AvNeil TS: Two broken soul (Last part updated on Page 7) - Page 2

Originally posted by: Kshailja

Yup direct kiss.. Thoda western touch lane ka koshish kiye.. Hope achha ho..

And ye pain and emotional scenes toh bas aapke hi story padh k likh paa rhe h guru ji..

Nai toh hum bas padhne mein hi mahir h.. Bas aajkal thoda practice kr le rhe h likhne ka..😆

Thanx for loving it..

Will update soon..😊

Originally posted by: vu1998

Guru ji...🤣

Main to bas suspense se tadpati hoon...

Aap to embarrass kar karke maar hi daloge...

Originally posted by: mehak4

So beautifully written... loved it
Avneil 😊

Originally posted by: Somewhatwriter

Wow beautiful writing... It was superb yaar... you described the tension between them so perfectly that the tension sort of teressed the atmosphere for the readers too. And the part by the cliff was so adorable, they really do say that connections made through pain are the strongest because healing is so powerful and you depicted that so wonderfully yaar, i just dont know what so say... your an awesome writer... honestly... just waiting at the edge of my seat for your next update, update soon xx

Originally posted by: pri12

this is superb..Two broken souls healing each other...

Avni is bold...Seedhe kiss kr diya 😆

Plz continue soon

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Nice update
Two broken hearts fell in love
Update soon

Originally posted by: Ayesha134

It's beautiful😳👏 waiting for the next part!! Continue soon😃