning?..they'lll not fight over those silly things every day?he won't be there to save her from falling down..like he does..everytime?..he won't be there to support her?..she'll never see his smile again?...'

and few more tears escape her eyes ..she wipes they off with back of her palm roughly...

he could feel her cry ..could feel her looking at him but he didn't turn back...

'mai tumhare marzi ke bina tumhe iss rishtey main nahi rakhna chahta avni'he thought..

there were many thoughts running in her mind...she moved a bit towards him and hugged him from back...he froze for a moment...

'no she can't force this relation on him 'she thought and slowly removed her hands from him and turned towards her side..

neil turned towards her...he didn't want to let this chance go...

neil: avni...

she turned back and looked at him...

avni: neil..

neil: sirf ha ya na mein jawaab do..

she nodded..

neil: kya tum pyaar karti ho?mujehse..?

avni: ha

GUYS THIS IS A REPOST...I'M SANJU...TRYING TO POST ALL MY STUFF AGAIN WITH THIS ACCOUNT...AND DELETE THE PREVIOUS ONES...report mat kar denaa😆sorry guys...

Edited by ...SA... - 7 years ago

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IsisEirene

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Posted: 8 years ago

This is lovely. I really liked this one. Thanks for sharing this Sanju.

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Sanvee_R

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: IsisEirene
This is lovely. I really liked this one. Thanks for sharing this Sanju.

Thank-you.😊

U said u are interested right... U can continue here...

Just res if u are interested..and continue..

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Posted: 8 years ago

Main to report karungi..😆

You are so buddhu.. Why sorry? Infact thank you so much Sanju.. For this time machine RS.. I was teleported back to the time when this track was going on..

Enjoyed it.. Really..😃

Now post few more RS soonish..

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vu1998
Main to report karungi..😆
You are so buddhu.. Why sorry? Infact thank you so much Sanju.. For this time machine RS.. I was teleported back to the time when this track was going on..
Enjoyed it.. Really..😃
Now post few more RS soonish..

Vihu Me too a school student. Yaar ek common baat hai tum saare school students mai. Ki tumlog meri dilki baatein kaise chura lete ho. And behen ur ff is the most fabulous i ever read. Even i have written ffs on avneil. But for that u have to join wattpad. U can check my username there .it is SamilovesAvNeil

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: SweetgirlSami1

Vihu Me too a school student. Yaar ek common baat hai tum saare school students mai. Ki tumlog meri dilki baatein kaise chura lete ho. And behen ur ff is the most fabulous i ever read. Even i have written ffs on avneil. But for that u have to join wattpad. U can check my username there .it is SamilovesAvNeil

Okk ji.. Sami ji..

I have gone through a training to become a chor.. So a supercop might get chance enter in my life..😆

Thanks dear..

I'll surely do that buddy..😃

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IsisEirene

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ...san...

Thank-you.😊
U said u are interested right... U can continue here...
Just res if u are interested..and continue..

Yes, I am interested. I have planned it. I am just penning it down. I am reserving a post now. Thanks dear.

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IsisEirene

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Posted: 8 years ago

Avni sat there in Chamko Cafe, her heart and mind in a turmoil. The End of Dayavanti Mehta signified a new start for her. Her mission had met its end and she had won - all thanks to Neil. But it also brought forth another pain for her - the pain of losing her father Ashish Mehta. Yes... She had hated the man right from the moment he had disowned hee, she hated him because he die not have the guts to stand for her and her mother, she hated him for all the pain and suffering he had bestowed on them but still, somewhere in the deep recess of her heart she had believed that he was alive. She had forcibly compartmentalised all her emotions relating to her father, but sometimes when the loneliness would eat her from within she had spent her time thinking how he would have reacted after knowing his mother's truth. She had wondered if he would feel guilty, whether he would apologise to her and Neela Maa but now, everything was destroyed, burnt to Ashes. Dayavanti Mehta and her irrational prejudices and anger had consumed everything, destroyed everything. There was nothing that she could salvage now. She wondered if she could ever forgive Aman. Her brother was not Aman Ayesha... He was forged in the fire of Dayavanti Mehya's vanity and anger, he was Amol Mehta who did not have an iota of concern for anybody. Yes, he had turned his face away from his Dadi but she did not have any idea about the length of tume it would take to actually make him a responsible and caring person.

