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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
Totally enjoyed it. Looking forward to the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujji0609

Wow it's awesome Nikita...❤️beautifully defined Surya's scenario and feelings... 😍 also loved the playful element of Karan-Janvi...😆 and Surya admiring that and wanting a sister...😍.also the way Surya was happy seeing Shivlali smiling... 😍and Diya's feelings were beautifully defined that she wanted to join them but couldn't because she was in disguise... 😊awww loved the way you ended...❤️ waiting to see Surya-Diya relationship...😍continue soon...🤗

yup nikita...sry saw dis jus nw...t was awwwsome dear.really even am waiting surya ko uska behen diya mein nazar aaye!!!!!!!!11

accha hothe...kaash show mein bhi aisa hotha!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujji0609

Wow it's awesome Nikita...❤️beautifully defined Surya's scenario and feelings... 😍 also loved the playful element of Karan-Janvi...😆 and Surya admiring that and wanting a sister...😍.also the way Surya was happy seeing Shivlali smiling... 😍and Diya's feelings were beautifully defined that she wanted to join them but couldn't because she was in disguise... 😊awww loved the way you ended...❤️ waiting to see Surya-Diya relationship...😍continue soon...🤗

thanx suji🤗...ur comment just made my day yaar...thnx yaar...i think it wld b awesome to see dia-surya cute jiju saali scenes...they would be pretty cool...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: vrashali10

so nice ff mjht_one specially dinner scene i loved it. please continue.

thank u so much
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: heeyyy

wowowowowowowowow!! its simplya amazing i loved it!

i am really keen on the gigu sali relationship of diya and surya...its going to be so cute...just like jhanvi and shaurya were all the time!


thanx preeti...rite? i knw jhanvi and shaurya would just muck around and have fun...i hope they show some scenes like that between surya and dia
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: koolkallu

yup nikita...sry saw dis jus nw...t was awwwsome dear.really even am waiting surya ko uska behen diya mein nazar aaye!!!!!!!!11

accha hothe...kaash show mein bhi aisa hotha!!!!!!!!!

thank you...nd no need to say srry
thank u so much for finding the time to comment
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter Update 3

'Surya please let go….someone will see.'

'Then let them…I couldn't give less jhanvi….and is not like I am committing a crime I am just having some romance time with my sweet wifey.' Surya pulled jhanvi closer to his body. While jhanvi tried to get out of his grip but no matter how hard she tried she could now free herself form surya's grip.

"Romance…aur tum….since when?'…

'since today? Surya said slowly tracing jhanvi's lip with his finger tip.

Jhanvi gasped with just the sensation of that one touch of surya.

'Surya koi aa jaayege, jhanvi whispered

'then let them.' Surya put his jhanvi's face with one of his hand while his other hand strongly gripped jhanvi's waist, he started coming close to her face…their lips were barely touching when jhanvi pushed him away and he fell on the bed…..jhanvi was about to rush out of the room when she felt something tug her back…

She turned around to see surya holding her wrist. 'Surya…'

He pulled her back and she landed on top of him.

'Mrs Jhanvi surya rantej' aaj aap ko koi nahi baachha sakta…muhaaa(gives an evil laugh)'

He tugs jhanvi closer to his body…he was about to try and kiss her again when a knock on the door stopped them ….

'Oh crap….surya chodiye mujhe.'

'NOPE!'

'surya please'

'Not until you kiss me'

'Surya please don't behave like a kid someone's at the door and…..'

'I dn't give….kiss then I let you go' surya said thinking that jhanvi would never have the guts to do what he just asked her to do.

Jhanvi quickly looks at Surya disbelievingly…sadoo kahin ka….

Surya was still thinking abt hw jhanvi would never do what he had just asked but Jhanvi quickly placed a kiss on his cheek catching him by surprise and using that moment to get out of surya's arms and go to the door.

Surya still stayed on the bed thinking if what just happened was a dream or something…

Jhanvi laughed at him and opened the door to find Karan bhaiya there.

'Karan bhaiya app'

'hain main…do you have any idea how long it has been since I have been knocking…anyway if both u have stopped romancing then can u please come with me.'

Jhanvi blushed thinking how did karan bhaiya knw what they were doing. Even surya seemed to be startled.

Karan laughs LOL…look at ur face it seems like u two were actually having some lovely shovel moments.

Jhanvi quickly realised that karan didn't knw anything he was just joking, even though he didn't realise how right he was.

'but bhaiya kahan jaana hai'

Karan:'woh kya hai naa di_' he suddenly stopped mid track remembering that surya didn't know the truth.

