AVNEIL OS : HAQ YA FARZ ( RIGHT OR DUTY)

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After Avneil got married everyone was hell confused and extremely angry on Avni.
As Dayawanti removed the veil she almost got an heart attack and her eyes were reddened due to anger. She slapped Avni very hard. The thunder sound brought Neil back from his trance and he noticed his surrounding. As dayawanti began to drag Avni Neil holded her back .
Neil : please mrs mehta we can sort this out but not like this .
Shweta : but tillu ( shouting madly)
Neil: ( with fireball in his eyes) mom please not now!!! I don't want any discussion right now.
And he dragged Avni out of the venue.
As he was walking ahead of Avni holding her hand Avni was looking at his fierce eyes and angry face.
Neil clutched Avni from both his hands at her arm and was looking into her eyes with wrath visible in his watery red eyes.
Neil : what's this? You think wedding is a game of dolls . You married me damn it. Tell me what's your plan . What you are going to get by doing all this . Speak up i said ( he screamed so loud that she got scared and steeped back but fell due to Neil' s dupaata) .
As shd was falling she extended her hand but Neil didn't hold her and let her fall. She was sobbing hard sitting on ground.
Neil pulled her up and again squeezed her arms so tightly that she winced in pain .
Neil: speak up now !!! Stop behaving innocent!!! Which i know you are not. You are a criminal MS AVNI MEHTA.
As Avni heard Neil calling her Avni her mind became numb and ran out of oxygen. She fainted in Neil's arm .
Everyone came out and saw the scenario .
Shweta : oh my god !!! Look at this girl . So besharam she is . Now she started to employ such dirty tactacti to enter my tillu's life and our home. But i won't let such a cheap girl enter my house on any cost .
Neil just couldn't take this much and that too for Avni
Neil : MOM ENOUGH ! Please pay heed to your words . Do remember that you are taking about your DIL and your son's wife.
Shweta : i don't ...
Neil : ( interrupting her) BUT I DO !!!! I DO ACCEPT HER AS MY WIFE.
Neil took Avni in his arms and left from there to reach his place.
As he reached his flat he placed Avni on bed covered her with quilt and sat on a sofa outside.
NEIL'S POV
Everything was perfect with Riya . I had no turmoil inside me . No confusion . But why does this confusion this unnamed feeling overpowered me when i saw Avni.
Why did i behaved that worse with her. Because my heart my mind stop pretending just by seeing her . And the worse is that guilt of forgetting Juhi on being with Avni .
This very thought disturbed his mind to the highest extent . As he was fighting without with himself or tightly his real feeling he saw Avni gaining consciousness and as she was struggling to get up but couldn't due aching head and sour body Neil immediately reached upto her and tried to help her out. He saw her arms scratched and he knew the reason . Neil abruptly said " I I mm sosorry"
Avni jerked his hands away and replied in stern voice " You should be, you should be sorry for your own concocted hypothesis about a person being criminal . You should be sorry for your hurting Riya . You should be sorry for being at that murderer dayawanti's side. You should be sorry for your handicapped so called police system MR NEIL KHANNA. "
You people call yourself defender of innocent but you guys especially you don't deserve anyone's trust.
As she said each word she took a step towards him now they were face to face inces away from each other.
Now this was limit of Neil he's been a proud police officer his whole life but this girl who is a traitor herself was accusing him for something he didn't acknowledge.
Neil turned her so that her back was brushing with her chest and was holding her both hands at her chest.
Neil : so Ms Innocent tell me when did i broke your trust. And by the way which trust which you never had on me . Did ever faked my mom . Is my name not Neil Khanna . Did i had a criminal brother whom i am bent on defending at any cost . Did i had a family whom i wanted to destroy by using anyone's feelings anyone's friendship. And did i had a friend NAMED ALI ( gritting his teeth) with whom i pretend to be stranger in gront of you.
Now tell me what lie i told you .
Now Neil turned her to face him " and to the contrary you never told me a single truth. Although we had fights but what made you think I'll betray you if you trust me and tell me the truth .
You always kept me in darkness and now you accuse me of breaking the trust you never had on me .
"I wish you once tried to reveal the truth but you didn't as i did something so bad with you that you couldn't tell me your real self Avni "
It is so easy to accuse other but very difficult to be equally rational with yourself .
" Got it " by saying this he pusheded Avni back and went out of room.
As he exited each and every word spatted by him and those questioning eyes started flashing in front of her eyes. She sat there silent reminiscing the day.

NEIL POV
As i came out of the room i went to kitchen to get myself a JUHI SPECIAL COFEE to calm myself i unknowingly prepared two mugs and decided to offer one to Avni .

As he entered the room he found the room empty and his breath hitched on the very though of her being in trouble. He ran out and saw her standing in rain . He decided to wait for her instead of disturbing her thoughts.

AVNI POV
Maa am i this bad ? Although what Neil said hurted me but at the same time was all true . He is badly hurt . He always turned out to be my savior . And i always betrayed him . Why i did so mumma why .


Now she started screaming and shouting . She was so tired that she was about to drop but Neil grabbed her hands .
Neil: I m sorry Avni .
Avni : ( turning her back towards him ) you always wanted to know the truth Neil . I'll tell you.
She narrated him everything . She was at the verge of breaking down . But immediately watery eyed Neil hugged her very tightly . Avni too hugged him and cried her heart out.
Neil : I m sorry for hurting you Avni.


Avni pov
Whenever you are close every pain disappear so you can hurt me you'll have to pacify me HAQ BANTA HAI.

NEIL : i m with you Avni .

Neik pov
I'll get you justice MRS AVNI NEIL KHANNA . I 'll make you smile and your enemies cry . I'll give all the happiness you deserve yeh mere FARZ BANTA HAI.

Thank you guys for reading this namuna of my wild dreaming . And sorry if it wasn't worth your time.

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very nice one shot loved how u explained neel's behaviour
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Ooops very senti and nice...

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Thank you guys for your replies 🤗
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Nice os... Liking it...😊
Beautifully written...
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t last lines
A : haq banta hii..
N : mera farz hii..

awsumm 1 yaaa..
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