Episode 26: Confusion and hiccups

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beguiling

@beguiling

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

Did anyone else feel that episode was lacking something? Maybe it could have been better scripted, edited and a li'l more fast paced? Besides, why is that a single night has to witness so many events altogether? 😆

Bela chasing after Vish to speak to her was repeated thrice. And I really couldn't understand what was happening there. Then Vish suddenly started speaking about her love (one of the parts in the episode which was genuinely interesting but lo Bela guessed that Vish is in love with ACP 😆 )

I missed a few scenes in between so didn't see how Bela ended up falling from the terrace and how Mahir ended up searching for her there.

Much as I love the idea that Mahir and Bela kissed and even more of the fact that none made a big deal out of it (either it hasn't registered in Bela's mind yet that Mahir kissed her or she simply doesn't find it anything wrong or out of line ;) but am definitely no fan of them angles and close up shots, kinda takes away from the scene. But that's all we have to make do with I guess 😆

I loved the part after the kiss more how he tenderly holds her face and tells her - Aaj se tumhaare har sawaal ka yehi jawaab hoga agar nahin samajh aaya toh dohraaoon

Even the way he tells that he would rather fall with her than live without her was so nice. But I would rather have the long uninterrupted Bela-Mahir's scenes than a few of their scenes put in between here and there.

Besides I really can't wait to see who are these enemies (notice the word being used in plural) who Adi keeps bragging about They better be really as dangerous as Adi described them to be coz the show really needs a kickass vamp/villain.

The scene with Laila was cute (she looked so pretty too 😳) and what she told Bela actually made a lot of sense.

Hope tomorrow's episode is more fun to watch.

Edited by beguiling - 7 years ago

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Sunshine-1

@Sunshine-1

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

The episode was a little weirdly edited yes. I only liked watching the last part.

Those Aladdin/ Arabian ladies seem to have charmed Vish and she attacked Bela making her conscious. Adi brings her to the terrace, pushes her down and leaves. It was not shown how Mahir came to know Bela was there. That didn't go with the flow. After that Behir kiss 😳

I loved Laila's dress, so gorgeous

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minal

@minal11

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Posted: 7 years ago

Yes I felt the same.. It could have been better scripted..makers really need to stop this ! They lack the consistency in the characters too! For example Mahir almost confessed his feelings to Bela saying "main tumhare saath marna pasand karunga par tumhare Bina jina nahi" he even kissed her ( at least it looked so 😆) n yet Bela was like as if nothing has happened..here I feel they didn't executed/scripted the scene well,I mean it is not so difficult for any girl to understand what her husband is saying/doing..Mahir ji excelled in his job 😆 now it was Bela's turn n I expected her to say something related to kiss or jeena marna dialogue! There was no continuity in the scene..they did the same with Mahir getting poisoned n hug scene,mahir was worried for her before that scene but when Bela comes back after naagmani saving sequence he didn't ask her how she is now or what made her unconscious! Also Bela should have been in shock n should have started investigating about how he didn't get affected of her over poisonous body n how is he still alive !

Again Bela chasing Vish scene even I didn't get n so many dialogues,invested so much of time... Bela asked his name count less times but instead of telling the name vish knocked her out 😕

Also they wasted time in shan-Anu scenes..Shaan was all the time "just listen to me" Arree bhai ek hi sentence toh bolna hai "I don't want to marry u, u got some misunderstanding" uske liye itni dragging

Adi is hell annoying..I so want Bela to kill him ASAP but we know well is not going anywhere so soon!

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Talcum

@Talcum

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

The editing was bad. Plus there were so many scenes of Anu and 2rs gang . Bas 10 min ka Behir mila. Poora scene completely nahi dikhate hain koi bhi. Khichdi bana dete hain sab scenes ki.

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beguiling

@beguiling

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunshine-1
The episode was a little weirdly edited yes. I only liked watching the last part.

Those Aladdin/ Arabian ladies seem to have charmed Vish and she attacked Bela making her conscious. Adi brings her to the terrace, pushes her down and leaves. It was not shown how Mahir came to know Bela was there. That didn't go with the flow. After that Behir kiss 😳

I loved Laila's dress, so gorgeous

It only occurred to me after reading comments on the forum that Vish could have been hypnotized otherwise I thought she actually has a lover 😆

Yes Laila's dress was gorgeous indeed! 😳

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beguiling

@beguiling

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: minal11
Yes I felt the same.. It could have been better scripted..makers really need to stop this ! They lack the consistency in the characters too! For example Mahir almost confessed his feelings to Bela saying "main tumhare saath marna pasand karunga par tumhare Bina jina nahi" he even kissed her ( at least it looked so 😆) n yet Bela was like as if nothing has happened..here I feel they didn't executed/scripted the scene well,I mean it is not so difficult for any girl to understand what her husband is saying/doing..Mahir ji excelled in his job 😆 now it was Bela's turn n I expected her to say something related to kiss or jeena marna dialogue! There was no continuity in the scene..they did the same with Mahir getting poisoned n hug scene,mahir was worried for her before that scene but when Bela comes back after naagmani saving sequence he didn't ask her how she is now or what made her unconscious! Also Bela should have been in shock n should have started investigating about how he didn't get affected of her over poisonous body n how is he still alive !

