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Part 2

( Sion Police Station... INTERROGATION ROOM )
" Speak up bas***d, under whose instructions ws this smuggling undertaken ", Aman started with interrogation.. But tht goon ws not budging ..and ws all shut...not giving out any information... Aman gave him a hard hit on his face but still no answer... Mahir ws standing behind leaning on the pillar and silently watching him.. After about 10 mins of interrogation by Aman, Mahir walked towards him..He asked others to move out.. " Ali , is ur name., rite ,? ", Mahir said walking towards him.. He stood in front of Ali and kept his one foot on the Chair and bent down... " Ali , do u knw Who I am ?? ", Mahir whispered in his ears,... Ali looked terrified by mere listening to his voice and nodded in no.. " I am an encounter specialist..and i ws suppose to kill u in tht raid.. ", Mahir said smirking at him.. Ali sensed the whole thing.. Mahir reload his gun and kept on Ali's forehead... " If u din speak up, i'll hav no option but to jus pulled the trigger and burst ur head...and no one will even question me.. ", Mahir said Looking straight in his eyes..conveying tht he is not lying and he do hav a potential to do such thing... Ali went cold.. " Sir, this smuggling ws carried by Sardar Saheeb , Mafia .. He has hiered us for this job... ", he said... " Wat else u knw abt him and his future plans ", Mahir asked... " After 3 months on December 20th, he is goin to conduct a major deal .. Smuggling teenage girls with cocaine , but i dunno the location...he is having some goons working for him in Datta Chawl but i dunno who thy r.. Please dnt kill me.. !! ", he said desperately pleading for his life.. His confession ws recorded and he ws sent to central jail...
( Police Headquarters)
" Officer Sehgal and Officer Singh, you both are selected for this new mission ", said the commissioner... " Yes Sir ", both said in Unison.. Commissioner continued " See , we will raid 3 months later.. And after all the information which we hav now, we will hav to get those goons at Datta Chawl for major info of the location... I want u both to stay at Datta Chawl for around 3 months as tenant undercover... And identify thm and keep track on their movements...dnt make any arrests and Encounters. ", looking at Mahir... " Are we clear, gentlemen.?", he concluded.. " Yes Sir. !", again in unison, saluting the commissioner...
Aman and Mahir are colleagues but they r best of Friends... Aman knws Mahir more emotionally thn Mahir knws himself.. " Hey bro, today ders a party organized by our seniors.. We r goin..and i am nt asking ...i am telling u.. ", Aman said in excitement... Mahir Doesn't like to socialise...but Mahir's mother has given Aman orders to make Mahir socialise , meet people especially girls... And today's party ws wer grls will b der..
( party location)
Mahir and Aman arrived at the party location... It ws an open ground beautifully decorated... As soon as Mahir entered the premises.. All the grls looked at him with jaw dropped.. He ws looking ravishing... Wearing a black suite complimenting his complexion, slight stubbles giving him all the manlyness desired by any woman... Simply Dropped dead Gorgeous.. Aman grinned at the.sight.. all grls looking at his friend with tongue out.. He ws never jealous of Mahir, coz he knws Mahir ws nt interested in desperate grls.. . " Dude, grls r checking u out, dnt disappoint thm by being rude ", Aman poked Mahir,.. " I dnt care Aman.. , i am nt here fr grls ok...commissioner called me personally fr some discussion .. U knw i ws not goin to come " , he said rudely... Aman jus nodded his head in yes , smiling.. Thy went to the commissioner... After all the greetings commissioner told thm abt their living arrangements and abt the location and told thm from whom to collect the keys to the room... " Mahir and Aman..All the Best. ", said Commissioner... " Dad, Lets hav dinnner ", said Anu... Aman and Mahir looked at her.. And she ws definitely looking at Mahir .. " Who r thy Dad ?? ", she asked... Before commissioner cud say.. Aman prompted.. " Hi, i am Inspector Aman Singh and He is Inspector Mahir Sehgal ", pointing at Kunj... Anu ws intensely gazing at Mahir ... As she ''ll jus eat him up... " Nyc, meeting u Mr. Mahir ", she said placing a hand fr handshake... Mahir too politely shook hands with her and faked a smile... While goin away she looked back at Mahir twice.. " Dude, she seems totally clean bowled. ", Aman chuckled.. Mahir ws jus whatever .. Tomorrow thy'll be moving to the Chawl...and Mahir's life ws goin to take a new turn and he totally being unaware...
