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Posted: 2 years ago
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This is a continuation of today’s episode, right there they left off with the foreheads touching.

Dev: Dev kaho na. Jab sir kehti ho toh lagta hai humare beech mein doori hai

Vidhi: Koshish toh kar rahi hoon, jaldi hi yeh doori bhi khatam ho jayega

D: ache se koshish karna (Dev winks)

Vidhi shyly tries not to avert her gaze. Internally she is saying to herself Vidhi tumhe ek step lena hi padega. When Dev starts leaning towards her, she also leans forward and their foreheads touch.

D: ek baat kahin, bura toh nahi lagega?

V: kahiye na, aapki koi baat mujhe bura nahi legaga.

D: mujhe aise lagta hai ki jabse maine tumko apni dil ki baat batayi, par kahan ki humare beech kuch nahi ho sakta, tumne us baat ko seriously le liya hai. You literally stopped your train there and haven’t realized now we are married.

Dev continues

D: Tum mujhse khule aam mere office room mein aake flirt karti thi. Kahan chali gayi woh Vidhi? Mujhe acha laga ki Tum mere parivar ko apna maan kar, unke pareshani mein pareshani ho. Lekin yeh bhi yaad rakhne ki, humare Shaadi ko hue 10 din bhi nahi hue. Mujhe Tum mere se door bhaga rahi ho waise lagne laga hai. Ho sakta hai main galat hoon aur Tum sirf nervous ho about getting physical, lekin mujhse baat karo Vidhi.

Vidhi by now has tears flowing down her cheeks. She starts thinking have I been ignoring Dev sir since our marriage? Dev sir nahi Dev. I am not ignoring him, but may be I am making him feel less important in my life.

Dev sees the tears and wipes with his fingers and pulls her close to him.

D: I am sorry Vidhi. I didn’t mean to hurt you.

V: aapne mujhe hurt nahi Kiya. Acha hua ki aaj apne yeh baat chedi mujhse. Kyunki, main is ghar mein sab ko importance de rahi hoon, aapse zyada. Main is ghar mein hoon aapki wajah se.

D: Mera matlab yeh nahi tha Vidhi.

V: main jaanti hoon, par aap jab Dubai gaye the, us samay ghar ka situation bhi Maine aapse chupaya, yeh sochke ki main handle kar sakti Hoon.

D: mujhe pata tha kuch hua tha aur Tum mujhse chuparahi thi.

Vidhi goes on to narrate everything that happened with Priya and Mausi including the party where she wasn’t even introduced and what happened with her parents.

Dev gets very angry on Priya and Mausi.

D: this is not acceptable. Maa jaanti hai?

V: maa, mere parents ke saath jo hua itna hi pata hai unko, baaki kuch Maine share nahi Kiya, unka tabiyat bhi toh theek nahi thi.

Dev doesn’t say anything, knowing Vidhi will ask him to promise not to say anything to them. He just holds her tightly.

D: ab jab tumne mere saath saari baatein share kiya hai tumhe kaise lag Raha hai?

V: main bahut relieved feel kar rahi hoon.

D: good.

V: ek baat kahoon?

D: kaho

V: aap office wahi purane suits pehen ke jaate hai, bore nahi lagta hai aapko?

D: acha, toh suit mein main boring lagta hu Tumhe?

V: boring nahi, par you look so handsome in regular wear. Main jaanti hoon aap company ke CEO hai, par rule bhi aap hi set karte hai toh rule change bhi aap hi kar sakte ho

D: Socha Hoon. Ab main kuch maang sakta hoon?

V: ji

D: mana nahi karogi?

V: aapko mana kyun karungi?

D: ek kiss kar sakta hoon?

Vidhi shyly looks down and nods her head.

Dev slowly lifts her head and without wasting anytime seals her lips with his leaving Vidhi completely shocked, but slowly she relaxes as well and runs her fingers through his hair.


A lot of empty gaps in the episode which was bothering me, so I addressed the for my satisfaction. Hope you guys like it.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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You said it on point .. dev repeating his suits , hope makers understand this . Those suits n white shirts are definitely boring now

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Posted: 2 years ago
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You literally said everything..

His suits seems boring now.. 😴

And yes , shadi se pehle zyda maza tha.. khule aam flirting krte the dono.. or ab.. tensions hain k khatam hone ka naam ni le rhi.. or na hi makers kuch cute moments dikha rhe hain..

I feel aik episode dekh k fans jo tweets krte hain next episode me makers 1 videv moment dal dete hain🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️

But you describe it so well... they need to leave all the things behind & have a fresh start for a new life.. ❤️❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago
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So well written.... Shaadi se pehle yeh log jyada romance karte the... Shasdi ke baad to pata hai chal kya Raha hai

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Wow what an amazing writeup yaar. Dev and Vidhi are so realistic here and I am glad you portrayed the little details also with much efforts. Hats off yaar. And jaise hi time milegi mein tumhare FF padungi ..Too good 👍

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Bhut hi ache ache issues uthati ho tum. Serial ki hr ek missing cheez ko highlight kr diya. 👏clapping

And at last the kiss 💋dev ne mauke ka fayda finally uthaya🤣

Keep it up. Do write more✍️

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: maddy124

You literally said everything..

His suits seems boring now.. 😴

And yes , shadi se pehle zyda maza tha.. khule aam flirting krte the dono.. or ab.. tensions hain k khatam hone ka naam ni le rhi.. or na hi makers kuch cute moments dikha rhe hain..

I feel aik episode dekh k fans jo tweets krte hain next episode me makers 1 videv moment dal dete hain🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️

But you describe it so well... they need to leave all the things behind & have a fresh start for a new life.. ❤️❤️


I feel he same

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: S_anand

You said it on point .. dev repeating his suits , hope makers understand this . Those suits n white shirts are definitely boring now

so true, even i find dev's clothes boring now. feelings khatam ho rhi meri toh ab dev ko same kapdon mein dekh ke daily. Whenever deepshikha comes live next, i will comment this to iqbal. 😆🤔

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