Again Bela chasing Vish scene even I didn't get n so many dialogues,invested so much of time... Bela asked his name count less times but instead of telling the name vish knocked her out 😕

Also they wasted time in shan-Anu scenes..Shaan was all the time "just listen to me" Arree bhai ek hi sentence toh bolna hai "I don't want to marry u, u got some misunderstanding" uske liye itni dragging

Adi is hell annoying..I so want Bela to kill him ASAP but we know well is not going anywhere so soon!

Hmm actually I didn't mind that Bela was not shown overtly reacting after the kiss except that she went on a daze and kept staring at Mahir for a while, trying to process what just happened 😆

You're right they could have shown Bela asking NaagGuru that how is it that Mahir got saved. We can just say owing to Vish's deadline the very next day and the urgency to save Mahir, it just didn't occur to her to inquire about it.

If it's just one-two episodes can give lack of consistency a pass but hope they improvise and shape the story better from here on. And even though film promotions had nothing to do with the lack of coherence in tonight's episode, I really hope they aren't promoting any films for at least a month now 😆 A biweekly finite show should be more crisp with it's writing and editing. Hope tomorrow's episode is better and I don't have to repeat this line tomorrow also 😆

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tootyfrooty-

@tootyfrooty-

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: beguiling

I loved the part after the kiss more how he tenderly holds her face and tells her - Aaj se tumhaare har sawaal ka yehi jawaab hoga agar nahin samajh aaya toh dohraaoon

when did this happened online link mai nhi hai ye n i dint watch on tv...they show it on tv ?
maahir is like a super fast train he dont waste time in talking , he does action...i m impressed with ACP saab ,the ability to recognize person n his personality only by looking him is commendable 😆 he was absolutely correct about maahir ji" bahot hi bade nishanchi hai maahir ji"

Edited by tootyfrooty- - 7 years ago

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nikki.171

@nikki.171

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Posted: 7 years ago

Thank goodness I wasn't the only one. I felt like the episode was just really badly written. Every singly thing was abrupt and did not make sense at all. Whether it was the Stree thing in the beginning (?), the Arabian ladies, Vish's behaviour and achaanak mein jaaga hua pyaar, hitting Bela 😡, Adi taking her to the roof top, the fall and even BeHir's kiss today could not make up for the episode. Also how did Adi go from wanting to make Bela his gulaam to wanting to kill her real quick?

Keeping focus on BeHir. Honestly, they should have shown how Mahir got here. It just felt like he was put there for the sake of it. I get the bit where he attempts to save Bela. But seriously? Dialogues on feelings when you're dangling off a pipe and could probably fall to your death? Then Bela pushes them up and Mahir becoming content without getting an answer for how she fell and how they got pulled up...!? Bela screaming afterwards was the only bit that was logical and sane, followed by that kiss. But guessing from your post, us online viewers got cut off from that bit. I missed the post-kiss scene, will have to rewatch it.

And then Bela randomly goes to some shady place (pun intended) and that toowithout telling Mahir.

Maaan. Also Vish was super random.

The entire episode I was cringing and wondering what the hell was going on. Everything looked forced. After the amazing episode last week, I am seriously disappointed. Tomorrow will once again be waste in this Laila Majnu promotion. Ugh

Sorry this was such a negative rant. I am just so frustrated. Especially because I feel like the half-kiss thing was ruined because of the rest of the episode. I do hope BeHir so think back on that kiss later on.

P.S Bhai yeh kaisi "party" thi un logon ki haveli mein? Itni rukh sukhi, kuch kiya hi nahi. What the point even. Kuch bhi

Edited by nikki.171 - 7 years ago

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VARUNI2014

@VARUNI2014

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

What will bela think about that kiss ..she knows Mahir loves her .and she knows that something happen g to her emotionally ..so I thought she is taking that lip brushing with the flow just like hugs,even Mahir knows he loves her so what's there to think about even himself

Edited by VARUNI2014 - 7 years ago