AvNeil FF: ISS DIL KA KYA KARUN( Epilogue updated on Page 47) - Page 31

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepti_98


Thanks cutie 😳
Pick your dress
The next part will be the last one so will try to update soon 😉

Arrey 😭 Will miss this FF. Do write more.
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Posted: 8 years ago
CHAPTER 14

The house was decorated beautifully with royal blue curtains. The final touch was provided by the white flowers placed all over. It looked like a royal place. Candles were being used instead of lights, lightning the whole place beautifully.

The day went in the preparations only. Neil returned from the office on evening. As he entered the room, he saw Avni getting ready for the party. She was wearing the yellow dress chosen by Neil, with long drop earrings. Her hairs were left open with waves appearing, making her look even more gorgeous. She was wearing very less makeup, making her face glow even more. Neil couldn't stop adoring her. He was mesmerized by her beauty.

But Avni was able to tie the dori of her dress. She tried her best but failed. Neil saw it and intended to help her but then thought that Avni may not be comfortable. He was about to leave but
" Apni biwi ko pareshan dekh kar chod ke jaa rahe ho. Help toh kardo."
Neil smiled and went close to her. He tied the dori of her dress. As his fingers brushed against her smooth back, both Neil and Avni felt a thrill passing through their bodies.
Avni handed him her mangalsutra asking him to make her wear it. Neil gently took it in his back and tied it on Avni's neck.

" You promised me that till the time I am not comfortable with you, you will not force this relationship upon us. But now I have accepted you and this marriage completely... This mangalsutra is the witness. My happiness with you only and you have full right on your wifey."

Avni pulled Neil's cheeks cutely. Neil was extremely delighted to hear that Avni has accepted this relationship by heart. He pulled Avni in for a hug.
" You can't think how happy I am to hear that." Neil exclaimed, still having that wide smile on his face.
" Its too late. Everyone have started arriving, you should get ready fast."
She pushed him away and sent him to the washroom, handing him his clothes.

Bebe came to see them.
'" Hayyee kitne sundar lag rahe hai mere bacche. Kisi ki nazar na lage."
Avni and Neil smiled and accompanied her.

The spotlight turned towards Avni and Neil, who were holding each others hands.
Avni descended down while having a proud smile on her face. Shweta came and hugged Avni
" You looks very beautiful."
Prakash hugged Avni and Neil.
Nanno and Neela hugged Avni.
Ali, Aman and Riya also joined them
" Avni main tere liye bahut khush hoon. I know no one can keep you more happy than Neil. Bas aise hi haste rehna" Ali congratulated Avni.
Aman hugged Avni-
" Di, I am so happy for you. You have got all the love which you deserve in this house. Stay blessed always."

Neil was adoring Avni while she was addressing the guests
" Sir, are you fine? Aaj kal aap hosh mai hi nahi rehte." DD teased him naughtily
Neil hit him on his shoulder and went to Avni-
" Yaar yeh party kitni boring ho rahi. Nothing is actually happening here."
" Ab shuru hogi party."
Avni took the mic in her hand
" Attention everyone! This family is a boon for me and I couldn't have asked for more. My husband, Mr. Neil Khanna is the best thing that has ever happened to me. So here's a small present from my side."

Avni took a deep breadth. Soon her voice echoed all over the hall

Dhaani si dhaani si
Sharbati paani si
Dheere dheere se
Teri chahat chadhti hai

Thodi nadaani si
Thodi shaitani si
Dheeme dheeme se
Teri aadat badhti hai

Neil continued the song joining Avni beside her,
Tu hai toh mere rubaroo
Par kya karun
Yakeen hi nahi aata
Shaam se subah karun
Dekha karun raha bhi nahi jaata

Afeemi afeemi afeemi hai yeh pyaar
Afeemi hai tera mera pyaar
Ho afeemi afeemi afeemi hai yeh pyaar
Afeemi hai tera mera pyaar


They both were singing it together, completely lost in each others eyes. The loud roar from the crowd brought them back to senses.
Neil and Avni started the music and bought everyone to the dance stage. They were dancing and enjoying the party.

Avni suggested to play Musical chairs. Everyone agreed and gathered around the chairs. Everyone was having a fun time playing the game.
The last contestants left were Neil, Avni, Riya.
Neil and Avni managed to sit on the chairs but Riya fell on Neil's lap in an attempt to win the game. Avni blood was boiling to see Riya over Neil. Neil noticed Avni's face and smirked at his wifey's cute actions.
Neil and Avni were the last contestants left now. The musical started and both tried their level best to win the game. Avni wanted this game at any cost.
When the final part of the game was approaching, Avni winked at Neil and whispered "I Love You" near his ear. Neil mouth was left open and Avni quickly sat on the chair. She burst into fit of laughter and a shocked Neil stared at Avni.
" Now see Madam, iska hisaab toh dena hi padega."
" Lets See Pati Dev. But you can't decline the fact that I won the game."
" You cheated."
" Pyaar aur Jang mai sab jayaz hai."
Avni left from there after patting Neil's cheek.

The party was almost over by then. It was late night. Avni was busy talking to Neela when Neil went to Riya and took her hands in her. He knew Jealousy is Avni's weak key. He started talking with Riya in a very friendly manner often keeping his hand on her shoulder. Avni couldn't tolerate it anymore and went to them
" Neil, I need to talk you immediately."
" Later Avni, I am busy with Riya."
Avni got furiated and left from there. As Avni was leaving, a smirk appeared on Neil's face.
The guests soon left from there.

