AVNEIL OS : SANG HOON TERE...

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Neil has forced me to stay with him . Right now i have no idea about what's going on in his mind. We are staying in the same MEHTA HOUSE which was my mumma's sasuraal her dream which was never accomplished. But today i am here not as a unwanted guest but as a rightful owner of this now KHANNA HOUSE.
Today is my first day and a meeting with Neil's Bebe . I am really fed up of having haters . So i wish to be in good books of Bebe . So i am wearing a red colored saree with off shoulder white embroidered blouse.

As i was carefully descending down the stairs, i heard someone shouting Ananya which is me. And it took less than a qurter sec to know whose voice was that . I was wishing to God that i should be wrong. With much difficulty i reached the ground from stairs. I didn't needed to look in the direction of the person yelling my name to know who was that as it was the voice I can recognize even in my grave.

Aaya phir wo nazar aise
Baat chidne lagi phirse
Aankho me chubhta kal ka dhuan
Haal tera na humsa hai
Is khushi me kyun gham sa hai
Basne laga jaise phir wo jahan
Wo jahan door jisse Gaye the nikal
Phir se khwaabo ne kar di h jaise pahal

Here he stands in front of me. The person who once used to be my whole world. Who used to be my superhero with unlimited superpowers with which he can get me all the happiness of this world. But it was nothing more than just a myth of a small kid. He was no superhero but a coward who snatched my lil happy world from me . He snatched Ayesha ma, Alladin, my brother Aman , Neela ma"s happiness, and my childhood.

With a sense of being brave i broke my trance and transferred my attention towards what he was speaking no not speaking yelling at me .

Yes !! It wasn't a nightmare . It was the harsh reality. He is back to renew my old wounds. To regenerate the havoc inside me.

Ashish like a true mumma's puppet was shouting at the girl standing before him.
So you are that fraud Ananya Verma who backstabbed my mother in disguise of a well wisher.
I very well know girls like you . First earn trust of innocent rich people than cheat them for your own bloody purpose. Don't know whose dirty upbringing you are.
Your parents must be very unfortunate to have a daughter like you.

Terror seized my body so strongly that i was literally freezed . I was trapped inside myself. I couldn't move even one step. Tears were welling up in my eyes even flowing down but all i couldn't do was to move my feet or even utter a word.

Ashish continued spitting venom against Avni . He even called Avni's values to be dirty and disgusting.

Suddenly everything was set on fire. I don't seem to be strong enough . I am standing here to know that weather these words are enough to kill me or will they perform their job in a more worse way.

Ashish started to move towards Avni and said i will drag you to my mother and there you have to apologize for your misdeeds.

As he took those devilish steps towards me , with my shaky legs and a sense of defeat , ignoring the fact that my actions were useless , i tried to escape those hands in which once i used to be happiest. But my all efforts went up in vain . My body hardened as a rock and i failed miserably in moving back.

As he tried to hold my hand to deag me . Someone jerked his hands away and stood as a wall between us.
My heart started jumping. Yes!!!! It was him . My savior. He came as usual.

This very action of ashish mehta unleashed the fury inside Neil and he roared like a lion with fireballs in his eyes " how dare you?? If you aren't aware then let me make this Crystal clear to smoky eyes Mr Mehta that you are standing in front of my wife Ananya Khanna in her very own house. And it is our values only that restricting me from doing something which i would regret later. Otherwise for yelling at my wife like this i would have shown you that what could be the result of messing with Neil Khanna and trying to hurt my wife.
Now before i loose my cool and my anger overpower my senses please leave.
Ashish was about to revolt but Neil shouted in his highest tone .
"I DON'T ENJOY REPEATING MY WORDS TO ANYONE MR MEHTA . SO PLEASE HELP YOURSELF AND LEAVE "
Ashish went out frustrated.

After he left i turned to see if she was OK . And a single look at expressionless face and teary eyes my heart sank.
I shaked her and shouted her name but she wasn't responding neither from body nor from eyes.
I took her to to our bedroom and seated her on the couch. But she was as still as a doll. No response.

The contrary between the two person was very painful. On one side Mr Mehta robbed of each and every happiness of my life. But on the other side Neil was hell bent to give a respectful and happy life weather i deserve that or not.

I was sitting lifelessly on the couch . He was continuously stirring me to bring me back to life. I stopped breathing as i felt if i exhaled i would end up breaking down completely in front of Neil.

Everything was still except my heartbeat and those tears which were streaming out of Avni's eyes. When nothing seemed to be working out, i pulled her in for bone crushing hug. I wanted her speak her heart out .

Neil was hugging me like a child holds his most precious thing close to his heart. He whispered in my ear " i can imagine the sea of frustration inside you wifey. Please just spit it out . I am here with you."
I was still holding my breath he continued " I WON'T LET ANYONE HARM YOU . NOT EVEN YOURSELF" .

I reached my saturation and on being unable to hold it anymore. With a scream i exhaled. I cried my heart to Neil in his embrace. I poured out my heart, my pain, my fears, and my miseries in front of him. After a long session of my burst out i felt a bit ease. Neil was still holding me with same intensity.

When he sensed me moving he broke the hug and cupped my face and said " main hamesha har ghum me tumhara saya banke chalunga Avni. Tumhe tumhara bhai, tumhari khushiya sab kuch main dilvaunga. I promise " . He cleared my tears with his thumb . This time i hugged him and wished to stay in this safest and most peaceful embrace forever. My bleeding heart was healing in Neils embrace.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Avni's bleeding heart needed a place to pour out. She needs a place to lay her head on...Neil..will he be able to bring her out of her agony...
Your story is beautiful
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Posted: 8 years ago
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it's awesome...😊
u wrote it beautifully...
do write more on avneil😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: JazzyM

Avni's bleeding heart needed a place to pour out. She needs a place to lay her head on...Neil..will he be able to bring her out of her agony...

Your story is beautiful

Thank you Jazzy.
Neil will definitely help to brin Avni back in Ananya😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: _SANJU

it's awesome...😊

u wrote it beautifully...
do write more on avneil😳

Thank you dear...
Will try soon again...😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful Story..!!

Awwdorable.. Neil has always bee like that..

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