Tusi ja rahe ho? Tussi nah jao- Avneil SS~Part 9 teaser on Page 20 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: SelB

vry emotional...
vry nice start dear...
plz continue soon


Thanks lovely😊
will do
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22
Short update

Part 3

The car ride had been filled with silence and stolen glances. The silence deafening. The unsaid words and feelings running through both their respective minds. Who would stop this from continuing? Who would stop the distancing of the two? Whoever it was, it was not them. They were all but confused.

And just like that, a week passed. Avni and Neel had seen each other, 10 times in the past week. Either Avni will go back to the Khanna house because she accidentally took some of Neel's stuff back home or Neel's parents found something of Avni's and Neel insisted that he had to immediately drop it at hers because Avni might need it. Then there was Avni fulfilling her promise to bebe too and naturally Neel took brought all his police work to home that day. Despite all the meetings of the pair, the meetings were still filled with the awkward tension, the unsaid words ringing in their minds and the stolen glances.

They didn't know what to say to each other. How could they? They didn't know what to tell themselves. They didn't understand what they were feeling. They didn't understand their restlessness to see each other. They didn't understand their 'justified reasons to meet each other again were excuses. They didn't understand their sleepless nights were because of the emptiness they felt without each other and not the fact their rooms just felt different. They didn't understand the relief that washed upon them when they had the time constrained meetings and the first glimpse of each other brightened up the day. It was weird. It was unexplainable. Avni never felt this way before. Neel never thought he would feel this way again. But both Avni and Neel blamed their inner turmoil not on love but the habit of always being with each other.

"Mujhko uski aadat si hogi thi. With time, this weird feeling will leave aur main usse bhule doonga/doogi", both of them thought amongst themselves.


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Sorry for the short update.

I've had a really busy week with uni and social commitments and I'm still sick😭

Edited by Affinity - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23
Yess ! I m first...
Although short but it was very nice yaar...
Their meetings and self explanations... Really loved it whole...
Do update next one asap...
But a little longer if you could

Edited by vu1998 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
Nice update Tia
Thanks for update dear
It's short yet beautiful
Take care of your health first then you can give us updates

Lots of Love
Zainab
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: vu1998

Yess ! I m first...

Although short but it was very nice yaar...
Their meetings and self explanations... Really loved it whole...
Do update next one asap...
But a little longer if you could


Thanks vihu. It means a lot coming from you. Your ff is absolutely amazing babe!!
Yea, I will try to update it in the next 24hrs😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Nice update Tia
Thanks for update dear
It's short yet beautiful
Take care of your health first then you can give us updates

Lots of Love
Zainab


Thankyouu so much Zainab.
I'll try making the next update longer but thankyou for your kind words lovely😊
haha, I'm trying too😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27
Awsome Tia...It was lovely...
Please take care of u and get well soon 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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sorry Tia 😔 I am so late
it was very beautiful to read 3 in a go..
you are just wonderful yar..
the khannas accepted her after knowing the truth 👏 and swetha too😃 and everyone except these two idiots couldn't realise that they can't stay away each other.
3rd part was most beautiful.. I loved it so much. you have written their inner turmoil so beautifully..
Shayad in bhuduon ko samaj aye😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: pri12

Awsome Tia...It was lovely...

Please take care of u and get well soon 🤗


thankyou gorgeous🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AgnesFan

sorry Tia 😔 I am so late

it was very beautiful to read 3 in a go..
you are just wonderful yar..
the khannas accepted her after knowing the truth 👏 and swetha too😃 and everyone except these two idiots couldn't realise that they can't stay away each other.
3rd part was most beautiful.. I loved it so much. you have written their inner turmoil so beautifully..
Shayad in bhuduon ko samaj aye😆


no worries Sri, I'm just happpy you took the time to read my story. So thankyouu😊
You're too sweet Sri. Lekin in bhuduon ko thoda waqt lage ga. Abb toh unke jealous wale looks aur possessiveness dikhana hain😆
Edited by Affinity - 8 years ago

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