AvNeil OS: Stare

Shailja

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Posted: 8 years ago

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I want AvNeil PoV...

This OS was so awesome...

You showed exactly how Rhea thinks.. And i think it's not her fault to think like that because she was indeed getting all this but Avni came in between.. So she is right on her part.. And that description where she wants to stab fork into Neil's eyes.. Hahaha.. Bechara Tillu use toh pata bhi nai ki Rhea uske saath ye krna chahti h..😆

And that Aman wala part was awesome.. He is really Aman.. The way he describes that Avni is almost there in love with Neil..

It was written so well.. Please give AvNeil's view too.. Will be waiting for that...

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Gurveen

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Superb
Both the POVs was really amazing but I love Aman's more

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sumana.shesha

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Awesome OS :)

Loved it :)

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vidya dasan

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Posted: 8 years ago

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such a treat to read ... aman i love him now ... really sweet ...

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Ifa_Hassan

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Beautiful os . Loved both of their POV

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Lumos_18

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: jasmine_93
I Loved it!
Do write more!

Thanks. I will. 😊

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Lumos_18

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: __shibani__
Loved it Paro😳

Thanks 😃

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Lumos_18

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: ShailjaShan
I want AvNeil PoV...
This OS was so awesome...
You showed exactly how Rhea thinks.. And i think it's not her fault to think like that because she was indeed getting all this but Avni came in between.. So she is right on her part.. And that description where she wants to stab fork into Neil's eyes.. Hahaha.. Bechara Tillu use toh pata bhi nai ki Rhea uske saath ye krna chahti h..😆

And that Aman wala part was awesome.. He is really Aman.. The way he describes that Avni is almost there in love with Neil..

It was written so well.. Please give AvNeil's view too.. Will be waiting for that...

Thanks you so much. 😃

I loved writing Rhea too, I find her very interesting. She is wrong but I guess she is not completely dark. I think she really believes that Avni stole her life, hence this behavior. And I'm pretty sure the cvs would make her positive after a while.

And poor Tillu, I guess these days he notices very few things that doesn't concern his beautiful wife 😉 so he had no idea what Rhea wanted to do 😆

And Aman is a darling these days. I'm amazed at his transformation and totally adore him. His life really do depends on Avni these days.

I have my exams going on right now, so it might take a while for AvNeil's pov, but I'll try to post it sometime next week. 😃

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Lumos_18

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Posted: 8 years ago

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