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poetic

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Posted: 15 years ago

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A very stupid limerick attempt on RK ...

Eternal love was in store for us

Day after day we remained entranced, with so much fuss

With Rajbir-Kranti, yeh dil maange more ...

Emotions ran amok through the open door

As love and romance took up haven in celestial mush!

Was trying my hand in something different. 😆
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pennu

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Posted: 15 years ago

very good poem Poet....

Only very few lines.. yet it told a lot....

Akhir aapne apni naam rakhleee....

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poetic

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Posted: 15 years ago

Thanks Pen. 🤗

Actually writing a limerick is mind-boggling. Only 5 lines and one has to follow the AABBA pattern. I thought it would be easy but it was really a sweat-worthy effort.

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skeptical

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Posted: 15 years ago

An eternal sigh was in store for me

Daily the pesky rat I would see

How that creep

Would drive a jeep

And continuously torment my Kudee !!! 😉

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poetic

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Posted: 15 years ago

LOL too good Skep! 👍🏼 You are a master in everything literary. Sigh!

The jeep after a few days became history
What we got at the end was MRD ... our story
Was it worthwhile? Was it good?
Did our mind crave for the elusive food?

Everything turned out to be fair and hoary

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skeptical

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Posted: 15 years ago

The story turned from valiant to humdrum

Yet we came for their dished out crumb

We just waited

With breaths bated

The serial perished but not our forum.........

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poetic

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Posted: 15 years ago

We are eternal, we are strong
Our love for MRD... our way sees no wrong

The makers are fools we all know

Someone tell them you reap as you sow

May our association with MRD continue for long

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pennu

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Posted: 15 years ago

Both of you are saying so many things in few lines...

In my face it brought different types of smiles...

Loved the way you write skep...

Poet your lines are ahead one step...

Hope like this, we can cover many more miles....

(Don't know how my lines sounds...😕)

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poetic

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Posted: 15 years ago

Awww Jaya, it's perfecto! You don't need to worry.

Beautiful lines I must say! And don't worry about how your lines sound ... they are perfect.

The close bond that we all developed over here merrily
Have knit us into a lovable family

Even when MRD is off the air
We discuss about it , low and fair

May we all stay together always happily

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pennu

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Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Raj and Kranti is my favourite pair...😳

what creatives did to them was not fair...😭

But your(skep,bonai&poetic) ffs gave me new rays...😃

which always refreashed those good days...😍

Thats why we all are together, even if MRD is not on air...😊

Thanks for appreciating my lines Rachna... I am very bad in writing.. but if it sounds good then..... its only bcos of being together with you people...

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