" Bela Di .Bela Di... Wer r u ?? .", little Tamanna came shouting to Bela... Bela ws washing clothes in the bathroom.. " I am here.. Tamanna. ", Bela called..Tamanna slowly walked behind her and hugged her.. " Di .. I got u. ", she giggled. .. Tamanna is the one who can make her sad day into a brighter one jus with her smile and laughter... Bela washed hands wwiped thm and took Tamanna into her arms and came out frm the Bathroom.. " My little , kiddo... U seems to b very happy Today. .. Wats the reason...?? ". asked Bela smiling at Tamanna.. Tammu Giggled at her and gave her a kiss on her cheeks.. " Di.,.u knw i hav A Princess Doll and A Prince doll... My Princess dolls name is Bela...coz she is u.. And U knw Wats my Prince Doll name Is ???? ", Tammu asked with joy in her eyes... Bela was smiling at her nodded her head in No... Tammu kept her both hands on her head.. " Offoo Diduu... Its Mahir...my Prince Doll name is Mahir ", she said and strted laughing.. Bela still smiling at her hit her and nodding her head side ways.. " She thinks anything, nw who is Mahir now? ", she whispered to herself... But Smart Tammu heard her.. " Aaree Di, Mahir is our new Neighbour... Came i'll show u.. ", she strted dragging her hands ... " Neighbour ?? ", Mahir thot and stepped out with Tamanna.. She saw two boys talking to Jyoti Tai.. " Thank you Tai for helping us in renting this room.. , My name is Aman and this is my friend Mahir ", Aman said pointing at Mahir .. Listening to this Bela manage to flip her eyess to fully see the man Tammu was talking and getting so excited about... She looked at Mahir and at the same tym Mahir looked at Bela... Their eyes met.. And fr few seconds thy.Stared into each other...as if, His dark jet black eyes searching some light in her clear brown sparkling orbs... " Beta , this is Bela, she stys in this room.. ",... Bela joined her hands in Namasty to greet both Aman and Mahir and manged to smile mildly.. Aman greeted her wheras Mahir grabed keys frm Aman and went to open the lock of their room... AS he passed her to their room.., Bela's eyes immediately dropp ...and she went inside her room... Tammu went to her grandmother after thanking Mahir fr the chocolate...
" Bela!! ", Jyoti Tai called by knocking on her door.. Twinkle opened the door... " Bela, Listen dear... I have made this kheer for those boys..Can u go and give it thm.. I need to go down to Mrs. Atres house.. Der is some important meeting arranged.. ", said Tai.. Bela cn never say no to Jyoti tai.. She nodded her head in Yes and took.the bowl of Kheer frm tai's hand..." And ha , tell thm tht its the rule of our Chawl to welcome new members with Sweet dish... ", said Tai and went.. Bela smiled at her as tai is most humble human being.. Few.minutes later, Bela knocked Mahir' s door... Aman opened the door and saw Bela standing with the bowl in her hand.. ..Mahir came out frm kitchen to see who it ws ..whn he saw Bela standing at the door... " Wat the hell r u doing here ", Mahir raised his voice... Bela almost shivered listening to him... Aman also looked at Mahir... " I ..ii.. I jus came here to give this Khe..Kheer...tht...", she stammered..but before she cud complete.. " Wat,. , we din ask fr any kheer, and I knw Girls like u and wat u exactly here for... ", Mahir bluttered in most harsh ttone... Bela looked at him with widen eyes.. " Mahir ", Aman snapped at him... " Look, we dnt need any of ur kindness ok..and dnt dare step on our door again.. U get it.. Now leave...", Mahir again shouted... Tears welled up in Belas eyes listening to his sharp words,.she took off her eyees frm Mahir .. " Aman Sahhab , Wo Jyoti tai has made kheer to welcome you both in our Chawl.." she said handing over the bowl to Aman and ran away into her room and immediately closed her door.. Aman nodded.at Mahir in No.. " wat the Hell Mahir , y u hav to b so Heartless always... "..he Said And Closed the door...
Bela dropped down on the floor, clutching her hand on her.mouth so tht noise of her cry wnt reach her neighbors... Mahir's harsh words pierced her heart... "Gril like her..", kept repeating in her mind... He indirectly called her a wh**e.. She silently cried, sitting and decided to never cross his path... After abt an hour, Jyoti Tai knocked the door, Bela some hw gathered herself and cleaned her face.and opened the door... " Bela, u knw Mrs.Atres daughter in law is going to be delivering a baby tonight .. Thy r taking her to the hospital i'll b goin with thm.. Cn u look after Tamanna ? ",.Jyoti tai asked.. " Tai, y r u asking , off course i'll take care of her.. ", Bela said.and took sleepping Tammu frm Tai's arms.. " And btw, did u gave the kheer to those boys?" , Tai asked.. The whole blaming thing again snapped at Bela..her face fell at her question but she somehow managd to fake smile and nodded her head in.Yes... Tai.smiled.and went.. Belas eyes again moistened and she close the door. . she went in and placed Tammu on her bed..Mahir's harsh words killed her appetite..and she slept beside Tamnu hugging her.. ..
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice
Please update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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When will be the next update?. It was good to read the whole in a go so please update soon👏
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Very well written... waiting for d next part...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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I want the thread on the first page due to lots of spamming thread on the forum.
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Part 3

