Obsession vs Love : ViDev, Amba Ss - Part 1,2, 3, 4 - Page 3

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Dev ne mauke pe chauka maark amba ki band bjadi🤣now amba k true colors aayenge but voto hm serial mein bhi dekh hi chuke h yham bs use dev ki life se hmesha k liye bahar kro taki videv sukoon mein jiyen


Waah ji vidhi ne flying kiss bhi dedi dev ko bilkul mujhpe gyi hai❤️🤣

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On teri yeh Dev to nada dusht hai 😉. Parvekdam straight forward no confusion types. Yeh income tax Ka Kya issue hai? Reh gaya. Please aage bhi jaldi update karo na.

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Thanks a lot 😀. Will update by evening yaar

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Part 3

Dev: Aage mat badhna Amba, mujhe gussa mat dilawon.

Amba : Iss middle class ladki kee yeh himmat kee yeh mere saamne tumhara haath pakadte rahe Dev ? Aur mein kya tamasha dekhti rahun ?

Vidhi : Haath isliye pakdi hun kyunki Dev Sir zindagi bhar mere haath dhaamne ka vaada kiya hein Amba mam.

Amba: Yeh kya boli Jaa rahi hein Dev ,?

Dev : Yeh sach hai Amba. Mein Vidhi se pyaar karta hoon aur abb iss sach ko sabke saamne kehne jaa raha hun.

Amba: Dev ? Tum hosh mein toh ho ? Hamari sagayi hone waali hein Dev.

Dev : Nahi hoga sagayi. Kuch galat naa ho jaaye isliye uss se pehle sach kaa saamne aana bahut zaruri hein. Isliye Aaj ke baad tum mujhse aur Vidhi se door raho. Mujhe pata hein Amba kee tumne kya kya kiya hein Vidhi ke sath. Woh poster, woh modelling ke dress yahan tak kee uske ghar ke demolition tak tumhari haath hein. Obsession mein tum saari haddhein paar kar rahi ho Amba. Yeh galat hein. Tumhara koyi haq nahi hein kisi ko bhi mentally torture karne kaa.

Amba : Dev !! Tum sirf mere ho , agar tum mere nahi ho sakte toh kisi aur ke hote huye mein nahi dekh sakti. Yes I am obsessed in love and it's you Dev. Sirf tum Dev.

Dev : Obsession aur pyaar donon mein fark hein Amba . Joh pyaar barbaadi chahte hein dusre kee usse pyaar kaa naam dekar pyaar ko neecha mat dikhawo Amba.

Amba : Das saal kee intezaar, meri feelings kaa koyi mol nahi hein?

Vidhi : Mam aapki pyaar iktarafa hein, one sided. Pehle jab ehsas huwa tab Mera bhi yahi iktarafa pyaar thi. Par mein aapki tarah Dev sir ko haasil karne kee koshish nahi kee. Unke family members ko emotionally black mail karke unse apni baat manwane kee koshish nahi kee. Pata hein kyun Mam ? Kyunki mam choti he sahi mujh mein dil hein aur uss dil mein Dev sir ke liye bahut izzaf hein, pyaar hein. Mein unki khushiyan chahti hun, unke pariwar kee khushiyan chahti hoon. Isliye jab aap aaye Dev Sir ke sath tab apni juzzbaaton ko ,dard ko dil mein hee dabakar maine swagat kee aapki apne ghar mein. Maine kabhi apne aap ko Dev sir pe thopa nahi mam . Par himmat zarur kee apni Dil kee sachi feelings ko batane kee. Pehle jawab nahin mili aur mujhe laga kee shayad unke man mein aisa kuch hein nahin. Aapki tarah aise tede mede raste se apni chahat ko puri karne kee koshish maine kabhi nahi kee. Aur naa hi kabhi karungi. Dev sir ne Milapin maa ke aangan mein mujhse apne pyaar kaa izhaar Kiya hein, zindagi bhar mere sath nibhane kaa Vaada kiya hein. Yeh mere liye bahut garv kee baat hein kee unhone yeh sach badi himmat dikhakar mayya ke saamne bata Dee. Aur aaj unhone aapko bhi yeh dikha Dee kee unhone aapko kabhi chaha hi nahi. Isliye please mam aap iss sach ko dekhiye aur baaton ko samajhne kee koshish keejiye.

Amba : Tumhari wajah se Dev mujhse door hein, chodungi nahi Tumhein Vidhi

"Rukiye Amy Mausi"

Amba turned back and shocked to see Chitra, Vikram and a team of police.

