RiVanya Short OS: O Re Piya!

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Nikhita

@nuckts

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Loved it

Awesome 👏

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

beautiful OS
awe shivanya couldn't hold herself for not falling in love with ritik 😉
ritik was just awesome husband 🤗
he always care abt shivanya's feeling 🤗
rivanya romance was hot 😳
plz do continue

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-DarkSlayer-

@-DarkSlayer-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Blogspot doesn't like me very much. 😆

But here's my comment that I was trying to post:

Omg. I loved it. I loved it to the core! I was one the forum and got carried here. This is such a beautiful piece of writing! You could definitely feel Shivanya's struggle to juggle the love of her husband and the love of her parents but in the end she stays true to her values but never forgets her love. Not to mention that the last line "Kabhi nahi" that Ritik says in a sleepy voice was the perfect ending to this sweet OS. Wonderful job sweetheart! I loved it!

❤️

Akira