" Hello, Inspector Aman , Ali escaped while he ws been taken to central jail... His hiding location has been traced.. Commissioner has ordered Inspector Mahir for an encounter of Ali..", said sub inspector Shirke, And hung up... It ws Friday morning 5.00 am ... And it ws tym fr some Action... Mahir and Aman reached to the location... It ws an Old deserted Mill... Aman and Mahir hide tthemselves behind the rusted machines.. as thy made move towards the room on first floor... Some loud voices wer coming out frm tht room... " Ali, u betrayed us .. U dnt knw wat will happen whn Sadar Sahaab comes to knw about it.. ", said the other man in the room... " Sanju wat wud i do. Tht Encounter specialist had a Gun on my f**king Head..and he chased me like a Maniac whn i tried to runnaway. ..Listen i immediately need to go out of the City ", said Ali profusely sweating... " Not so early ", said Mahir.. Smashing the Door open with a solid Kick .. And Aiming the Gun Towards Ali... Ali had his Balls in his mouth as his eyes widened at Mahir's Sight . he immediately went to grab the gun.. Whn a bullet left frm Mahir Gun , making a Perfect hole thru Ali's Head later hiting the wall behind him.. .. Ali's lifeless body dashed on the ground...Sanju at tht very same moment grabed the gun and fired towards Mahir whn Aman pushed him and The bullet directly Hit Aman's arm..." Amannn ", Shouted Mahir... And Fired at Sanju Directly in his chest...killing him thn and der... " Shit,.Aman r u crazy ", Mahir said making Aman sit.. He immediately tied the handkerchief on Amans hand and rushed him to the Hospital... " We need this place to b.sealed... Two goons r down .. Ali who.escaped and his partner Sanju... Inspector Aman is injured.. On the way to Hospital ", Mahir reported the police headquarters while driving Aman to the Hospital...
It ws 8.00 am In the morning... Tammu ws still asleep , Bela ws doing her routine morning chores ... Jyoti Tai knocked.. " Bela, Bela... Please open the door. ". she said with some tension in her voice... With tht noise, Tammu woke up... Bela opened the door... " Bela, dnt waste time..go fast.. Hospital.. Emergency.. ", Jyoti tai said and Tammu came running to her.. Listening to her Bela's face turned pale... She immediately grabed her purse and went... she reached hospital, and almost ran inside towards the emergency ward..." Doctor, wat happened..is he alrite ?", she asked the doctor almost shivering with fear...she ws informed tht her brother had an epileptic attack in this grave condition and the clot in his brain moved causing damage... So thy need to strt with the operation immediately ... She ws asked to pay the second installment of Rs.10000 at the counter.. With God's grace she had decided to arrange the money by selling her mothers gold chain... Mahir ws sitting outside the same ward and he witnessed Bela in this situation... She ws sacred and shivering... " Doctor, i will deposit the money today itself .. Please go ahead with the operation. Please don't delay.. Please.. ", she almost begged to the doctor joining her hands.. Doctor ws considerate, he asked her to deposit money till 10pm ..She wiped her tears , took off the gold chain frm her neck... Looked at it once... " Sorry Maa. ", she whispered and ran outside the hospital... Mahir jus starred at the passage she went thru... Some kind off sadness took over him..watching those tears in her eyes..." Mr. Mahir ", doctor called... " Mr.Aman had to stay fr 24hrs in the hospital under observation,too much, .blood loss has occurred ", he said.. Mahir jus nodded his head in yes... His best friend, his close colleague..his brother frm another mother has risked his life for him.. He ws already feeling worst and now