Dev : Tumhara khel khatam ho chuka hein Amba. Chitra ne mujhe batayi kee tumhare kehne pe kaise Vikram ne black money ko tumhare ghar ke paas waali purane haweli mein chupa thi. Tumhein Jaan boochkar bula di yahan taaki income tax waale aaram se raid kar sake.

Amba : Yeh sab kya hein Vikram? Maine mana kiya tha Naa Chitra ko isski khabar nahi pahunchi chahiye, phir usse pata kaise chala?

Chitra : Mein wahi pe thii Amy Mausi, aapki saari baatein suni aur record bhi keee. Mausi aapne business ko sahi dhang se nahi kee. Aapke paapa ke guzarne ke baad Dev Bhai ne aapki company ke saath tie kee taaki aapki business aage badhe .Aur aap Star Communications kee Managing Director bani aur kuch saal baad Vikram aapke company ke factory kee Supervisor bani . Phir aage badhte hi aap success paane ke liye shortcuts apnane lagi jisse Dev Bhai ko saqt nafrat hein. Dev Bhai ne mujhe batayi kee kaise aapne apni factory se quality products bhejne ke bajay milawati products Raichand company ke factories ko bheji aur Bhai ne tie ko end kiya. Phir aapke aur bhai ke professional bonding sirf ek FM project pe raha jiss mein Vidhi aur Arjun joh Bhai ke company kee staff hein badi immandari se kee. Aapne bina ijazat liye morphed pictures use karke Vidhi ko mentally hurt kee. Bhai ne uss mamle ko suljha Diya , aapke saath joh bache huye business deals the woh bhi cancel Kiya. Par aap apni manipulation kabhi chodi nahi. Mausi aap unn underworld ke smugglers ke saath apne secret staff ko bheje aur unki maal ko star Communications ke factories mein products ke beech chupa Lee , phir unse paise bhi Lee. Aapko dar nahi laga Mausi kee police aap tak pahunche?

Vikram: Kaafi police waalon ko currency notes ke bade bade bundles dikhakar unhein khareed kar chuka hein Amy Maasi... Iss kaam mein maine unka saath diya hein, directly Maasi aise illegal deals nahi karti thi , mein jaata thaa.

Dev : Toh tumhara abroad kaa job ? Kya woh jhoot tha ?

Vikram : Maine fake documents bana li taaki Raichands ko vishwas ho jaaye kee mein waqai mein abroad hoon. Sach toh yeh hai kee mein abb tak Mumbai mein thaa....Maasi ke diye huye instructions ke mutabik mein underworld ke Dons se deals karta raha. Ek badi offer lag gaye haath mein,jiss se kaafi zyada black money mile, joh dollars mein hein. Indian currency mein uski keemat lagbhag 500 crores se bhi zyada honge ... Par unn last deal hote time wahan koyi spy thaa jiske zariye khabar Indore ke police tak pahunchi thi.

Chitra : Aur maine Mausi aur Vikram ke saare conversation sun liye. Actually mein Amy Mausi ko lene gayi thi factory mein. Taaki engagement ke liye designer dresses kee baat kar sakun. Par wahan gayi toh yeh sab sunke mein hairan ho gayi. Bhai itni samajh toh mujh mein hein kee bina proof ke police koyi kadam nahi udayenge. Toh maine uss conversation kaa video recording kee aur usse bhej diya. Aur police ko photage bhi mil chuki hein Vikram aur kuch staff haweli mein jab black money chupa rahe the.

Amba: Tum toh raat bhar mere sath Mehta house mein thi , aaj subah bhi. Toh haweli kee photage ?

Dev : Haweli mein photage mere staff ne lagaye, Arjun aur Rishabh ne. Jaise hi sab kuch record huye donon ne mujhe khabar kar dee. Aur mein seedhe commissioner of police se milke yahan aaya hun. Waise resort toh nahi jail zarur book kee Amba jahan pe baithke tum apni gunahon ko ginti raho.Aur Vikram bhi iss galti mein shaamil hein tumhare saath. Isliye tum donon ko arrest milenge

Amba: Accha taufa diya Dev !!! Mein deserve karti hoon yeh. Shayad immandari se tumhari dil jeetne kee koshish kee toh mein.....

Amba looked Vidhi

Amba : Tum Jeet gayi Vidhi , Mubarak ho....

