Hamari adhuri kahani LAST PART PG5*COMPLETED*

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Roseline

@Moonstique

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Posted: 6 years ago

#31

whatttQQ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

girl...are u in process to complete all series?? 1st dhadak and this...okay...yup they should fall in love or else😈

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Posted: 6 years ago

#32

Wow I enjoyed this, please continue writing 😊

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 6 years ago

#33

surprised to see somebody writing ff on ViVi.ViVi love each other silently.cute.vikrant seems to be nervous to call her for a date.their conversation was hilarious

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 6 years ago

#34

bela vish scene was sweet .vish is sure that vikrant won't betray her.shocking that sumitra who is vikrant's mom asked him to betray vish as she is their business rival.instead of crying vikrant should have disobeyed his mom.vish will look gorgeous in the black with red roses on it

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 6 years ago

#35

shocking that sumitra fixed vikrant's marriage with zoya. which actress plays zoya?vish saw vikrant zoya together .good that she didn't misunderstand them.vikrant telling her openly about that he can't marr u her was superb.I was happy when zoya also didn't like him.but she is so greedy that she wants to marry him for money.finally vivi met

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 6 years ago

#36

loved how vish confessed her feelings to vikrant.good that instead of betraying her he informed her about sumitra's evil intentions.shocking that sumitra shot her.vikrant telling vish that he can't live without her was touchy.shocking that vikrant decided to no himself.good that vish stopped him from killing himself and asked him to take revenge on sumitra for her

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 6 years ago

#37

mahir consoling bela was very emotional.shocking that vikrant killed sumitra.vikrant seeing vishaka n trying to hug her buy not able to do so was emotional. vish saying that his love is powerful than anything not death was a heart wrenching dialogue.guess it was her spirit n she disappeared.poor vikrant.humari adhuri song was perfect for the scene.the title of the story is also perfect for this FS.beautiful banner.

I love how you write beautiful short stories.it's better to write such short stories than writing long ffs dragging the story n finally discontinuing it