Two Shot : Bitter Confessions Pt - 2, Pg - 2 | COMPLETED |

Nan_ArHi thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 8 years ago
#1

Two Shots:


Bitter Confessions



(A/N: Before you guys read it, I didn't watched Naamkaran inbetween due to exams and I myself don't know few parts about the past yet I penned down this story, If there's any error in it, Sorry)


~ * ~


Part - I


"Ananya" He shouted "Ananya, come out, come out now"


Avni was setting up her room in the Metha hous - now Khanna house when she heard someone shouting out her name. She was already tired of all this dramas and she doesn't want one to add on it. Thank god there's no one at home.


When she came out, she was shocked to find Aman there, tears streaming down his red eyes.


"Amol?"


"Ananya!" He shouted "Just because of you now we are in this situation! We lost the house, we lost the Khanna deal and everything because of you"


"Amol, it's all your Dadi's fa - "


"Don't talk about my Dadi" He yelled "She would have solved the situation! With Neil and Rhea's marriage, we would have got the money back! My Dadi would have saved us from debt but you spoiled everything!"


"Amol" She yelled "Get your facts right! I didn't do anything in the first place! Your Dadi got the debt above her head, not me! Rhea's wedding? She doesn't even want to marry Neil! Just for your selfish reasons you want your sister to go through a tough life? What kind of brother are you!"


Aman can't say anything for a second. He knows she is right that his Dadi used Rhea for their selfish reasons. Hell he even supported that.


"And yes, your Dadi! She is the most disgusting person I have ever met, Don't you dare shout now" she said, seeing him try to cut her in "She is using everyone for her selfish reasons!"


"You don't know about my Dadi, She is the only one who has ever loved me"


"I know everything about your Dadi! She's the only one who ever loved you? She's the reason why you didn't have anyone to love you! Cause she killed them Aman! Killed them!!"


Avni realised her mistake just as she let out her words. She looked at Aman who was shocked.


"Wha- what rubbish are you talking about?" Amol half yelled as he looked here and there "My Dadi would never do anything like that!"


"Your Dadi is whatever you want be, Now leave from here" She composed herself and turned around and walked inside, closing the door, leaving a confused and shocked Aman there. He shouted for few minutes, wenting out his frustration.


"She doesn't know anything about my Dadi" He said to himself, walking out of the house "My Dadi is best"


As he walked out, he bumped into someone who turns out to be Ali. Ali was on the call but his mobile slipped due to the collision.


"Hareyy Can't you se - Aman? Aman yo - I mean Amol, what happened?" Ali was shocked to find Aman here out of Mehta's house and that too crying.


"Cause she killed them Aman" Avni's voice played in his ears.


"Why he's calling me Aman too?" He thought.


"Ali right?" Aman asked, clearing his tears.


"Yes Amol, what happened to you?" Ali was shocked that Aman is talking in a calm and good manner.


"Leave that, Tell me why you called me Aman?" Aman asked straight to the point.


"Th-that ... No It's just a slip of tongue" He tried to cover up but Aman can't believe just like that.


"No, you know something" Aman shouted, holding his head "I don't know what's happening. One side my uncle scolding me for everything other side we lost all our money and now I'm going crazy all because of that!"


"Amol Amol calm down now" Ali wrapped his arms around Aman "Come with me"


~ * ~


Chumko Cafe


"Here have my special hot chocolate" Ali passed the mug to Aman "Just relax"


"Tell me, why did you called me Aman?"


"Amol, I can't say anything, It's - "


"No, please, I can't take this anymore"


Ali sighed. He don't know what to do now. He excused himself from Aman and walked inside his office. He returned with a box. He placed it near him and looked up at Aman.


"Amol I can't tell you everything as I'm not in that position. But I can give you something very precious" Ali took out a frame from the box and passed it to Aman.


Aman was shocked to see the frame. It had a picture of a woman and a little girl, the same two whose pictures were there at the house now they are staying in.


"Th-they?"


"She is Ayesha aunty" He pointed at Asha "And this ... this is Avni"


"Ayesha" A strange calm came over Aman as he traced Ayesha's picture with his fingers.


"Your Dadi killed them" Ali dropped the bomb and Aman stilled, his hand clenching around the frame.


"Wh-what??!" Aman rose from his seat "Da-Dadi ... no ... she"


"Aman calm down" Ali yelled, trying to get Aman's attention who was blabbering "Sit down"


No one said anything for few minutes as Aman tried to calm himself down and Ali thinking whether to tell him further or not.


Aman thought how his Dadi reacted seeing Ayesha and Avni's pictures back in home. She thrashed out in fear and passed out. When she's not guilty then why did she reacted that way? And then there's Ayesha's picture which brought him a strange feeling, a very warm and comforting one.


"Da...Dadi killed them?" Aman asked hesitated. Ali nodded positively.


"Ww-who are they?"


"You-your mother and sister"


~ * ~


"Sir someone's here to meet you" A constable said to Neil.


"Let him in"


Neil was arranging the files on his table when the knock came. He called the person in and placed the few files inside his back. When he looked up, he was surprised to find Aman there.


"Amol? What are you doing here?"


"I need a help Mr. Neil Khanna" Amol said in a stern tone.


"How can I help you Mr. Mehta?" Neil said in a professional tone.


"Fifteen years ago" He said "Ayesha's murder case"


He placed the photo frame of Ayesha and Avni on the table. Neil was too shocked to react.
~ * ~

Thank You for giving a try to this story, part II will be posted soon, Thank You.

Regards,

Nandhu ~
Edited by Nanak_Arshi - 8 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

21

Views

9.3k

Users

16

Likes

83

Frequent Posters

Electro.Cutie thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
#2
Wow this is really interesting. Update soon. 😳
Duskyylilac thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 8 years ago
#3
Oh wow something very different
Very interesting pls do continue soon.
I am waiting eagerly for next part
swedishdesigirl thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#4
cant wait for the second post. it was really good
shikhsk thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#5
Omggg.would love to read more .pls update dear
nehaa9 thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#6
interesting story
loved to read next
cont soon
JazzyM thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#7
Nicely done.
So, Amol's redemption is on the way...
__VIHU thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 8 years ago
#8
Amazing post dear.
Really very interesting .
Different on Amol side.
Update soon.
I'll be waiting for next update.
pri12 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#9
Awsomeee...plz update next part soon
Gurveen thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#10
Fantastic update
Aman now knows everything and went to Neil but why??
Update soon

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".