AVNEIL FF : NAINA ASHQ NA HO - BOOK 2 (CHAPTER 47 UPDATED ON PG 60) - Page 31

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Posted: 8 years ago
Aj Tillu ka tillu wala avtar dekne ko Mila . my heart went when he cried hugging bebe 💔 ekdum bachon jaise
DD so fast forward huh . marriage n a kid . I love the way you make him remember small details . I really misses my pyari DD n devar-bhabi combo .
Wah sunny and tillu ki decoding . kitne Dino se soch rahi thi . nice story behind tillu . talli 🤣
Neil ko kitne bache chahiye . Play school kholna hai 😆😆 Avni is instant .😆
Tillu never leaves chance for pulling legs of anyone . I love mother-son duo . Terrace dance han 😆
ek demand han . if you bring tillu ka billu then make it twins a boy and a girl 😆😆
aise hi kuch updates dete rehna . deri bhi maf hogi .
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey vihu its amazing . I just loved it . The way all were teasing Avni . Mazaa agyi . Thanks for putting a smile in my face when needed it .
Bebe aur neil kaa part emotional thaa bohoth
But finally i am glad this whole kapoor is finished but willl missed it
I think i will reread this story again
update it soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Kshailja

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Vihuuu... Aaj fir tumpe pyaar aaya hai...
You know what??? Mera gaal dard kar rha h... This update was so so so cute ki I was smiling or say grinning all the time while reading it...
Pehle toh mujhe samjh nai aa rha tha ki comment kya karoon coz I was speechless.. But then thought I should write whatever I gone through while reading this chapter...
Sachhi😳...
Thank you dear.. Finally tears are at rest for sometime.
Bilkul you can write me everything you went through... That's what I want to know😃


The way Neil cried hugging Bebe made my heart clench..
Can't see or read Tillu crying.. He is trying so hard.. And yup all this love is for him only not for his look alike..
And what?? DD is married and already has kid... I am so happy for him... Neil remembering bits and pieces.. DD and his never ending story for his Sir Ji...
And that baby must be too cute...
DD is too fast... Of course he's too cute just like DD..

AvNeil fighting over who will take the kid... Hehehehe...
And then Avni rambling about her and Neil's kid or say kids... That part was so cute... Hehehehehe.. Neil kitna badmash h, Avni ko pareshan karta h.. "A girl then a boy then a girl then a boy" hahahhahah..Pata nai puri cricket team taiyar karega Neil...
Say Kids.. Hahaha😆... His perfect 11... He must be too happy... Avni ki to halat tight ho jayegi...


That whole part was awesome.. Tillu ka Naamkaran kaise hua.. Bebe and Shweta teasing Avni.. Parathe wali Madam.. Paani.. Microwave.. Neil teasing Shweta... Or toh or Neil said he is waiting for Avni...
Hope the story behind name Tillu wasn't bad... Actually only thing I could relate for a punjabi boy being named Tillu.
He was actually waiting...

And that song.. Keh doon tujhe, ya chup rahoon.. Uff this reloaded song by Jubin Nautiyal is too good yaar.. I am too humming this song since two days...
Yeah! It's really awesome... I heard that too...

And at last they both watching there Shadi ka video... Handsome hero and beautiful heroine...

Loved this chappy...
And i realized that I was giving you the summary of your update only.. But yaar kya karoon it was really too good...
You won't believe but I really enjoy reading whatever you write.. It is always that special...

I just loved it so much...
And love you too...
Tu nai hoti toh ye story nai padhne milta hume...
So apna khayal rakh, mast khayal peeya kar, or jaldi jaldi update kiya kar...

Lots of love and hugs... Till the next update...
Update soon..

Thank you sooo sooo much Shailu... Lekin agar aapke jaise readers na hote... To ye story hi na hoti...
Okk ji..
Love..
Vihu





