Waqt aur Shabd in Dev's letter - my lil poem

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Kudos! Kya likha hai!

You can write poetry too! Wow!

This was really good!

Felt so good to read Dev's feeling in poetry for the first time. It was so refreshing!

Iqbal ki awaaz mein kya lagta yeh poem! Kaash!

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Arrey waah , aaj toh mere favourite authors dil khush kar rahe hein. Anupreeya ki letter pad li, phir aapki joh Os padi aur abb yeh poetry....So good ...Woh Ruk- rukkar - atak atakkar bolne waale Dev ji ke andaaz mein ek Kavitha ...Kitni sundar shabdon mein ek - ek juzzbaat ko maala jaisi pirokar banayi hein.... It's super good yaar. Aur banati jawo waqt Milne par. Loved it yaar. Specially when you mentioned kahan se laati itni himmat? Truely striking part.....So amazing yaar.Lady Dev abb Poetess Dev bhi bani hein

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Wonderfully written...keep it up ❤❤❤

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Yaar kaun hon aap sab... Kahan se aate ho... Itne ache se kisi ki emotions ko kaise depict kr skte ho yaar..


I am again speechless... Seriously for me this is out of the world... Loved it

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Wow

Perfect poetry very meaningful

Bahut talent hai aap mein 👏

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Posted: 2 years ago
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This is just soo soo beautiful and touching ❤️❤️ bohot pyara likha hai❤️

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Originally posted by: Anupreeya

Kudos! Kya likha hai!

You can write poetry too! Wow!

This was really good!

Felt so good to read Dev's feeling in poetry for the first time. It was so refreshing!

Iqbal ki awaaz mein kya lagta yeh poem! Kaash!

thank you so much...

i dont know myself i can write or not but jab emotions air intensity milte hai to nikal aata hai sab kuch.. aur wo waqt aur shabd walk line to subah ghum rahi thi dimag me.. to uska to kuch na kuch likhna to tha hi.. poem aayegi ye nahi socha tha..


Iqbal ki awaz ko hi imagine karke likha hai... in same tone he said that "shabd aur waqt saath nahi dete" line...


thanks again..🤗

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Revutty

Arrey waah , aaj toh mere favourite authors dil khush kar rahe hein. Anupreeya ki letter pad li, phir aapki joh Os padi aur abb yeh poetry....So good ...Woh Ruk- rukkar - atak atakkar bolne waale Dev ji ke andaaz mein ek Kavitha ...Kitni sundar shabdon mein ek - ek juzzbaat ko maala jaisi pirokar banayi hein.... It's super good yaar. Aur banati jawo waqt Milne par. Loved it yaar. Specially when you mentioned kahan se laati itni himmat? Truely striking part.....So amazing yaar.Lady Dev abb Poetess Dev bhi bani hein

thank you ji... 🤗

Dev as character has so much in him that uske liye jitna likho, jo bhi likho kam lagta hai... i can write pages for each n every line he speaks... but time ki kami padti hai

he is such a deeply written character and essayed by Iqbal with even more depth and need careful dissection..


thanks once again❤️

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Originally posted by: banhi2021

Wonderfully written...keep it up ❤❤❤

thank you very much❤️❤️

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