Vidhi : Mam aap

Amba : Bas !!! Kuch mat kaho. Dev ithe saare daag dikhaye mere saamne tum, Mera asli roop bhi dikha di. Par saare jhoot ke bahar , saare manipulations se hatkar Amba kaa ek dil hein....Jiss mein feelings hai sirf Dev ke liye aur mein aise dubara haasil karne kee koshish nahi kar sakti tumhein. Mujhe pata hein abb kismat kya likhe hein zindagi mein. Par salakhon ke peeche baithne par gunahon ke saath mujhe tum bhi bahut yaad awogi Dev. Yeh Mera haq hai aur iss haq ko mujhse mat cheenna. I will miss you Dev.

Inspector: You are under arrest, Miss Amba Mehta. Please co-operate with us..

Vikram and Amba's hands were tied with handcuffs.

Chitra : I am sorry Vikram.

Vikram: Sach kee Jeet aakhir ho jaati hai. Mujhe bura nahi laga , tumhein abb tak dhoke mein rakhi Chitra. If possible please mujhe maaf karna.

Chitra's eyes drenched in tears.

Amba : Mein koyi maafi nahi maangugi..Amba aag ke chingari jaisi hein aur abb joh saza woh bhugatne waali hai uske woh haqdaar hein. Yeh saza khud usne hi chuni hein isliye uski kaale kartootein maafi ke liye laayak nahi hein. Ek favour chahti hoon Chitra.

Chitra : Kahiye Amy Mausi

Amba : Meri company puri tarah se badnaam ho chuki hein. Kya tum usse phir se khadi karogi ? Acche tareeke se usse sambhalogi ? Mere hand bag mein office kee keys hein. Aaj se woh tumhari hein....

Vikram: Apna khayal rakhna Chitra.

And the police vehicles went away. Chitra cried bitterly.

Dev : Chitra!!!

Chitra: Bhai

Chitra hugged Dev emotionally.

Chitra : Mujhe maaf kar de Bhai. Mein Amy Mausi kee baaton ko blindly trust karke aapko force kee, jabki woh sahi aurat nahi hein . I am so heartless .

Dev : Chitra, meri bacchi. Tumhare dil bahut bada hein. Iss waqt tum par kya beet rahi hein yeh mein samajh sakta hun . Apni sasural waalon ko unke galtiyon ke liye jail bhejna choti baat nahi hai. Bahut himmat chahiye meri bacchi aur tujh mein woh himmat kaafi hein. Mein lawyer se baat karunga kam se kam Vikram ko toh ..

Chitra : Nahi Bhai. Aap aisa kuch nahi karoge. He deserves it. And trust me mein iss faisle se dukhi zarur hun par sahi faisla liya hein iss baat kee khushi bhi hein Bhai. Aur mere saath Raichand pariwar hein, mushkil ghadi mein mera pillar banke mere bade bhai Dev Raichand hein mere saath. Mujhe aur kya chahiye?

Chitra wiped her tears.

Chitra ; Mein maa se milne jaa rahi hoon. Chalti hoon

Dev : Take care Chitra.

Chitra smiles and went away.

Vidhi : Sir !!

Dev : Vidhi !!

Vidhi : Sir aap toh ro rahe hai.

Dev : Chitra kee shaadi huye zyada waqt bhi nahi huye . Aur yeh sab....

Vidhi : Sir aap apne aap ko doshi mat tehrayiye. Aaj nahi toh kal yeh sach bahar aane hi waale thaa. Chitra mam ko abb dukh hoga. Par sochiye sir bahut aage jaake unhein yeh baat pata chali toh woh kaise bardaasht karegj sab kuch ? .

Dev : Yeh baat toh sahi hein Vidhi.

Vidhi: Sir aap bacchon se miliye. Mann halka ho jayega.

Dev nodded his head.

Dev and Vidhi walked forward to meet kids. Seeing them kids came and rounded them.

" Hamare chocolates kahan hein Dev uncle? Pichli baar gudiya laane kee vaada kee Vidhi didi , hey kahan gudiya? "

Dev : Sab milenge.

They started distributing chocolates and toys. Kids became super happy by getting it. After spending time with kids while walking towards the exit Dev looked Vidhi

Dev : Vidhi yeh aakhiri chocolate bacha hai

Vidhi : Sir sabko barabar de diye . Isska kya karein

Dev : Mmhhh....Tum khaa lo isse Pyaari Vidhi

Vidhi : Nahi nahi, aap khaayiye naa Pyaare Dev Sir

Dev : Vidhi tum choti ho , isliye yeh

Vidhi made puppy faces.