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Posted: 8 years ago
Vihuuu itni meherbaan kab se ho gayi ???? Badi jaldi update kar dia n is Baar bolna bhi nai pada .mummy Patel mera naam tumhari cutie aka meri Zuu ki Zain ne Rakha hai.She can come up with these things.After I told her I get 1000 watt smile when I see Viraf phiroz Patel (Ashish Mehta )
Coming to your story...it's lovely ...Tillu ka Naam Talli ki wajah se hahahahah I laughed the whole time.Bt cried wen he hugged bebe n was crying like a baby.Avni talking about her future about kids n den Neil wants first a girl den a boy den girl den boy...hahaha.N ur FF ki madam Madonna is so cutee...n wait DD ne shaadi kar Li n bache bhi ho Gye waaah waah bahut hi jaldi thi DD Ko Papa banne ki.n what an emotional moment when he realised that Neil sir is his sirjee ...omggg nice one vihu ...n now I want to see Avneil terrace romance
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Posted: 8 years ago
Vihu.. Firstly bada wala sorry for not commenting on last chapter.. But I was busy... So didn't get time..
Now coming to this chapter.. Well it was so good i can't stop smiling after reading it...
Itne emotional chapters k baad finally itna cute sa chapter
neil crying hugging bebe made my heart cry as well though it was not emotional but I hate neil crying...
But then u made my day...
Loved neil-dd bonding
Also avneil fighting for baby... i can imagine them.. They wud look so cute with chotu sa baby.. Happy family indeed...
And the story about neil naamkaran was awesome...
And loved bebe and shweta teasing avni...it was the best part of the chapter for me..
And also this... Neil saying that they will have first girl then boy then girl then boy again girl again boy... Yaar cricket team banane ka irada h kya...
Swetha teasing was a treat.. Paratha... Pani.. Microwave...
But neil is not less..he is blackmailing shweta by song...ohh its one of my fav..
Bechari avni puri laal ho gyi hogii
And avneil marriage video... Indeed Movie with beautiful heroine in love with dashing hero...
I think maine pure notes bana dale iss chapter k nahi...
But kya kru yeh chapter itna accha tha ki main Kisi moment k baare me nii bolti toh voh scene bura maan jata so...
Okk ab finally yeh last statement h mera...
Vihu.. Girl you rocked... And you have my sunday awesome by this chapter..
Edited by Kriyaina - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: nimarious

wow such a cute update...
dd see lekar bebe tk all scenes were awesome...
Neil khanna is back...
so so happy ...
khanna family teasing avni is my favorite part...
Neil blackmailing swetha wow...
beautifully written yar vihu
itne emotional update k baad yeh uupdate was just a treat to read...
I m so much excited for the precap...
wat he gonna say..
.update soon ...
love u lot

Thank you so much Sneha...
Thanks for appreciating each genre I try to write.. Weather it's emotional, action, romantic or light Avneil scenes...
Yaar I felt the way in which Ali's love came in front of Avni was kinda shock to her... And neither it came out in a positive way...
So I'll write it the way I expected and also I wanted Neil to be with her at that time...
So get ready for next chappy... It'll come very soon...
Love...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pri12

Vihuuu Itni jaldi update ke liye Shukria..🤗🤗

I just loved it..I had tears in my eyes when Neil cried while hugging Bebe
DD is so tez..he married late and has a kid earlier 😆
Neil ko kuch kuch yaad hai..
Neil ko kitne bche chaiye bhai..one girl then boy then girl and then boy and so on 😆
Supercop tillu blackmailed his mother
Loved Loved loved this update...
Please update soon
Lots Of Love🤗
Kulraj


You're welcome Ms Kaur...
Actually he's too tez.. I think serial me bhi he'll be ahead of Sir ji...
Mother got tit for tat.. He was ok when she was teasing Avni but when his turn came... He had a defense ready for himself...
Okkk I'll update really soon..
All the love...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AgnesFan

Aj Tillu ka tillu wala avtar dekne ko Mila . my heart went when he cried hugging bebe 💔 ekdum bachon jaise

DD so fast forward huh . marriage n a kid . I love the way you make him remember small details . I really misses my pyari DD n devar-bhabi combo .
Wah sunny and tillu ki decoding . kitne Dino se soch rahi thi . nice story behind tillu . talli 🤣
Neil ko kitne bache chahiye . Play school kholna hai 😆😆 Avni is instant .😆
Tillu never leaves chance for pulling legs of anyone . I love mother-son duo . Terrace dance han 😆
ek demand han . if you bring tillu ka billu then make it twins a boy and a girl 😆😆
aise hi kuch updates dete rehna . deri bhi maf hogi .


He's a baccha himself... Still he want a cricket team of his own...😃
DD is really fast...
Aww you liked it... I have succeded. Big thank you...
Shayad play school.. Meko bhi wahan admission chahiye.
Twins.. Avni jhel payegi... The trio... TILLU PILLU AND BILLU...
That's so sweet of you Sri...
Love you for this... You're soo kind
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update
Avni unknowningly blurted out that she wants kids
They are living a normal life and with some teasings
Neil blackmailed his mother and want her to tease Avni not him
Update next part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update Vihu
Neil is so naughty but I'm glad he is adjusting
Neil Bebe scene was touching
And poor Avni bechari kuch zyada hi emotion main beh gayi that when she didn't mind what is she saying in front of everyone 😆
Loved it

Lots of Love
Zainab

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