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Posted: 9 years ago
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THE HEARTBREAK
Note: hi guyz. This os idea struck me when I was in my bio class thinking about the current track of GOT. (I know but kya karoon class bohuth boring thi). I hope u'll like it.😃
Sahir's POV
I hate you isha. I hate you. The pain the anger, the helplessness, the frustration everything was filling my body and I was finding a way to release it. I can't believe ki aaj bhi she rejected me. She left me like she always does. But this time its over forever. The pain in my heart was taking control of me. I didn't know how to handle this. I don't know why I always be her last priority. I am not even a part of her life. I broke down. I started breaking everything.
Azhar's POV
I came home and I heard noises from his room. When I went in there I saw him completely broken, crying. I didn't know what to do. But I knew one thing for sure. I can't leave him alone. I quickly went and hugged him trying to calm him. He was pushing me asking me to let me go. But I couldn't. He's my friend in fact best friend. I couldn't leave him like this. He knelt down crying and said, "We are over azhar. Me and isha are over. Forever." I could feel the pain he was facing and without knowing a lone tear escaped from my eyes too.
Sahir's POV
I calmed down a bit. The pain in my heart was changing into hatred. I hate myself for letting her affect me. I just hate her. Sahir: azhar I wanna forget isha and move on. For that I am going to change like before. Agar mein itna change nahi hua hota I would've not been hurt like this. Azhar: sahir Matlab kya hai. Sahir: Matlab mein phir se wahi womanising bas***d bana chahtha hoon. The insensitive, pervert, womaniser, sex maniac, selfish angry young man. Azhar could see the anger in his eyes. Sahir: I want to change into that person who doesn't give a f**k about isha. He said with a smirk on his face, " so ladies, the womanising sahir bhasin is BACK.
So guys how was it? I know this was stupid. But do reply shoes and chappals are allowed.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I know this is an OS, but do write a part or two more showing sahir with some random girl and isha watching it and then show her regretting it as azhar says her why he is being so and make her understand the change he had brought up in himself and then how on e again he was back to the old one...show mein isha ka regret nahi toh yaha sahi.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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And yes I forgot in the earlier post to review... good writing we need to write more over here...shantAnu ko dekh ke sab apne career ke liye serious ho gaye hai aur log yaha aana kam ho gaye hai...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Well written šŸ‘
Loved Azhar and Shahir's bonding
I want CVs to use the same track
Tab Isha ko pta chalega ki hamare Shahir baba kya kya karsakte hai gusse ki aag mein šŸ˜†
Azhir bonding is so good mahn!!!!
And U potrayed that too in ur OS
keep on writing plzz
I remember u had started ab ff parr bich mein hi chod diya
I can understand that's response probllem
There are hardly 10 peep active in this forum
This show is far more better those saas bahu shows šŸ˜†
Bt still keep on writing
Would love to read more
Stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you so much. I actually had an ff in mind with this concept. I didn't know whether to post it or not. That's why I wrote an os. I love azhir bonding. They are so adorable.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I loved it...
I was waiting since a long time to read some thing on this track.
Please I possible do make 2nd part of it...where Sahir is changed and isha regretting it.
Isha trying to woe him something like that.
I like AzHir bond.
Please do write more 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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really liked it

would love for u to write more :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I really loved it dear..
Azhir bonding is wow..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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šŸ‘well written
exactly my point is that by rejecteing n hurting this changed sahir again n again, isha is looking very negative
she is giving a very wrong impression n lesson to the viewers who watch the show
coz when sahir was a womaniser she was running behind him, n now that sahir has changed n become a nice guy she is rejecting him n not even letting him move-on😔😔
she is making him run behind her, with her stupid games😭
this is giving a very wrong message🤢

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