Avni straight away headed to the terrace.
He went after the agitated Avni. Avni was standing on the terrace, anger clearly visible on her face.

Neil went to her with his guitar and soon started playing it. His voice was very soothing but Avni didn't turn towards him-

Dil ye mera bas mein nahi
Pehla kabhi aisa hota tha nahi
Tu hi bata.. iss dil ka main..
Ab kya karoon
hmm.. Kehne pe chalta nahi
Kuch dinon se meri bhi sunta nahi
Tu hi bata
Iss dil ka main uff ab main kya karoon

Main kya karoon
Main kya karoon
Main kya karoon
Main kya karoon
Iss Dil Ka Kya Karun...

Neil went close to Avni and wrapped his hands around her neck and started walking around her swinging his hands while singing...

Karta hai awaargi
Iss pe toh dhun chadhi, hai pyar ki
Naa jaane gum hai kahaan?
Baaton mein hai pada, bekaar ki
Ulti ye baat hai
Aise haalaat hai
Ghalati kare ye, main bharu!

Uff dil ka kya karoon
Main kya karoon
Main kya karoon
Main kya karoon
Main kya karoon
Iss Dil Ka Kya Karun...

Neil made a puppy face with his hands on her shoulder. Avni laughed at the cute instincts. Neil's song had melted her heart once again.
" I am Sorry" Neil apologized to her.
" Don't you dare eye any girl like this ever again."
Neil started laughing and Avni too burst in a fit of laughter. The raindrops soon appeared. It had wet the roads and the trees completely. Avni and Neil were too completely drenched in the rainfall. Neil held Avni's hand and pulled her for a dance. Avni's steps matched with Neil's gradually and they both were enjoying the moment. They both had wide smiles on their faces.
Neil soon bent on his knees and took out a ring from his pocket
" Avni, last time when this marriage was performed, we both were trapped in the web of lies. But now as the things have changed, I want to relive all those moments yet again to make a beautiful memory for ahead...

Will you marry me Avni?"

Avni's happiness didn't knew any boundaries. She hugged Neil happily
" Yes Mr. Neil Khanna."
Their eyes were filled with tears of happiness. Their foreheads touched each others as they finally found their reasons to live...

Vihu congratulations for your second thread of your FF🤗
Zuu congratualations for your 25th update, 100+ pages on your FF and for becoming a dazzler👏

So guys this was the last part of this FF. Writing this FF was an incredible experience for me. Thanks to all those who spent their time on reading this FF and leaving their valuable comments❤️
I will miss your sweet and adorable comments...
Take Care Guys
Lots of Love🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yeah first coment... Lovely ending.. In wait of ur next ff
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing dear. U should continue writing...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ahwwwe its so beautiful...man I didn't wanted this to get over ...anyway hope to see you with brand new FF
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awww Nainooo Tussi jaa rahi ho? 😭Tussi please Vaapas aajao with a bang on FF just like this one.
Iss dil ka main bhi ab kya karoon? Heart feels heavy when you know that it's a good bye. Omg I'll miss this FF and commenting here. This was really cute and sweet and light and so far from the usual drama. I love it to the coreee. ❤️But I love you more hihi.
Talking about this final chapter, I had a constant smile on my face as I read through. All the love, nok-johk, jealousy, teasing, fun, emotion... it had everything. Fab job! 😳
Got a surprise when you added a congratulations for me. Made my day really! 🤗
Thankyou Love!
Please do come soon with a new FF. Will wait eagerly!
Lots of love,
Zuu.
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Posted: 8 years ago
oho 😔 you have completed it . I'm am gonna miss it badly . sorry for being latest of late lateef 😭
Anything for AvNeil n their antics ! and Neil ki nautaunki 😆
You must have made Neil to wear her the nuptial chain . sorry if you have actually written it . 😔
I loved afeemi 😳 that song is too adorable n icing on the cake is AvNeil performing on that .
I could imagine Neil singing dil ka kya Karun n fooling around her . he and his crazy antics n Zain is awwdorable doing that crazy stuff.
Ring ❤️ and his dialogue . I can imagine this scene on show too
love u dearie 🤗 you are amazing writer
do write more n give AvNeil dose 😃😆 selfish me🤪
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Posted: 8 years ago
Whenever I think that I will pm u about update u already update 😆
Update was superb...I loved jealous Avni...
Why did u end this here...
Please at least give an epilouge for this one
And write one more FF please *makes puupy face*
Love You 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Deepti..
First of all.. Thank you so much.. Book 2 is only because of love and support of my lovely buddies and readers like you..
I don't like it... I just hate it.. I mean last chapter.. It's so sudden.. No forewarnings.. That's cruel.. Anyways i m just talking about the news..

The chapter was supercute. Neil was reluctant first.. Such a gentleman he is.. Then Avni saying that he has all rights on his wife.. I was like😳
Both the songs were amazingly picturized..
Musical chair... Avni.. Cheater kahin ki..
Riya se jealous to wo lifelong rahegi..
The last proposal was so amazing..

From the very first update.. You always treated us with each and every update at each and every point...
You're really special Deepti..
But I don't think this is an end... No not at all...
This is a first milestone for you Deepti..
I want you to come back... With a new FF on Avneil but with the same essence..
Wish you all the luck my dear..
I'll wait for your new FF..
Love you..
Will miss you... Not you but this FF.. As you're not going anywhere...


Edited by vu1998 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful update :)
Superb :)
Amazing :)
Loved it :)
Update soon :)

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