Jhanvi understood her brother's sudden quietness. She turns to surya who is looking at them confusingly."surya I will be back….why dn't u just go to sleep'.

Jhanvi left with Karan leaving a confused Surya alone.

'what was karan bhaiya talking about?' surya thought. 'there is definitely something going on. I guess I will just wait for jhanvi to come back.

Scene shifts to dia…who is upstairs sitting by herself staring at the stars.

Dia to herself: I wish I didn't have to dress like a guy then I could enjoy my relationship with karan bhaiya and jhanvi, but cause of these stupid circumstances I can't even call my siblings my own. A tear escaped her and rolled down her cheek.

'Boo!'

"ahhh" dia screamed and turned around to see karan and jhanvi laughing their heads off.

'I hate you two, you scared the crap out of me. I am never going to talk to any of you again.'

Ammaji came upstairs where jhanvi,dia and karan were," yeh cheekna ki aawaj kiski thi. Ke hua?'

Karan,'ammaji kuch nahi ,woh hum log thodi si masti kar rahe hai tha.'

Ammaji saw dia standing behind karan and knew that karan and jhanvi were just trying to make her happy, so she walked back to her room without saying anything.

Jhanvi to dia,"kya yaar tu humse baat kyun nahi karengi."

'kyunki tum dono ne abhi meri jaan nikaldi thi.' Said dia

"hum…aur kisis ki jaan nikal de,,,,,aisa hoi nahi sakta. Hum dono toh kitna innocent aur sweet log hai," said karan making a puppy face towards dia.

'sweet and you two never.' Dia said and turned around to face the otherway.

Karan and jhanvi start singing

Phoolon ka taaron ka, sabaka kehana hai
Ek hazaaron mein meri behanaa hai
Sari, umar, hamen sang rehana hai..

Ye na jaana duniya ne tu hai kyoN udaas,
Terii pyaasii aankhon mein pyaar ki hai pyaas,
Aa mere paas aa, kah jo kehana hai, ek hazaaron ...
Jab se merii aaNkhon se ho gayi tu door
Tab se sare jiivan ke sapane hain choor
AaNkhon mein neend naa, man mein chaina hai,

ek hazaaron mien meri behna hai

Dekho hum tum dono hain ek Daalii ke phool
Main na bhuulaa tuu kaise mujhako gai bhool
Aa mere paas aa, keh jo bhi kehanaa hai, ek hazaaron ...

Jiivan ke dukhon se, yuuN Darate nahiin hain
Aise bachake sach se guzarate nahiin hain
Sukh kii hai chaah to, dukh bhii sahanaa hai,

Phoolon ka taaron ka, sabaka kehana hai
Ek hazaaron mein meri behanaa hai
Sari, umar, hamen sang rehana hai..

Karan pulls both of his sisters together in hug, they stay like that for what might have seemed like ages.

*********************

Surya is sitting in his room waiting for jhanvi but she still hasn't come so he decides to get up and see where she is. He walks outside and hears singing coming from upstairs he decides to go see what is happening.

Meanwhile karan, jhanvi and dia are still hugging.

Surya is walking up the stairs when he suddenly knocks a pot making a loud noise.

The noise startles the trio hugging and they realise someone's coming upstairs so they quickly break out of their hug.

Surya comes upstarirs to find jhanvi and karan and shivam(dia) standing there awkwardly.

'woh, sorry I was just wondering where jhanvi was and I heard voices so I came upstairs.'

'koi baat nahi surya,tum chaho toh jhanvi ko leke jaa sakte ho ab. You must have missing her a lot for the past 15 minutes. Probably couldn't go to sleep without her.' Karan said cheekily

'nahi aaisi koi baath nahi hai,' surya said blushing.

'Karan bhaiya, I will kill you for sure later.'jhanvi whispered barely enough just so karan and dia could hear her.

'chal ab jai, tere pyare sajna tujhe lene aaye hai,' karan said.

Jhanvi gave him the I will kill u later look and walked off with surya.

'Dia, surya kitna badal gaaya hai na. phele who kaisa tha aur ab kaisa hai.'

'hmmm…..so toh hai karan bhaiya. Dono kitne cute lagte hai ek saath. Ek dam made for each other.'

'tub hi soja, bahut raat ho gayi hai. Aur waise tanisha bhi mera intejaar kar rahi hogi.'

'kya baat hai aaj toh hawa mein romance hi romance hai.'

Karan blushed.

Dia laughed seeing he brother blush for the first time.

She gave him a quick goodnight hug and walked off to go to sleep.

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Jhanvi opens the door to her bedroom and is shocked to find a path full of flowers to the bed and a few candles lit in the room. She turned around to look at surya who was leaning against the door smiling.