watching Bela like this added to it... After about 2 hrs she returned back... " Madam, doctor asked me to deposit the money.. Madam.. I cud manage only Rs.8000... Please take it.. I'll try to maange 2000 at the earliest.. Please Madam. ", Bela requested The Accountant at the cash Counter.. Listening to Bela's voice.. Mahir lifted his head up to look at her. She ws all drenched in sweat.., eyes swollen with tears still drooling.. " Bela, Doctor asked u to deposit 10k ..we cannot accept 8k..", she said plainly.. " Madam Please., doctor had given me tym till 10 pm..I'll try to get the money.,.please take this and strt off the operation... Please Madam.. I beg ..,please.. !!! ", she almost sobbbed.. Joining her hands.. Accountant asked her to relax and she confirmed with the doctor.. " Okay..go arrange the money. ", she said... Her brother ws taken to the Operation theatre.. She ws asked to wait outside.. She sat on the chair..crouching her legs .. " Frm wer will i arrange 2000. , Hey Bholenath ..Please Help ". she prayed... Mahir ws silently watching her frm the next door.. He ws feeling bad for her...
Operation got over in 8 hrs... Bela went to the doctor with eager eyes.. " Beta, your prayers worked.. He is Alrite. "., said doctor keeping his hand on her head... Bela smiled brightly with tears flowing through her eyes.. Looking her smile, automatically a mild smile crept on Mahir's face ... He decided to pay her remaining 2000.. Bela walked to the cash Counter...Mahir ws walking behind her. She did nt noticed him... " Madam , i'll come in 2hrs with the money ", she said the accountant... Few hrs before she ws thinking of hw to arrange fr the money...now she is confidently saying she'll get the money in 2 hrs.. Mahir felt wierd... She went out of the hospital...it ws 8.00 pm.. Out of curiosity Mahir followed her.. He dnt knw why he ws doing tht..but he ws... He saw her goin into the same bar whr fr the 1st tym he saw her... " She cn do anything fr money, again goin to tht filthy place.. Y should I pity her " he exclaimed in his mind.., feeling disgusted... He ws abt to return but something stopped him.. He felt like goin in and to see wat exactly is goin on.. He entered the bar.. It ws dark..with various neon lights decorated around the tables.,.walls. , with strong smell of alcohol lingering everywhere ... It ws nt the ugly one but a bit sophisticated with some decent crowd...but all alcoholics...He took a table to the extreme end which ws hardly visible to anyone.. The owner Shabbir Patel came on stage.. " Dear all, today our Favorite Bela Sharma will be singing today for us... that to on farmasihhh"... Bela made her way on the stage... Mahir looked at her frm top to bottom..he ws expecting her to come in some skimpy dress..but to his surprise, She ws wearing the same saree which she ws wearing in the hospital... Jus her hair wer properly done with clean face.. But her eyes still held up tht moistness..which ws visible in the blue spotlight... " Farmaishhh ", she asked to the crowd... Mahirs ears warmed up listening to the echo in her soft voice... Evryone strted suggesting. But one man stood and walked near the stage... Mahir ws calmly watching the scene..." I will give this bar 20000... U will sing my song.. ", said the drunkard.. " wat u want to listen Sir. ", she asked. " Bela, my heart is broken today.. I want to hear to a song which will make my Heart cry more and more ", he said and returned to his table.. toasting the glass to Bela.. Bela ws in similar emotional turmoil the whole day and this man wants to hear a song with Sadness.. As all the lights dimmed and the spotlight went on to Bela...Mahir Straighten up on his chair as she started with the human...
She strted...