Vidhi : Yeh kya baat huyi ? Chocolate sab log khaa sakte hein...iss mein choti badi umra ki Seema kyun laaye aap ? Hum log iss Seema se bahar aa rahe hain. Aap phir se ....

Suddenly Dev placed chocolate at her mouth.

Dev : Kitna bolti ho. Ek kaam karte hain donon saath mein khaate hein.

Now chocolate's one edge was at Dev's mouth and other was at Vidhi's mouth. Slowly both of them ate their parts and finally their lips came closer. Dev gently passed fingers at her sweet lips.

Dev : Mujhe nahi pata thaa kee chocolate khaane se itna fayde ho sakte hain. Abb toh mujhe pyaas lagi hein, tumhari iss sweet lips ke honey ko peene kee.

Before Dev could do it Vidhi suddenly kept her index finger at his lips...

Vidhi: Sir yeh Baalghar hai. Yahan bacche hein

Dev : Aur tumhare iss Pyaare bacche kaa kya Kare jisse badi pyaas lagi hein

Vidhi: Aap mera boss hein ....Yeh sab aapko ....

Dev whispered in her ear ; Aapko kya ?

Vidhi : Mujhe nahi pata.

Vidhi shyily kept her face inside his overcoat and smiled. Dev hugged her back with a smile.

Suddenly Dev's phone rang.

Vidhi : Sir phone udayiye.

Dev : Iss phone ko bhi abhi bajna thaa kya?

Dev pick the call.

Priya : Hello bhaisaab,aap jaldi ghar aayiyega. Mummy ji ko kuch important baat karni hein..Chitra bhi hein yahan....

Dev : Priya sab theek hei naa ?

Priya : Aap please aayiye jaldi.

Priya cuts the call.

Vidhi : Sir aap ko ghar jaana chahiye. Kya pata wahan pe koyi problem ho ?

Dev : Haan Vidhi.

Vidhi : Sir mein bhi chalun aapke saath?

Dev : Tum wahan

Vidhi : Sir saath mein mushkilein saamne karne kaa Vaada kiya hein. Mujhe lagta hein kee mujhe bhi aani chahiye aapke sath

Dev : Theek hai, gaadi mein baito.

They goes to Raichand house.

To be continued 😄😄😄😄

Toh doston how was this episode? Amba abb rukawat ke liye nahi aayegi .... Hope Maddy you are liking the way I bought true face of Amba here. I really like Chitra, but I miss the Bhai - behan bond and this episode I was able to showcase them . Please keep reading. One more part is left and with that this story will be ending. Thanks to all

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Nicely written .

I liked the amba's part very much pls next part bhi jaldi likh dena 😊

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Thanks a lot 😊. Will try to write ✍️ soon

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Part 4

ViDev reached Raichand house

Dev : Maa sab theek hein naa ?

Dev looked Chitra.

Vidhi : Pranam Satyawati mam

Satyawati: Accha huwa tum bhi aa gayi Vidhi !! Dev ko batane hi waala thaa kee tumhein bhi lekar aaye.

Dev and Vidhi looked each other in confusion.

Satya: Awo tum donon baitho.

ViDev took their seats.

Satyawati: Dev, Amba kaa asli chehra sabke saamne aa chuke hein. Afsos kee baat hein kee hamare Daamad Vikram bhi ..

Satya looked Chitra.

Chitra : Maa, mein theek hun. Aur joh hota Hein acche ke liye hota hai. Dev Bhai kee zindagi bach gayi.

Abhimanyu: Haan Bhai. Mein bhi kahin Naa kahin aapki marzi jaane Bina force kar raha thaa, I am sorry.

Priya: You are right Abhi. Bhaisaab ko theek se unki baat kehne kaa mauka nahin diya. I am really sorry.

Dev : Joh beet gaye, mere khayal se usse wahi khatam karna theek hein..Aage kya karna hein humein wahi sochna hein.

Satywati: Chitra bacchi nahin hein Dev. Woh samjhegi aur aage bhi badhegi. Filhal tumhari zindagi kaa kya hein ?

Dev ,: Maa mera kya hein ? Mein aage bhi zimmedariyan nibhata rahunga.

Satyawati: Aur Vidhi ?

