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Really nice

Very well written 👍🏼

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Originally posted by: _NINA_

Really nice

Very well written 👍🏼

Liked it

Thank you so much!

Nice. You do have a way with words. Loved your narrative style. My only issue is would have preferred Bani to be a bit more stronger character. Other than that it's good.

Originally posted by: nihasan

One word..Fabulous

Awww thank you so much !

Will add you in the list for the next one. :)

Originally posted by: Vgn1

Nice. You do have a way with words. Loved your narrative style. My only issue is would have preferred Bani to be a bit more stronger character. Other than that it's good.

Thanks a lot for the comment. I know we all expect Bani to be strong at the end but I guess this was a totally different kind of low point for her here in this piece. I mean yeah sure you're right, she shouldn't have been so distressed (which umm was kind of true in the show's version) so I wanted to do something different.

Nonetheless a big thanks for reading and commenting your thoughts. ❤️🤗

Big hugs. 😃

This is super!!!!

You write so well. Pls continue writing.

Would love to read more from you

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Thanks a lot for the comment. I know we all expect Bani to be strong at the end but I guess this was a totally different kind of low point for her here in this piece. I mean yeah sure you're right, she shouldn't have been so distressed (which umm was kind of true in the show's version) so I wanted to do something different.

Nonetheless a big thanks for reading and commenting your thoughts. ❤️🤗

Big hugs. 😃

You're totally welcome. I did love the storyline. Hehe, the other one is my issue. I love strong heroines.

Originally posted by: Vgn1

You're totally welcome. I did love the storyline. Hehe, the other one is my issue. I love strong heroines.

Thank you!

Yeah I do too. This piece just turned out that way.

I'll try to do something about it in the next one.

Happy Holidays!

Originally posted by: reeyacute

This is super!!!!

You write so well. Pls continue writing.

Would love to read more from you

Thank you so much for this comment!

Will surely whip something up next week.

Originally posted by: rumki34

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Thank you so much