AvNeil TS- Undefined Us (Epilogue on page 11) - Page 3

Originally posted by: Rozy77

Hey Dear
This was awesome👍🏼
Loved it😃
Especially the last line...
Eager for the next part
Do continue soon

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Fantastic concept
Everything is over
Aman is back, dayawanti is out of their life and everyone is happy
Avni is ready to accept her love but what is stopping Neil???
Update soon

Originally posted by: zaara610

Shibuuu.. awesome..loved it..😛

Please continue soon..😛

Originally posted by: daisydee425

Nice update

Originally posted by: _SANJU

It was just aweesommeee

Please update soon...😊

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

awesome..

Originally posted by: Affinity

This was amazing!!!
Keep up the amazing work!!!👏👏👏

Originally posted by: tvmylove

soo lovely do plez continue it <3

Originally posted by: MahaSrilu

Beautiful...

Loved it

~Maha~

Thanks a lot for that awesome feedback😳 Here is the last part of the TS😃
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~Next Day~

Aman was with Ali at his caf, catching up with his childhood through Nanno's stories. Avni had her "me-time which she used to see Ayesha's pictures and relive her childhood.

Her thoughts went back to Neil. Why did he walk away? Was he scared, just like her? No! Neil was stronger than her. He would never run away, at least not from her. She was his "Ms. Ajooba, he wouldn't let her down.

Should I call him? Was I too impulsive yesterday? Should I speak to maa first? Avni's head was spinning with these questions. She nervously dialed Neil's number but disconnected it immediately.

He stared at it with devotion. It sounded perfect! Avni would be more than surprised seeing this. Neil mentally thought as DD kept the box in the car.

He was smiling like anything as he drove to Avni's house. He was excited and felt like a kid who wanted to share something with someone he loves. He had accepted it long back that he was helping Avni because he loved her, but wanted to make sure that he wasn't imposing his emotions on her. Yesterday's incident had given him a hope that she too loved him. They had their flaws, but Neil, like always, had seen the bright sides and had loved the bright side of Avni, her heart and her innocence that was hidden behind Ananya's harsh face. But today, he would tell her that she was beautiful as Avni and didn't need any pretense anymore.

"Itni jaldi kaise aa gaya Aman? Avni mentally questioned herself and opened the door, but there was no one. Shrugging her shoulders, she was about to close the door, when she saw the name plate,

"Avni Ayesha Khanna aur Aman Ayesha ka Ghar

To say that she was shocked would be an understatement. She held the door frame to maintain her balance. Tears gathered in her eyes and she saw a blurred picture of Neil who touched her cheeks to wipe her tears. He held her hand and led her inside the house.

"We'll name it, shall we?He cupped her cheeks. She held his hands.

"Love? Passion? Craze? Happiness? It's all in one Avni, I can't name it.

Avni stammered and fought against her tears. Neil smiled and wiped her tears.

"It's beautiful Avni, let's not name it. He continued. "I know ki tumhare liye bahut mushkil hoga, but trust me, it will be one of the best things in your life, us, the undefined us!

"I love you, Neil. She hugged him and cried her out. He patted her head. He broke the hug and kissed her forehead. She firmly held his jacket in her fist.

"Agar lips pe kiss karunga toh pure aadmi ko pakad logi? He asked smirking to Avni, who had firmly closed her eyes. She opened her eyes immediately. He signed at his jacket. She blushed furiously and left him. He leaned closer to her. "Waise, I don't mind you holding me.

"I'll mind if you leave me, Avni said.

"Never! Police waala hoon, peecha karna kaam hai mera. He lightly hit his forehead with hers. She smiled between her tears.

None of them spoke for quite some time. They just stared at each other. It was as if they were scared that their words would destroy the moment. But Avni, being Avni had her shares of questions,

"Neil, Avni Ayesha Khanna kyun?

"You lost a lot Avni, I won't let you lose your identity. Avni Ayesha is a beautiful name, but I also wanted the world to know ki tum meri ho, so last name add kar diya.

"I love it as Avni Ayesha Neil Khanna.