Dev gets shocked

Satyawati: Abb tu baatein chupane laga mujhse ? Mujhe tumhari room se ek khat mila jiss mein tumne apni mann kee baat likhi. Aur abb Chitra bhi batayi kee jab woh aayi toh kaise Abba saamne aa gayi Vidhi ko nuksan pahunchane ke liye aur tumne kaise usse sabak sikha di..... Hum sabko pata chal chuka hein kee tum Vidhi ko chahte ho

Dev : Maa woh actually..

Vidhi: Mam iss mein Dev sir kee koyi galti nahi hein...Mein.....

Satyawati: Mein apne bete se baat kar rahi hun. Beech mein mat bolo Vidhi

Vidhi : Ji

Satyawati: Dev , kya tumhein Vidhi pasand hein?

Baat ko ghoomawo mat, seedhe saaf saaf kaho meri aankhon mein aankhein daalke kaho

Dev looked Satyawati and said : Haan Maa.

Satyawati: Tum jaante ho naa iss rishtey kaa anjam kuch bhi ho sakte hein?

Dev : Ji bilkul

Satyawati: Kya zindagi bhar tum pyaar kar pawogi Vidhi ko ?

Dev : Haan. Chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye pyaar toh nahi mitega. Milapini maa ke saamne maine vaada kiya hein kee mein hamesha Vidhi kaa hath dhaamunga.

Satyawati : Aur tumhari kya faisla hein Vidhi ?

Vidhi : Mein bhi Dev sir ke saath khadi rahungi har uss muskhil mein aur khushiyon mein bhi. Maine bhi Milapini maa ke saamne yeh vaada kee Mam.

Satyawati: Toh tum donon ek baat kaan kholkar sun lo, mein tum donon ke iss faisle se bahut khush hoon. Mujhe yeh rishta manzur hein.....

Dev and Vidhi smiled and looked each other with excitement.

Priya : Mummy ji abb aap muskurayiye Naa kab se aise hasi ko rokne kee koshish kee hein.

Satyawati smiled and looked ViDev

Satyawati: Dev, beta tumhari choice mujhe pasand hein....Kuch kehne kee zarurat nahi hein. Jahan tum khade ho wahan ek bar tumhare Paapa Shantanu ji bhi khade the , aur Vidhi kee tarah mein bhi ... Isliye mein samajh sakti hoon. Mein bahut khush hoon

She hugged ViDev

Dev : Thank you Maa

Vidhi : Thank you Mam

Abhimanyu: Dev Bhai , aapki iss faisle se bahut khush hoon.

Priya : Haan Bhai sab. Humein bhi apne galtiyon kaa ehsas ho chuke hein. Mummy ji bata rahi thi age is just a number. Uske aage bhi bahut kuch hote hai. And that's true love.

Abhimanyu: Joh aap aur Vidhi ek dusre ko karte hein . Hum koyi sawal nahi karenge iss decision ko lekar.

Chitra: Abb tak Dev Bhai ne hamare liye bahut saari sacrifice kee hein.. Finally Bhai ne apni zindagi ke baare mein socha aur ek aise Humsafar ko chuna joh bhai ko acche se samajh sakti hein. Trust me Bhai I am so so happy for you.

Dev : Thanks to all. Mere pariwar ne meri feelings ko samjha aur mujhe kuch ....kehna hi nahi pada ...

Abhi : Bhai !!!

Dev : Emotional kar diya mujhe

Dev hugged Abhi and Chitra. Vidhi smiled with teary eyes.

Vidhi : Mujhe yeh haq dene ke liye bahut bahut thank you aap sabko. Waise Satyawati mam woh khat hein kahan ?

Satyawati; Jahan pahunchna thaa wahan pahunch chuke hein.

Vidhi: Mein samjhi nahin mam

Satyawati: Dev gaadi nikalo. Hum sab jaa rahe hein Milapini mayya ke darshan ke liye.

Vidhi : Mam woh

Satyawati; Kyun tumhein koyi problem hai?

Vidhi : Nahin par ....yeh baat...

Satyawati : Dev waqt nahi hai gawane kaa

Dev looked Vidhi. Both of their faces got tensed.

After some time they reached Vidhi's house.

Hari Prasad: Bimla chai laogi kee nahi ? Ghar mein Dev saab aur unke pariwar waale aaye hein.

Hari Prasad removed his glasses..Vidhi saw a paper in his hand and looked Dev.

Dev nodded his head. Vidhi feels worried. She rushed inside when Bimla was bringing tea ☕ for every one.

