Behind the bars - Amba and Dev OS

Amba: Aa gaye tum Dev, salakhon ke peeche mujhe dekhke tumhein sukoon mile honge Naa.

Dev : Amba !!!

Amba : I deserve this punishment for Ruining your life . Isliye mein aaj jail mein hoon....Mein bahut buri hoon Dev.

Dev : Amba, yeh box tumhare liye laaya hoon.

Amba: Kya hein iss mein Dev ?

Dev ; Please khol ke dekh lo. Please

Amba opened the box and surprised to see the ladoos .

Dev : Kal godh bharayi hein Chitra kee. Toh mein tumhein invite karne aaya hoon. Vidhi ne apne haathon se yeh ladoo banayi hein.

Amba : Vidhi nahi aayi Dev ?

Dev : Woh Chitra ke paas ruki hein......Aur

Amba: Aur kya Dev ?

Dev : Maa ne mana kiya Vidhi ko yahan aane se . Infact mein bhi yahan nahi aana chahta thaa. Par Chitra apni Amy Mausi ko yaad karke ro rahi thi .

Amba : Toh tum Chitra ke khatir mujhse Milne aayi ho Dev ?

Dev turned his face .

Amba: Kya mein itni buri hoon Dev kee tum Mera chehra tak dekhna nahi chahoge ?

Dev : Amba, maine police authority se baat kee hein..Kal ke function ke liye tum Ghar aa sakti ho.

Amba: Mujhe Muft mein koyi sympathy nahi chahiye Dev. Yeh ek din ke bahar nikalne se kuch badalne waala toh hein nahi ..... Chitra ko meri wish bhi mat Dena Dev. Kyunki mujh jaisi Ghar todne waali aurat ko koyi haq nahin kisi ko duwayein dene kaa.

Dev : Amba !!

Amba: Iss box ko le jawo Dev. Mein isse khaa nahi pawungi. Vidhi se kehna kee maine isse phenk diya aur bahut badtameezi se baat kee tumse. Kyunki mujh mein agar Zara see bhi badlaw dikhi toh Vidhi shayad khud mujhe yahan se bahar laane ki koshish karegi . Woh mein bilkul nahi chahti Dev. Yeh saza toh mere harqaton kaa phal hein. Mein Vidhi kee tarah acchi nahi hoon kee sab kuch bhulake apne dushman ko gale laga sakun. Mere andar ki aag zehreeli hein. Yahi sach hein, isliye mein nahi aaungi Dev. Ek din toh kya ek pal ke liye bhi bahar nahi aaungi Dev.

Dev : Lekin Chitra aur uske bacche

Amba: Nahin Dev nahin.. Uss bacche ko khabar tak nahi hona chahiye kee mein kaun hoon. Meri haathon mein gunahon ke lakeerein itne kheenche huye kee mein chahkar bhi Chitra ke sar pe haath rakhke aashirwad nahi rakh sakti...Der se hi sahi Chitra ko samajh mein aayi kee mein usse mohra banake uske saath khel rahi thi.

Dev : Amba !! Kya tum sach mein nahi aana chahogi ?

Amba ; Nahin !! Aur Dev dubara please mat aana .....Pandrah saal se mujhe tum yaad aati ho har Roz aur aaj bhi . Isse duniya chahe obsession kahe , pagalpan kahe yaa meri ziddh Par Amba Dev ko chahti thi, aaj bhi chahti hein aur hamesha chahegi . Mujhe ek din ke liye bahar laake mere andar ki aag ko aur jalawo mat Dev. Kya pata Mera yeh aag tujhpe aur Vidhi pe jalenge ?

Amba laughed crazily and Dev was shocked to see her like this

Dev : Amba !! Sambhalo khud ko.

Amba stared Dev and said : I don't deserve any sort of forgiveness, Dev. Bahut satayi hein maine tumhari Vidhi ko ....Tumhein bahut dard dee hein...... Yeh saza toh kam hein .....Tum jawo Dev yahan se Dev..Tum bahut acche ho Dev. Isliye tumhein Vidhi mili joh apne aap se zyada dusron ki parwah karte hein. Tum bhi aise ho naa.... Isliye tum mujhe nahi mile....Khair koyi baat nahi. Mein Amba hoon aur mein jisko shiddat se chaha unke saamne ro nahi sakti . Please leave Dev, please.

Amba turned her face and Dev walked away without looking her. Right after that Amba screamed Dev and burst her pain in tears

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Amba: Aa gaye tum Dev, salakhon ke peeche mujhe dekhke tumhein sukoon mile honge Naa.

Dev : Amba !!!

Amba : I deserve this punishment for Ruining your life . Isliye mein aaj jail mein hoon....Mein bahut buri hoon Dev.

Dev : Amba, yeh box tumhare liye laaya hoon.

Amba: Kya hein iss mein Dev ?

Dev ; Please khol ke dekh lo. Please

Amba opened the box and surprised to see the ladoos .