Yaara...
Manzilein ruswa hain
Khoya hai raasta
Aaye le jaaye
Itni si ilteja
Ye meri zamaanat hai
Tu meri amaanat hai aa...

Mujhko iraade de
Kasamein de, waade de
Meri duaaon ke ishaaron ko sahaare de
Dil ko thikaane de naye bahaane de
Khabon ki barishon ko mausam ke paimane de
Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

Sun raha hai naa tu
Ro rahi hun main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro rahi hun main

Waqt bhi thehara hai
Kaise kyun ye huaa
Kaash tu aise aaye
Jaise koi duaa
Tu rooh ki raahat hai
Tu meri ibaadat hai

Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

Sun raha hai naa tu
Ro rahi hun main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro rahi hun main,,

As the song ended.. There ws a pin drop silence... Nobody ws whistling, clapping, shouting... Everyone jus looked at Bela with tears filled in der eyes... The pain in the Heart Of One ws Felt by everyone..and This ws Conveyed so beautifully by Bela in her voice and in her beautiful song.. Mahir took his hands towards this mouth and sighed... He ws looking straight at Bela... She stood there lowering her eyes... Tears jus wandering at the cornor of her eyes. Revolting to drop down... Mahir regretted his words badly.. He unknwning judged her.. She ws doing this for a reason not fr herself... He hurted her honour with his spiteful words.. But now he need to rectify himself... His mother always thought to be respectfull towards women.. But being a Very Good Looking Man...he only came across women who threw thmselves on him... Some trying to lure him to bed ...some tried to kiss him in public... He always distant himself frm women.. But Bela, she din even looked at him once...and wat he did... He went too ahead calling her a wh**e... Mahir got up frn his chair and went out. As the room filled with Applaud and praises fr Bela... Shabbir Patel handed Bela 5000 and blessed her...
(Hospital) ...
Bela deposited the money at the Counter. ... " Madam ek phone kar sakti hu ", she asked the accountant... " Okay ". Said the accountant and smiled at her... Bela dialed the number. " Jyoti Tai , Rahul's operation is done successfully... ", she informed her... Rahul and Jyoti Tai , Tamana r her only family ... " Mr. Mahir, Mr.Aman is now in conscious... U can meet him..", the nurse Informed Him.. Listening this Bela looked at Mahir...who ws starring at her... Her eyes widened at his sight..she remembered his words...her eyes immediately dropped...she had decided never to cross his path...she turned around and walked away...Mahir's hand immediately reached fr her.. He wanted to.apologize.. " Mr. Mahir..", nurse again called... He went to meet Aman.. " Hey. Bro... Hw r u feeling now ",.asked Mahir... " Better ", Aman said... " U shudn't hav done this Aman... Tht bullet ws aimed on me... If ever again u do like this. I"ll kill u. ". Mahir said smiling at Aman... Aman Chuckled... The sedatives wer high...soon he slept and Mahir sat outside... His eyes wer.searching Fr Bela... he saw her sitting outside the ward drinking water... " She must hungry ", he thot... He strted walking towards her whn she turned to look at him.. Looking at him, Bela again felt disgusted remembered his spiteful words... She strted looking here and der avoiding eye contact with him... " Bela Ji , u need to go.. We dnt allow anyone to stay here in the Hospital ",.nurse said.. Bela fliped her eyes looking at Nurse and thn looked at Mahir...immediately got up and Strted walking outside the hospital .. He understood her actions and he ws very much responsible fr thm...
Outside the Hospital Bela ws waiting fr Auto..it ws 11.00 pm ... There wer very few vehicles traveling... She waited fr abt 15 mins.. Mahir saw her waiting ..he thot to Atleast giv her lift till the chwal...but before he cud get to his bike... She strted walking.. Bela thot to walk all the way to the home... She ws walking in the streets... It ws dark ..and Very few ppl wer present... Some weird feeling strted gripping Bela...she wrapped her pallu on her shoulders to cover herself... .she ws passing frm a bhurje pav stall... Whn some roadside romeos strted passing cheap comments on Bela... She strted walking faster turning her face on other side... Thy strted following her.. The distance between thm strted reducing... Those three surrounded Bela.. " Hey, baby Wer r u going Beautiful... Take us with U... We'll hav Fun baby ", said one smiling evilly..." Please let me ...go..please... Please ", pleaded Bela... " U look very tasty... Let us taste u baby ", said the other licking his lips... The 3rd one tried to touch her..whn someone held his hand and twisted it almost breaking his bones... " Dare u ", voice said and punched him hard on his nose breaking the ridge... The other two tried to attack him...but soon rrgretted... Whn he Removed his belt and strted smashing thm with full power... " How Dare Think of Touching her ", he roared loudly...almost making their soul shiver... After beating thm black and blue...Mahir turned to look at Bela...she ws. Shivering with fear.. and tears drooling frm her eyes.. Mahir handed her his handkerchief... " R u ok ? ", he asked... She jus managed to nodd her head in yes... He went to his bike and stopped in front of her..." Sit, i'll drop u home ", he said... " Thank You,. But... ", but Before she completes... " Its very late.. And its not safe.. Please.. Sit ...", he said this tym almost ordering her to do as he said... She composed herself and very carefully sat behind him.. She made sure tht she shudn't touch him... Since his mind set regarding her is not Good... Mahir understood her apprehension..and very carefully drove offf... But before reaching the Chawl he stopped at some distance... " Get down here.., and walk...i'll wait here.. ", he said... Bela obliged... " Thank you fr helping ", she said , eyes lowered and strted walking... Mahir looked at her... As she walked... Away...


To Be Continued . ...

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Posted: 6 years ago
#17
Nice... waiting for d next part...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#18
Nice update dear
Why mahir has to shout on her.
He can't say like that to bela
Aman saved his life
He was ashamed for his rude behavior towards bela
Liked the way he protected her
Hope he will apologize soon
Waiting for next update soon
Thanks
Edited by asifiqbalsh - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#19
Beautiful story... completely hooked.. looking forward for an update..

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