'Yeh saab, tumne mera liye kiya ?' said jhanvi

'nahi yeh toh meine padosi ki biwi ke liye kiya hai."

Jhanvi mouth dropped, tumhe toh aachi tara se romantic bhi bana nahi aata.

Mujhe romance bahut aachi tara se aata hai.lekin sayad thume nahi aata. Bata yeh kaisa sawal hai ki yeh tumne mere liye kiya hai. Of course meine thumare liye hi room sajaya hai.

Jhanvi was speechless because surya was right, what had she been thinking when she blurted that out. She walked off to take her jewellery off, leaving surya behind to close the door.

Jhnavi was taking her necklace off when she felt surya's finger ouch her fingers. She gazed up into the mirror to be met with surya dark brown eyes. They had an eyelock for what may have seemed like ages. Jhanvi quickly coming back to reality pulled her fingers away from surya's finger shying the touch and gaze of surya upon her.

Surya smiled seeing jhanvi be shy since he has never seen her like this.

In lamhon ke daaman mein
Pakiza se riste hain
Koi kalma mohabat ka
Dohrate farishte hain

He took off her necklace and started kissing her nape making his to her lips. he was about to press his lips against hers when her hand came in between.

Khamosh si hai zameen hairaan sa falak hai
Ek noor hi noor sa ab aasman talak hai

He took her hand and started pressing soft kisses on it and then he took her kangans/bangles off

Nagmein hi nagmein hai jagti soti fizaon mein
Husn hai sari adaon mein
Ishq hai jaise hawaon mein

Jhanvi turned away shyly and was about to walk when she felt something tug her saree. She turned around to find the end of her saree in surya's hand. Surya walked closer wrapping the saree around his hand. He placed one of his hands on jhanvi's waist and with the other he lightly shifted jhanvi her to one side and started placind delicate kisses on her back. Jhanvi gasped. She turned around to face surya and gazed right in his eyes, running one of her hand into his hair, while surya placed one of his hand to support jhanvi's face, leaning in to place a soft but passionate kiss on jhanvi's lips. Jhanvi instantly responded to his kiss and kissed him back with more passion and love.

Kaise yeh ishq hai
Kaisa yeh khwab hai
Kaise jazbaat ka umda salab hai
Din badle raatein badli, baathein badli
Jeene ke aandaz hi badlein ha

Their kiss got more and more passionate. They stopped after ages to take their breathes. In those few seconds surya lifted her and carried her to their bed.

In lamhon ke daaman mein
Pakiza se riste hain
Koi kalma mohabat ka
Dohrate farishte hain

Samay ne yeh kya kiya
Badal di hai kaya
Tumhe mene paa liye
Mujhe tumne paya

Mile dekho aise hai hum
ke do sur ho jaise madham
koi jyada na koi kaam
Kise aag mein
Ke prem aag mein
Jalte dono hi the tan bhi hai maan bhi
Maan bhi hai tan bhi
Tan bhi hai maan bhi
Maan bhi hai tan bhi

They started kissing again. Jhanvi tugged at surya hair as he moved his hand down her jawline to her neck.

Mere khwaabon ke is gulistaan mein
Tumse hi tum bahar chai hai
Phoolon mein rang mere the lekin
In mein khusboon tumhi se aaye hai

Kyon hai yeh arzoo
Kyon hai yeh zustzu
Kyon dil bechain hai
Kyon dil betaab hai

He looked up to ask jhanvi's approval to go on and once he had gotten that approval, he moved his lips to her neck and then to her collarbone kissing her softly and gently.


Din badle raatein badli baatien badli
Jeene ke andaaz hi badle hain

In lamhon ke daaman mein
Pakiza se riste hain
Koi kalma mohabat ka
Dohrate farishte hain

Khamosh si hai zameen hairaan sa falak hai
Ek noor hi noor sa ab aasman talak hai
Nagmein hi nagmein hai jagti soti fizaon mein
Husn hai sari adaon mein
Ishq hai jaise hawaon mein

Surya blew out the candle on the bedside to continue their night which consisted of lots of passionate kissing and love making.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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O my god Nikita thud thud thud...🤪 🤪 🤪 🤪 🤪 🤪 🤪 what an update... hardcore romantic... ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️aww loved the sweet moments between siblings... 😍awesome narration continue soon waiting to read more...🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
Very very very lovely! I am trying to find such words to describe my intellect with this sizzling romance, not to mention Karan's and Dia's part..😆Plz do continue soon😳 With Laado getting more political these days, there needs to be more Surya and Jhanvi scenes and I was craving this type of story to read and yours just took my breath away..👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
Wow! very bold, hot and romantic😊

Looved it.

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