Vidhi : Maa , aap log naraaz mat ho jaayiye.

Bimla: Tujhe kuch batane kee zarurat nahi hai.

Tere Paapa joh faisa karenge wahi sabko maanne padenge.

Vidhi thought: Paapa kuch aisa naa bole jisse sunke Dev Sir aur unki family ko bura lage, Hey maa Milapini aap hi raksha karna.

Satyawati: Umeed hein aap woh khat pad chuke hein. Amba ke baare mein bhi aapko abb tak pata chal chuka hein.

Hari Prasad; Haan Arjun ne bataya sab kuch. Mujhe laga hamari tute ghar ko jod Rahi thi par sach toh yeh hein kee wahi zimmedar hai joh bhi Tod fod huwa hai.

Bimla: Vidhi ko neecha dikhane ke liye kya kya nahi kiya uss aurat ne ? Sab pata chal chuke hein.

Satyawati: Hun yahan beete huye kadwi baatein dohrane nahi aaye. Unhein saza mil chuke hein..Abb bacchon kee aage ki zindagi ke baare mein sochne kaa waqt hein

Dev : Maa aap jaldbaazi kar rahi hein. Please samjhiye

Hariprasad: Dev Saab aapki maa ko pura haq hein bolne ka. Satyawati ji , mein aise rishtey kabhi sweekar nahi kar sakta jiss mein umra ke faasle zyada ho. Ladka theen chaar saal bade ho toh mujhe dikkat nahi hein. Hamari biradari mein bhi yahi riwaaz hein. Par ek sach aur bhi hein Vidhi ko sahi raste dikhane waale, usko acche se samajhne waala admi Dev saab se badhkar koyi aur nahin hein.

Bimla: Hum Jahan bhi talash kar lun Vidhi ke liye Dev ji se acche koyi insaan ko nahi dhoond paayenge.

Hariprasad: Par hamari bacchi abhi 21 saal kee hein..Dev Khud usse aage padne ke liye MBA ke form dilwa di. Toh kya hum rishtey kee baat uski MBA ke pura hone ke baad kar sakte hein? Abhi shaadi mein itni jaldbaazi kyun ?

Vidhi and Dev looked each other emotionally

Satyawati: Dev, Vidhi tum donon kya sochte ho ?

Vidhi; Mam hum sirf pyaar kaa izhaar Kiya, zyada kuch socha nahi. Abhi baat shaadi...

Dev : Shaadi Tak pahunchenge yeh kabhi socha hi nahi Maa. Humein bhi waqt chahiye, ek dusre ke baare mein jaanne ke, samajhne kee

Satyawati: Beta Tera umra beete jaa rahe hein

Vidhi : Hum toh umra ki Seema se bahar hokar pyaar ki koyi seema naa ho uss juzzbaat tak pahunchi hein . Aap sab ne humein samjha yeh hum donon ke liye bahut badi baat hein.

Hari Prasad: Vidhi , sachai se dil kee baatein likhe hein Dev saab ne. Mein chahkar bhi mana nahi kar sakte

Bimla: Maa Milapini ke aarti tum donon saath mein kee jagrate waale din.. Shayad mayya ki bhi yahi marzi hogi ...

Vidhi ; Maa Milapini ne toh Dev Sir ko phool dekar kab kaa rasta dikha chuke hein Maa.

Hari Prasad: Toh phir iss se badi khushi kee baat aur kya ho sakti hein?

Bimla: Vidhi tumhari iss faisle se tere paapa aur mein bahut khush hein .

Hariprasad: Biradari, samaj toh kuch din bolenge, par Zindagi toh aap donon hi bitayenge. Agar saath rahenge toh sab kuch sehne kee himmat aa jaayenge. Mein wakai mein khush hoon.

Vidhi hugged HP and Bimla

Bimla: Chaliye iss khushi mein mayya kee shukriya karte hein.

ViDev did arti together and smiled.

Vidhi : Priya Mam, Abhimanyu Sir aap log bhi aarti keejiye

Satyawati: Haan Priya. Maa toh rishton ko sambhalti hai.

Priya and Abhi did Arti together.

Abhimanyu: Maa agar aap ijaazat de toh ek baat kahun ?

Satyawati; Bolo na beta, ijazat kyun mang rahe ho?

Priya : Rehne do Abhi. Acchi lamhe mein nahi chahti kee meri wajah se kisi kee mood kharab ho jaaye

Chitra : Bhabhi hum sab ek family hein. I think joh bhi hein usse share karna chahiye.