Dev : Kal godh bharayi hein Chitra kee. Toh mein tumhein invite karne aaya hoon. Vidhi ne apne haathon se yeh ladoo banayi hein.

Amba : Vidhi nahi aayi Dev ?

Dev : Woh Chitra ke paas ruki hein......Aur

Amba: Aur kya Dev ?

Dev : Maa ne mana kiya Vidhi ko yahan aane se . Infact mein bhi yahan nahi aana chahta thaa. Par Chitra apni Amy Mausi ko yaad karke ro rahi thi .

Amba : Toh tum Chitra ke khatir mujhse Milne aayi ho Dev ?

Dev turned his face .

Amba: Kya mein itni buri hoon Dev kee tum Mera chehra tak dekhna nahi chahoge ?

Dev : Amba, maine police authority se baat kee hein..Kal ke function ke liye tum Ghar aa sakti ho.

Amba: Mujhe Muft mein koyi sympathy nahi chahiye Dev. Yeh ek din ke bahar nikalne se kuch badalne waala toh hein nahi ..... Chitra ko meri wish bhi mat Dena Dev. Kyunki mujh jaisi Ghar todne waali aurat ko koyi haq nahin kisi ko duwayein dene kaa.

Dev : Amba !!

Amba: Iss box ko le jawo Dev. Mein isse khaa nahi pawungi. Vidhi se kehna kee maine isse phenk diya aur bahut badtameezi se baat kee tumse. Kyunki mujh mein agar Zara see bhi badlaw dikhi toh Vidhi shayad khud mujhe yahan se bahar laane ki koshish karegi . Woh mein bilkul nahi chahti Dev. Yeh saza toh mere harqaton kaa phal hein. Mein Vidhi kee tarah acchi nahi hoon kee sab kuch bhulake apne dushman ko gale laga sakun. Mere andar ki aag zehreeli hein. Yahi sach hein, isliye mein nahi aaungi Dev. Ek din toh kya ek pal ke liye bhi bahar nahi aaungi Dev.

Dev : Lekin Chitra aur uske bacche

Amba: Nahin Dev nahin.. Uss bacche ko khabar tak nahi hona chahiye kee mein kaun hoon. Meri haathon mein gunahon ke lakeerein itne kheenche huye kee mein chahkar bhi Chitra ke sar pe haath rakhke aashirwad nahi rakh sakti...Der se hi sahi Chitra ko samajh mein aayi kee mein usse mohra banake uske saath khel rahi thi.

Dev : Amba !! Kya tum sach mein nahi aana chahogi ?

Amba ; Nahin !! Aur Dev dubara please mat aana .....Pandrah saal se mujhe tum yaad aati ho har Roz aur aaj bhi . Isse duniya chahe obsession kahe , pagalpan kahe yaa meri ziddh Par Amba Dev ko chahti thi, aaj bhi chahti hein aur hamesha chahegi . Mujhe ek din ke liye bahar laake mere andar ki aag ko aur jalawo mat Dev. Kya pata Mera yeh aag tujhpe aur Vidhi pe jalenge ?

Amba laughed crazily and Dev was shocked to see her like this

Dev : Amba !! Sambhalo khud ko.

Amba stared Dev and said : I don't deserve any sort of forgiveness, Dev. Bahut satayi hein maine tumhari Vidhi ko ....Tumhein bahut dard dee hein...... Yeh saza toh kam hein .....Tum jawo Dev yahan se Dev..Tum bahut acche ho Dev. Isliye tumhein Vidhi mili joh apne aap se zyada dusron ki parwah karte hein. Tum bhi aise ho naa.... Isliye tum mujhe nahi mile....Khair koyi baat nahi. Mein Amba hoon aur mein jisko shiddat se chaha unke saamne ro nahi sakti . Please leave Dev, please.

Amba turned her face and Dev walked away without looking her. Right after that Amba screamed Dev and burst her pain in tears

Very nice writeup😊👍

I think Dev must be feeling very bad after this conversation...

Dev's POV

Kaash itni maturity tum ne pehle dikhati hoti Amba.. To aaj yeh naubat nahi aati.. Mujhe vidhi ki gyaan vaani na sunni padthi na hi uske gande se jhumke dekhne padthe Or naahi Hamla ka hamla jhelna padtha..

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Abb Amba show chodke jaa rahi hein toh socha kee jail mein Kaash kuch aise conversation dikhaye aur uski character ko thodi relevance mile . That's why I wrote this. Sabse zyada maza mujhe Amba kee dialogues likhne mein hi milti hein kyunki woh likhna mushkil hein. ViDev pe toh bahut likh chuki hoon lekin Amba pe zyada likhi nahi mein...I hope makers give a meaningful end to the track of Amba rather than replacing some one else

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A different perspective of Amba. You've showed it in a very different way, concluding her character in a good way. It's a good take. 👏

Thank you so much 😊 I wish they should give a meaningful end to Amba

Loved this ❤️❤️, very nice write up, and it felt good to read a fresh story.

Thank you very much 😊