Vani OS - RAABTAA - Collaboration with @AliChase - Page 3

Originally posted by: Cinnamon_Kisses

Hi Jane 🤗

Thank you so much for reading

I will definitely write more. Iss shot ka continuation chahiye yaa kuch naya. Let me know.

I have another OS up. I'll PM you the link.

Mujhe bhi padhna hai....

Originally posted by: fire_wings

That was amazing loved evey bit of it Great job guys

thanks 😳

Originally posted by: Cinnamon_Kisses

Thank you so much Urmita 🤗

Even I really wish aisa kuch dekhne ko mil jaaye

Ab dekhne koi filhaal toh nahi mila raha isiliye imagination se kaam chala rahe hai. Though I hope we get to see at least something similar.

This is MAGIC..❤❤❤❤👏👏👏👏👏.

beautiful scenes like these are what we want to watch and what a magical couple like vani deserve..sadly the makers/creatives have proved themselves incapable of giving scenes anywhere as good as this.

Thank u so much for this story..and pls write more such wonderful stories.

Ever since that VaNi 'date' night where Bani reveals she cant handle alcohol.. I've always wanted a tipsy Bani. To me that is the only way she would let out what she is beginning to feel for Veer... with the current dynamics. When I saw your post for the OS requests.. I was like perfect, I'll come back to comment about it later. Seems like I wasn't the only one and I was welcomed back with this!

Both of you are such amazing writers. Love what you guys have created here. Its so beautiful. So wonderfully written too. A perfect mix of all things VaNi. The adorableness, possessiveness, romance, desire and of course their emotions for each other. I've also always felt the same about this too: "Since the first moment his eyes fell on her, he had yearned to have her love him like he did ". So it was great to have you write Veer voicing it. Love how you guys described Veer and Bani's love. It is different from the other.... and yet equally strong and deep.

Also, I totally dig Bani bonding with the Cheel brothers. If only they were not as big an assholes on the show. *sigh* Fingers crossed on having drunk Bani on the show.

-Nikki

Wow!!!! 👏👏👏 I'm so blown away yeh kitna accha OS tha! ❤️ Thank you both for this epic collaboration and giving us the tipsy Bani scenes of our dreams (actually even better!) 🤗

The story was filled with so much love I didn't want it to end. I'm so curious to know what Bani's reaction will be next morning. I loved seeing Veer having to hold himself back from her since she wasn't sober. Bani better take that into account next morning! 😆It was difficult for him but he thought only of her and taking care of her and gosh he is the man that dreams are made of! Love love love!!!

I feel like I can live my life on these scenes now. I especially loved the build up to Bani's secret and Veer's reaction to it ☺️☺️ Poor Veer! Could not even act on how he felt! Ek din these scenes will happen with sober Bani and both Veer and Bani can dwell forever in fantasy land and I can't wait!!

Absolutely love this!! If you both plan to continue writing more to this story, then I already have plans to continue reading 😃 I absolutely LOVED it!!

Poorva and Ally, you guys have written such a beautiful OS..👏

Makers don't show this kinda scenes in the show but I'm happy atleast i get to read it here😃

I loved how crazily Bani and cheel brothers were dancing and then teasing Veer..😆

And bani complains veer that they're calling her bani not bhabhi..so cute..😆

Then Bani bedroom scene was☺️

Why doesn't bani behaves like this in the show....🤔

Anyways loved it... waiting for the next scene❤️

Amazing ....👌👌👌👏👏👏👏 please give the second part .... I'm eager to know how Bani will react next morning 😍😍😍😍

If there is a continuation to this shot,I'll be glad to read that , it would be fun to see bani's reaction when she gets to know what all she said when she was drunk 😁 and a bit of veer's teasing . Another one shot would also be cool .( My greedy mind is never satisfied.😂)

I'm always eager to read an os 👍☺️