Hum Bane Tum Bane EDKL UPDATED Story Complete 26-2-2020 - Page 3

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Posted: 6 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Vrishthi04



Seriously It's my pleasure that my words have the captivity to encourage u this much.
I'm overwhelmed with this comment of urs.
It means alot
Thanks



Just keeping it real darling. 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Vrishthi04

Both the part of ur TS was amazing

Loved the naughty n mischievous bela, seriously want to see something like this in the show too
Good that here both of them understands each other and are friends first then Lovers
Can't wait for the next part to get more interesting

Srry for the late reply
Want you to cont. this as a FF
I know I'm being greedy but what can I do when u right so well


I might just continue this as a proper FF after i finish my current one. Even I felt it has the potential.But I can't commit right now.


But you wanting to read more is huge compliment. Thank you so much.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Viddhi01

Waah bhai waah Ash

Humne dudh kya maanga tune to puri ki puri kheer hi parosh di, kya explosive version hai ye swagrani ka loved loved loved itt..

Aur apne Mahir ji upps Mahir Sir as usual himachal se bhi ucchee vichaar, bestest protagonist of itv..

👏 You deserve an applause here



Thanks Viddhi. It was my pleasure to serve this tasty BeHiryani to all the loving BeHir fans. 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#24
Drunken n seducing bela is a treat u wrote
Dissection point of view se tagda part aate hi biwi ne machaya maahir ki zindagi me bawal
U can show bela as a classical dancer and maahir drunk seeing yula too close like vyom n bela stood in yesterday episode
Abhi to biwi ki pehli rasoi
Last but not the least dhamakedaar part 2
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Posted: 6 years ago
#25
It was fantastic update
Bela kitni mischievous h aur test bhi le rehi h
Now both love each other but hasn't expressed it yet
Mahirji toh ekdam sharif h yahan bhi😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Arshukaurkhushi

Drunken n seducing bela is a treat u wrote

Dissection point of view se tagda part aate hi biwi ne machaya maahir ki zindagi me bawal
U can show bela as a classical dancer and maahir drunk seeing yula too close like vyom n bela stood in yesterday episode
Abhi to biwi ki pehli rasoi
Last but not the least dhamakedaar part 2



Thanks Arshu. I will consider these two scenes of I turn it into a FF. Thanks for the suggestion. 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#27
Awesome update

Bela acting drunk

Poor mahir. This man has great self control 😆

Can't wait to read about their morning interaction

Bela will have to explain her behavior to Mahir. It's going to be fun to watch
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Posted: 6 years ago
#28


Thanks Manali!!! Welcome to the forum!!😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: komlika

Awesome update

Bela acting drunk

Poor mahir. This man has great self control 😆

Can't wait to read about their morning interaction

Bela will have to explain her behavior to Mahir. It's going to be fun to watch


Thanks Komlika!!! 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#30
TS means two shots...
I hope it was ten...
Then I hope it was thirteen...
Then I hope it was thirty two...
Then I hope it was thousands shots😆

Said this...to remind you that we are greedy when it comes to Behir! You fan! Me fan! Let's do a deal...keep on writing it till eternity and I will keep on reading😆😉

Jokes apart! Awesome! Beautiful! Simply wow!
Commenting first time on a ff...but I read each of them.
Just do one thing, you can post your stories on Wattpad too... that's a good environment...like here!

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