Masquerade Party - UPDATED FINAL PART pg 3 -22May

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PART 1

Masquerade Party!

She came like a breath of fresh air.
Her eyes covered under the golden coloured mask.
I'm sure she had so many emotions in her eyes but that mask was the only obstacle between us and to explore more I dont know from where I gathered the courage to unmask her face.

As I lifted the mask, her pretty face lighted up the atmosphere.

She questioned me through her innocent eyes...why was I following her?

How could I not follow her as being a police it was my duty but my heart had always found a sort of mystery attached to her.

As we moved on the dance floor,she seemed more like a pearl.

"Neil why do you keep following me ??"
She asked moving back n forth along with my steps.

"Cz you always lie ...for once just try to tell me the truth...trust me for once"
Neil softly held her hand as she came towards him.

"why do you bother?"
You are going to get married soon...u should concentrate on it"
Avni spoke without blinking.

"I know that...give me another reason why I should not follow you?"
Neil smiled.


She moved a step back and slipped a bit but Neil pulled her back to him.

"Tell me Ananya"


"Cz there's no mystery about me...My life is an open book"
Ananya tried to maintain her balance.

"Riya is my best friend and your would be wife...you should pay more attention to her"
Ananya continued.

(Neil's POV)
I dont know why the mention of Riya infront of her always upsets me to the core...as if ...
As if Riya is the last thing I want to think of when Im with her.

Avni POV
Why is he trying to know me?I have never felt this weak in front of anyone ...what if he asks and someday I may get carried away and speak my heart out.
No Avni you cant be weak and that too infront of him.
He's nobody.


"Did you say something Ananya?"

"Nope ! And You?"

Neil nodded in a no.
He was lost for words.
Her presence itself had this effect on him.

Neil POV
Why do I feel so much better with her?

Avni(pov)
Come on Avni ..you r on the wrong track.Focus!you r not like other girls...you cant think of all this stuff.
He's meant for Riya...n Riya Only!!

She pulled her hand away and Neil came out of his world.

"What happend Ananya?"

She just turned away and walked out from there.

He ran towards her...Calling out her beautiful name.


Continued...





INDEX

PART1

PART2
PART 3 PG 3
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Good Job!! Please do continue. Would love to read the next part.
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This is so simple yet so beautiful. Looking forward to reading next chapter. Continue soon
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Awesome os dear
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for it
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Niceee plzzz continue writing about avneil but please update asap😊😊
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Please do write next part ASAP.
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Thank you guys for your kind words 😊
Working on the plot...will be back with a new part soon.

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Lovely story
Would love to hear more
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Ashiii i am waiting for the next part!!
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MASQUERADE PARTY

PART 2

Avni's mind had not been on peace since she left the party.
Standing at the window she cud see the starry night.
She felt as if those stars were saying something to her.
Was it the message Neil wanted to convey.

FLASHBACK

Neil ran behind her and held her hand.

"Ananya don't go plz"

I wanted to stop there and listen to him but something in my mind stopped me and I tried to run away but this time too he caught hold of me and didnt let me go.

"Neil I hv to go plz"
Is all I cud utter.

"Ananya I wanted to say something since a longtime...actually since the day I've met you.

I dont know but I haven't seen someone like you in my whole life.

I knw I'm engaged but that doesn't stop me frm thinking abt you.

"I feel different for you"

I thought abt it and I actually tried staying away from you and focusing on my marriage with Riya but you know what I just can't"

"I am not sure what should I name this but I...Just wanted to share this with you"

"Did you ever feel the same?"

"Running behind you has become a necessity for me instead of my work"

I think Ananya ...I am in..."

Before he cud complete the sentence I interrupted

"But I am not!"

And saying this I had left the place without giving him a look.

FLASHBACK ENDS!

Although I hv denied him then and there...the questions he asked and the words he spoke still haunt me.

"Yes Neil!!...your answer was Yes but I had to stop.And there r so many reasons for it.

Hope you'l forget me someday.

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Neil's POV

Nope!
Ananya you were clearly lying...else why wud u keep your gaze low.

You cud not say all that looking into my eyes...and you already knw how clever I am at detecting lies...

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Thanks guys for your kind words.
I had been busy so cudnt update early but do let me knw if you wanna read more on the same story or you want a different one?


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