Then there was her Neela Maa... The woman never expressed her feelings but she knew her mother had loved Ashish Mehta and she still did. What must that lady be going through? She didn't think she would ever be able to understand her mother's pain.

And then there was Neil - Neil Khanna, her husband. The one person who had stood by her side through thick and thin... The one person who had accepted her just the way she was... The one person who cared for her without asking for anything. He kept every promise that he had made to her. And then stopped her from a heinous crime. Try as she might, Avni couldn't shake the warmth of being there in his arms. The way he had hugged her, stopping her from killing Dayavanti Mehta, asking her not to vilify her hands, stopping her from committing a crime. When he had finally pulled back to arrest DM she had noticed the tears in his eyes. Tears... Which he had shed for her... Tears which expressed his emotions... Which actually told her how worried and on the edge he had been. He had been unwillingly to leave her but then something had cropped up. She could see the change in his expressions when the call came and though he had left her with Neela Maa and Ali, he had done so with a heavy heart and after telling her, no actually commanding her to call him if any problem cropped up. That was Neil Khanna - ever dependable. And she found herself worrying about him.

She fiddled with her phone, wanting to call him but then decided against it. She would anyways go back in am hour and would ask him what was the reason behind his abrupt departure.

Just then, Ali placed a cake in front of her. "Happy Birthday Avni."

She smiled softly not knowing what to say. She was touched that he remembered her birthday but was more worried about Neil and his family now to celebrate this. But as she refused, she had not expected Ali to flare up and ask her to leave Neil and Khanna house for ever.

Unknown to her, the touch phone had already connected the call to Neil. And without any inkling she burst out on Ali, her irritation taking over her common sense.

"Tera dimag kharab ho gaya hai Ali. Tu mujhe Neil ko chodne ki baat kar raha hai. Uss ghar ko chodne ki baat kar raha hai jinhone mujhe itna pyaar diya hai."

"Aakhir rishta kya hai tera usse yaar. Ye shadi ek dhoka hai... Aur jis wajah se ye shadi tum dono ne ki thi wo wajah to puri ho gayi hai na. Fir iss rishte ko dhone ka matlab kya hai?" Ali couldn't keep his anger in check.

"Ali... Iss rishte ka kya karna hai ye Neil aur mai milkar soch lenge. Tujhe jyada dimag lagane ki zarurat nahi hai. Filhaal to.mujhe ghar jana hai. Neil pata nahi kyun par kaafi pareshaan tha. Mujhe fikar ho rahi hai."

"Aakhir kyun fikr hai tujhe Neil ki? Pyaar karti hai usse? Bol Na."

Avni stared at her childhood friend in shock as his anger and jealousy burst forth in the form of hurtful words and Avni found her temper rising.

"You know what Ali... Iss sawal ka jawab tujhe dena mai zaruri nahi samajhti. Good night." With an angry glare she snatched her phone from the table and walked out of the cafe.

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Neil picked up the phone when it fell on his lap. He was sitting there in that lonely spot trying to calm his temper and the feeling of uselessness when his phone started to vibrate and fell down from the bonnet of the car.

Avni... Worried he quickly picked up the call. "Haan Avni...bolo."

Instead, Ali's voice wafted out from the other end. He quickly realized what had happened. Avni was not aware that she had connected the call to him. Angry despite himself, he started to cut the call but Avni's irritated voice stopped him in between.

He listened transfixed as Avni left Ali after giving him a piece of her mind and Neil couldn't stop the smile which spread on his face.

He knew and understood his wife even better than her. Avni may not have said it in words but her conversation with Ali certainly gave him a new hope - she was as torn about leaving him as he was in letting her go.

He smiled and with renewed vigour got up from his seat. He now knew that Avni somewhere didn't want to leave him and he would be damned if he let her go.

It was time to make good of his promise to her "Ye shaadi tumhara faisla tha Avni, aur isay nibhana mera. Wait and watch WIFEY... Mai tumhe khud se dur Jane nahi dunga."

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A/N: Sorry for being so late Sanju... But here is my take on how Neil realises that his wife has some feelings for him. Hope you lime it.

Edited by IsisEirene - 7 years ago