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Posted: 8 years ago
#11

Yup *smirks* 😉
Edited by Radiant_Eyes_ - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
Hi monthes since I updated this last because

1. I had exams
2. Shockingly juhi did return back alive in naamkaran making me reconsider my Plot

3 Juhi's pathetic acting made me kill the urge to write something on her

4 . I got clueless due to current tracks and Avneils insane plans.

But now I thought giving excuses is not cool and I should Update this as its my FF. So I am thinking to Finish this soon. Hope u support me in this

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Posted: 7 years ago
#13
Chapter One

"I am sorry Neil." Avni said caressing Their wedding photo as fresh set of tears trickled down her face remembering the incident two days back.

Flashback

It was a chaotic scene. Neil had caught Raghu pandit or Ragini Pandit to be precise. Avni was there with him too who had acted as a spy and entered Rang Mahal helping Neil to gather evidences against Dayawanti Mehta and Guruma. With her help only they planned a surprise Raid and took them in their clutches. Now after an hour of cross firing ragini pandit Dayawanti and their goons were caught and transfered to prison. Slowly each and every girl was rescued from the secret basement below Avni and Ali were supervising it while DD was noting down there details as Neil made arrangement for Medical facilities for injured policemen and the girls .

"Neil." Everybody turned as a petite woman embraced Neil tightly They were shocked was a understatement as Avni looked on with Surprised plus Clueless expression.How did the girl know her husbnd? How can she embrace Him just like that? Was she missing out on something?

"Juhi" Neil's almost impulsive reply answered all her unasked questions.

So she was Juhi. But wasn't she dead 5 yrs ago? Neil had himself narrated their story to her but never had she got a chance to know how Juhi looked making the situation even more confusing for her and scary too.

Is she going to lose her Neil, Her love just like her mothers?



"Why Avni Why?" Asked clutching the diamond ring which he had brought to propose Avni tightly making his palm bleed a little.

"Juhi." He remember uttering those words perplexed on how to react exactly. How can his late girlfriend stand embracing him after 5 yrs of her alleged death was par him and all he could do was to stare at her.

"Neil where were you, I missed you so much in last 5 yrs in this living hell. Am glad you came to save me thank you. Now everything would be perfect like before." She said hugging me even more tightly.

I looked around helplessly as i still couldn't cope with the reality when my eyes fell on Avni who looked equally shocked and ...Sad? I saw mangalsutra which I had given her back taking it from Ragini pandit who had taken it from her forcefully, slipping away from her grip...NO! I


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Avni touched her empty neckline as she remembered how mangalsutra slipped from her hands automatically as she saw her dreams shatter. No doubt she had wished Juhi to be alive but now when now she had madly fallen in love with her husband and had decided to confess it after listening to his open declaration of love and concern for her in Raang mahal, it was difficult to see him in someone else's arms. She thought
herself to be another Ayesha haider. But wait...She chided herself... she was not Ayesha but neela. Juhi n neil were in love and she waw cominh in between.

And only solution she thought was to leave Neil forever to enable him to live happily ever after.

But then now she wondered was the decision right?"
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Posted: 7 years ago
#14
Finally U updated..It was amazinggg...loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: pri12

Finally U updated..It was amazinggg...loved it



Thank you :).
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16
Amazing chapter.
Superb.
Update next part asap:)

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