AvNeilAli OS: She is a mystery !

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Hello everyone,

I just tried to write something about AvNeilAli... Neil focused on finding Avni's truth but ends up knowing something about her past. Avni trying to avoid both the boys. Ali trying to know who Ananya is.


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Avni's point of view :


Not only was Neil after me throwing those 'You Are Guilty' looks at me but now my childhood best friend was also chasing me.


I really need to get out of here. Don't want to play Holi anyway. , I murmured to myself.

Only a frustrated person who has failed in her mission speaks to herself like you are doing it right now. , Neil showed up from nowhere in front of me.

You are again accusing me. , I said looking around.

Yes because I feel like you didn't want us to come to the Holi party. It's crazy because you were the one inviting us. What's in your mind Miss Ananya Verma ? , he said.

Please excuse me, I have to go. , I told him after seeing Ali a few feets away.

You can't escape before... , he started to say something but I didn't pay attention to it.




Neil's point of view :


I was talking to her but she was looking around. She saw something behind me and immediately got that panicked look plastered on her face. I turned my head and saw Ali searching for someone. Why do I feel that he is looking for Ananya and she is running from him ? There is something fishy about these two for sure. When I turned my head back to face her, she had already left the place.


Damn it. , I said out loud.




Ali's point of vew :


I feel that she is my Avni. I need to be sure. I need to talk to her. Why does she always disappear like a ghost moving from one place to another ?




Avni's point of view :


I escaped from both of them. Now I should run away from the party. My plans just flopped so I don't have any reason to stay. Plus I hate Holi, I don't want people to throw colors at me. I was walking towards the exit when Neil showed up in front of me with a plate of colors. Damn it, how does he do that ? Come from nowhere.


Don't even try to color me. , I warned him menacingly.

Come on don't be a spoiltsport now. , he approached towards me mischievously.

Stay away Neil, I don't like colors. , I said going backwards.


He didn't listen to my warnings and just threw blue and green colors at me. I can't describe how much I wanted to kill him. Why does he play with my emotions like this ? Why can't he just see that it hurts me like anything ?


What don't you understand when I say I don't like colors ? , I shouted hitting on his chest making the plate fall from his hand.




Neil's point of view :


What the... what's wrong with you. , I asked her angrily.

I hate Holi do you understand that ? I HATE HOLI. , she shouted at me hitting me again and again with teary eyes.


Oopsss what did I do again ? I think I touched a touchy point. She hates Holi. How can anyone even hate Holi ? She stopped hitting me and ran inside the Mehta mansion. I followed her. She entered the bathroom and rubbed her face energetically, still crying, as if she was covered with dirt not colors. Oh oh it's not good, I can see the pain in her eyes. I need to know why she hates Holi.


Why do you hate Holi ? , I asked her.

None of your business. , she replied coldly.

I don't know what's the reason... but if I have hurt you then I am sorry. , I apologized.


She didn't react and just left the place. I followed her again and saw her heading the exit. Rhea's daadi stopped her and requested her to have some sweets. At first she refused but then accepted to make her happy. She took a gujia and a laddoo. She said goodbye and left. Once Dayavanti daadi left I followed her outside. Soon after she ate the sweets, I saw her feeling dizzy in the middle of the street. I ran and caught her in time.


Oh ! , she said, surprised.

Be careful, I am not your Superhero that I will save you everytime. , I made fun of her.


She got up and pushed me away. I walked behind her. She started laughing. I looked at her and realized she was drunk. Drunk ? How ? Oh damn it, it must be the sweets. They must have added bhaang in it. While I was still analysing, she started dancing. She pulled me and invited me to dance with her.


I think I should take you home now. , I told her.

Nooo !!! , she said.


She stopped someone with Holi colors and took a fistful of red color. Then she turned towards me and threw it on me.


Happy Holi ! , she wished me in a joyful tone.

You hate Holi. , I said.

Do I ? Doesn't matter. , she replied.

Happy Holi to you too. , I brushed her cheek with mine full of color.


She laughed. I took advantage of her state and asked again why she hated Holi.


Let me tell you a story. , she signed me to come closer and when I didn't she just pulled me against her. When I was a kid, I used to wait my father for Holi every year. He never came. And when I was 10, he came not to play Holi with me but to inform my mom that he was leaving us forever. I hate the fact that I wasted my time behind a man like him. He sucks ! Holi sucks ! , she told me.


I looked at her. So she has a douchebag father. That's terrible. Now I think I know why she is always fighting and angry. She is angry at the world because of a father who was absent in her life. She looked at me and our eyes got locked into each other's. She was holding me against her. Ohhh she is hot... she is damn hot. And at that exact moment I didn't know why my heart was racing so fast ?



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If you liked my writing, please like and comment. It will not only make me happy but also make me write more about them. 😊


Thanks,

Bye !

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Love it <3 Plzzz plzzz plzzz do write more :)
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Originally posted by: Nanak_Arshi

Love it <3 Plzzz plzzz plzzz do write more :)


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Originally posted by: tanyashah0110

Very nice... Continue writing...


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Thanks a lot 😊
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Posting this here because we do have category which is Best FF/OS maker. You can post your entry. It doesnt have to be very long. Just something written from heart and maybe you can be the lucky one to win and ask question or convey message to AdiZa or any other person from Naamkarann Team.

I know the deadline is 20th but you can send me a message on IF and we can sort it out.

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