Vidhi : Bilkul sahi kaha aapne.

Satyawati: Batawo Naa Abhi

Abhimanyu: Maa ek multinational company se call letter aayi hein Priya ke liye. Yeh uska dream job hai. Kya aap usse job karne kee permission denge?

Priya: Kyun Abhi ? Mummy ji abb naraz hogi

Satyawati: Shantanu ji ne Kasam mujhse Lee aur abb tak mein usse imandari se nibha rahi hun . Par waqt ke sath kuch badlaw laana bhi zaruri hein. Bheeshma pitamah apne ek vaade ko nibhate nibhate puri zindagi uljhanon mein bitaye. Mein nahin chahti kee abb koyi uljhan aaye hum par, hamare pariwar par. Abhi tumhari baat bilkul sahi hein. Priya jaa sakti hein naukri ke liye.

Priya: Kya sach mein mummy ji?

Satyawati: Haan ek shart par, baar baar uff touchy touchy kehna bandh karo. Tabhi permission dungi. Yeh abb bilkul nahi aani chahiye.

Priya: Of course, Thanks Mummyji.

Priya hugged Satyawati. All laughed.

Priya: Abhi, pehli baar aapne mere liye kuch kaha. Mera saath diya. Mujhe kaafi accha laga Abhi.

Abhi : Mujhe bahut pehle hi karna chahiye tha. Sorry thoda late ho gaya.

Bimla: Arrey der toh Vidhi ne kee. Naa mere aur inki shaadi der se hote , naa yeh der se paida hoti ....

Vidhi: Maa kuch bhi

Satyawati: Accha toh abb hum chalte hein.

Hari Prasad and Bimla folded their hands and said : Pranam

Vidhi and Dev shared hide and seek eyelocks.

Priya: Uff, sorry Mummy ji bhaisahab toh bade mushkil se Vidhi ko goor rahe hein.

Abhimanyu: Ek romantic date kee planning kee honge, hey Naa?

Dev smiled and looked down

Chitra : Awwwwww 🥰 Bhai kaise cute see smile kar rahe hein, ekdum bacche jaise

Bimla: Yahan pe kaun zyada sharma rahe hein Vidhi toh pehle se hi bahut zyada muskura rahi hein.....Laal laal ho chuki hein uski gaal.

Hari Prasad: Toh hum rok kyun rahe hein? Inn donon ko woh kya kehte hein

Priya: Date !!

Hari Prasad: Joh bhi ho bhejte hain

Dev : Aap bhi !!

Hari Prasad and Bimla smiled.

Vidhi: Hum bas paas mein Khaogali hi jaayenge, hey Naa Dev Sir..

Dev ; Waise bhi aise waise kuch hein nahi ....toh ..chale Vidhi

Vidhi ; Haan Pyaa. .. Matlab Dev Sir

Satyawati: Jab tumhari shadi ho jayegi tab bhi tum Dev ko Dev sir hee bulawogi kya ?

Priya: Aap bhi kya leg pulling kee hein aane waali bahu kee , Mummy ji

Dev : Aisi koyi baat nahi. Vidhi samajhdar hein. And sab seekhegi.

Abhi : Aur Dev Sir hein naa usse guide karne ke liye

Usse cabin mein bulayenge aur acche se samjhayenge jaise uss din kaise samjha rahe the, mere aate hi donon topic change kee.

Chitra : Abb bas bhi karo, mere bhai apni sweet bhabhi ke sath Jaa rahe hain. Tum sab jealous ho ...Bhai aap jaayiye aur enjoy keejiye.

Dev: Thanks Chitra, bachane ke liye.

Satyawati: Haath pakadke chalna donon ......

Vidhi : Ji

ViDev held each other's hands and walked towards Khaogali. Their family members looked them with a smile.

At Khaogali

Vidhi: Pyaare Dev Sir

Dev : Bolo Pyaari Vidhi

Vidhi ; Mmhh ....kya lenge aap ?

Dev : Pyaas

Vidhi : Raita mein, yaa sabji mein

Dev : Kya tumhein samajh mein nahi aayi

Vidhi : Nahin

Dev took her to a corner. He kept his hands at her shoulders and looked her.

Dev : Toh mein tumhein apne style mein samjha dunga. Woh pyaas joh Baalghar se lagi thi , abb ruk nahi raha hein.

