Had you been the writer...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Okay guys. This is a random thing that crossed my mind. We all predict upcoming scenes, some write ffs and some want a better version of the actual scene.
So let's try it. Had you been the writer of NK... ⭐️
How would be the track of the show?
1. You can go from Honeymoon track 😳
2. Introduce a new track/sequence of your choice 😛
Chalo chalo bhadaas nikal do bass 😆
Well for me?
Honeymoon track is good.
Now for a new, my choice sequence? It would be something like this,
Avni and Neil challenge over cooking. Both cooking together and Neil helping her with cooking. Then their nok-jhoks and cute lil moments.

Avni's real drunk avatar sequence. [:D/] where Avni would be jealous and dying for Neil's attention and in the frustration of not getting the attention she getting ,mistakenly, drunk. All family members out of town and Avni running behind Neil and vice versa in the entire house. Avni getting things done from Neil eg asking him to dance or cook for her etc etc, blackmailing him getting in the gabbar singh Avatar. 🤣 Avni actually seducing him in her drunk avatar and Neil running away to protect his Izzat 🤣

another sequence is something I am writing for my OS which will be posted today. 😉

So now your turn 😛
Bhadaas Nikalo mann ki shaanti apnao 😆

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Well If I would be writer then somehow I would introduce a dance sequence in Disco like the one in Kal Ho Na Ho, "Its the time to disco". Like priety in the movie, I would love to see Avni in the damn new avtar... Hahaaa... and this way we can also have Ali in the sequence as was Saif with preity😆😆

Cooking scene would be awesome as you mentioned...
Edited by Zeenish_Khan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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My sequence would go something like this-


Divorce proceedings ongoing. Neil is like I am doing the right thing and avni is just hurt cause he never bothered to have the talk about ending this relationship, and how he just accepted that maybe it's Ali she wants. So she says nothing, and they keep bumping into each other. Maybe that cliff where they first met, and Neil is like why she's not happy, and neela is like really??? You don't know??? Then start to figure out Neil! But Neil do not want- the issue is for him 15 years of waiting and friendship is bigger than his feelings and if he wasn't there in her life she would have been happy with Ali. So why interfere with it. And avni is like why he didn't try to find out what I want, is he also like other men? So both are hurt and confused and silent. Shweta is now out of her blind rage and starts to see how her son is affected, and she's like did you ask her what she wants? How can you not...and she is the one who drills it into his skull that doesn't matter what Ali wants or he thinks, it's about avni. What she wants? And Neil ki dimag ki batti jali. He's now determined let me at least hear from her, whereas avni is like how does it matters now when you ended everything. He apologizes and asks her what does she want.


She says "You."
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Neil's encounter with raghu pandit.😉
avni secretly following him😳
he vl be attacked by raghu pandit and his gundas.he get hit by gundas.
avni terrified .
dd and other police men came .gundas escaping.
avni ran to neel crying out lound his name.😭
neil in hopsital ,.avni taking care of him.😉
neil feeling his wifey's love 😃


Edited by lenageorge - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zeenish_Khan

Well If I would be writer then somehow I would introduce a dance sequence in Disco like the one in Kal Ho Na Ho, "Its the time to disco". Like priety in the movie, I would love to see Avni in the damn new avtar... Hahaaa... and this way we can also have Ali in the sequence as was Saif with preity😆😆

Cooking scene would be awesome as you mentioned...

😆 Zee that wud be awesome
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: lenageorge

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Neil's encounter with raghu pandit.😉</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">avni secretly following him😳</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">he vl be attacked by raghu pandit and his gundas.he get hit by gundas.</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">avni terrified .</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">dd and other police men came .gundas escaping.</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">avni ran to neel crying out lound his name.😭</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">neil in hopsital ,.avni taking care of him.😉</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">neil feeling his wifey's love😃</font>



😳 finally he will get what he is yearning for 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Suitsfan

My sequence would go something like this-


Divorce proceedings ongoing. Neil is like I am doing the right thing and avni is just hurt cause he never bothered to have the talk about ending this relationship, and how he just accepted that maybe it's Ali she wants. So she says nothing, and they keep bumping into each other. Maybe that cliff where they first met, and Neil is like why she's not happy, and neela is like really??? You don't know??? Then start to figure out Neil! But Neil do not want- the issue is for him 15 years of waiting and friendship is bigger than his feelings and if he wasn't there in her life she would have been happy with Ali. So why interfere with it. And avni is like why he didn't try to find out what I want, is he also like other men? So both are hurt and confused and silent. Shweta is now out of her blind rage and starts to see how her son is affected, and she's like did you ask her what she wants? How can you not...and she is the one who drills it into his skull that doesn't matter what Ali wants or he thinks, it's about avni. What she wants? And Neil ki dimag ki batti jali. He's now determined let me at least hear from her, whereas avni is like how does it matters now when you ended everything. He apologizes and asks her what does she want.


She says "You."


If shweta is gonna change then this will be a good track
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: msm98


If shweta is gonna change then this will be a good track


yes😊

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