Vidhi: Filhal hum gol gappe khaate hein. Aaj toh hamari pyaar kee anniversary hein.

Dev : Woh toh hein Vidhi.

ViDev had some street food and they sipped tea so.. Afterwards both of them helped each other in washing their hands . They both share a

sweet eye lock .

Dev : Vidhi ek baar phir se yahan aake kaafi accha laga mujhe

Vidhi : Mujhe bhi .

Dev : Kabhi socha nahi tha kee hamare family waale iss ke liye raazi ho jaayenge ?

Vidhi ; Aakhir toh pariwar hein, kab tak roothenge , aur rooth bhi liye toh hum mana lenge, hey Naa ?

Dev : Haan Vidhi. Abb toh tumhein thoda serious bhi hona hein..M.B. A karni hein, aage badhni hein

Vidhi: Sir aap guide karenge naa mujhe ?

Dev : Mein hamesha rahunga Vidhi. Mehnat dugni honge , office ke kaam aur padhai. Kar pawogi sab kuch ?

Vidhi : Aap mere saath hein naa toh phir dekhiyega kaise mein ekdum bhannat sab kuch Karti hun

Vidhi and Dev walked towards a garden area.

Dev plucked rose 🌹 from there and bend at his own knees.

Dev : Isss gulab ke phool ke saath kaante bhi bhare honge zindagi mein, kya tum iss gulab ko sambhal logi ?

Vidhi smiled and took the rose 🌹 from him

Vidhi ; Kaanton kaa kya hein, woh toh har utar chadaw mein honge zindagi ke. Par aapne toh mujhe apna dil diya, aaj yeh phool dekar mujhe aur kareeb bana liya.

Dev ; Vidhi , will you be my soulmate?

Vidhi; I am yours. Toh phir yeh sawal hi kyun ?

Dev stood up and hugged Vidhi tightly.

Dev : Mein abb tumhare bina jee nahi sakta Vidhi

Vidhi; Mein bhi

Dev : Kya mein apni pyaas ko mita sakta hun ? Kya mujhe ijaazat hai inn hoton ko choone kaa ? Kya mujhe ijaazat hai inn baahon mein khud ko jodne kaa ? Kya mujhe ijaazat hai tumhari god mein bacche ki tarah letne kaa ?

Vidhi : Ijaazat hein Dev Sir. Mein aapki ho chuki hoon .

Dev : Kya abb bhi yeh Sir bulana zaruri hein?

Vidhi ; Pata nahi. Mujhe waqt chahiye sir. Abhi mein itni bhi badi nahi hoon kee ek hi jhatke mein aapko aapke naam se bula sakun.

Dev : Par tum toh pyaar se gale laga li ek hi jhatke mein naa jaane kitne baar.

Vidhi: Woh hamesha dungi Sir. Pyaar mein koyi Seema nahi hogi.

Dev gently kissed her forehead, eyes and came towards her ears. He whispered at her ears ; Mein bhi tumhara ho chuka hoon Vidhi. He gently kissed at her earlobes. Vidhi and Dev sat down and Dev gently lie down at her lap. He looked Vidhi .

Vidhi : Aise kyun dekh rahe ho aap ?

Dev : Dekhne do mujhe inn aankhon ko jiss mein mere liye khoob pyaar bhara hein.

Vidhi waved her fingers at his hair and blowed them. Dev smiled like a kid. She kissed at his forehead and held his face at her chest just like a mom helding her baby. She then kissed at his eyes and pinched his cheeks.

Dev : Aah itne zor se kyun ?

Vidhi : Kyunki aaap bahut cute ho

Dev : Aur tum ho meri bahut pyaari bacchi jaisi nanhi see Vidhi

Dev rounded his arms towards her body by leaning over her and both of them slowly locked their lips with full of passion. They kissed each other and hugged each other long and tickled each other's belly with fun. They have crossed all the barriers, boundaries and what made them intimate was the zest of love only.


So Maddy and others , this story has come to an end. I didn't show Chaachi, other office staff and all those dramas here. I just wanted to show some thing different and I tried this consent of families here. I felt these families play a pivotal role in their relationship and tried this. Hope you all liked it. And you all liked the way of portraying Amba. Because I don't want to show much negativity and ring drama. She got punishment for her deeds which I think it was needed. Hope you all liked it , if not also please say it. Expecting your support and reviews it's me your Revutty signing off this story. Indeed in the battle Love win over obsession. Thanks a lot for taking your time and reading this one.






































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