Do sitaron ka zameen par hai Milan

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Posted: 16 years ago
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On 2nd Jan Episode and aftereffect.

This is my first try 😳 so please ignore if it irritates 😭 you much. So sharing my thoughts

Do sitaron ⭐️ ka zameen par hai Milan aj ki raat

Aagaye Sare forum members ki yadoon ki barat 😉

Bahar baras raha tha pani hi pani

Andaar mast shama, parwana aur unki jawani

Bahut pyar se raj kar raha tha pyaar

Kranti jaise man hi man thi taiaar

Phir dikha aag aur ……. dot dot

Kuch bhi natghat soch lo jhat pat

Subhe Raj ne baraya haath soch kar aao meri jaan

Jabab me kranti ne khwab tora kahke saiyaan beiman

Bhagi bhagi lauti to mili fulo ki jhalak

Aisa laga jaise koi chirke jale pe namak

Fulo par nikal dia apna sara gussa

Fir kar diya bandh dil ka darwaja

Dono ek jaan do jism hote agar yeah raat aisa na hota

Lekin fir aisi mithi serial ke yeah kuch akhri episodes ka ek hota

Abhi bar rahi hai nafrat ki aag ektaraf agar

To duji taraf aa gayi mithi peyar ka bahar (lets hope)

Bahat sari galat faime karna hai abhi dur

Lekin achhi tarah se, ta ki mile TRP bharpur

Sare member is forum ke is liye ho jaiyee taiyar

Leke apne apne jabardast soch ke hatiyaar

Agar ye kabita lagi bahat bahat e hi bekar (agar ekdam sahne laek nehi hai to ache comments mat dijiyega) 😭

Fir kardijiyega maaf, nahi karunga post kuch aur ek bhi bar (likhoonga to jaroor chupake, practice brings perfection 😃😃)

R & K were delivering their best in the last 5-6 episodes. Be it acting, overall looks, dressing, make-up. With only the tie & shirt (minus that silly hat & formal suit) R looks hot & handsome. K looks very pretty in open hair & natural make-up and also with variation of emotion.

The lead pair & this serial rooooocks though no nomination in any of the award ceremony.

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Arwen11 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wa! Wa! kia khoob baiyan kia hai aapne..👏 i would have replied in verse but m not much of a poet...

but i loved it.. and i hope u post more often😊

And welcome to the forum😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Good one Bonai. 👏 Welcome to the MRD Forum.
And yes, Kranti was looking very beautiful with her hair open.
Edited by poetic - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi first of all welcome to the Forums n second its really nice
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Posted: 16 years ago
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first of all welcome to the forum bonai🤗🤗i thoroughly enjoyed reading your post.it was awesome 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesome 👏 ... I must say, what an entry Bonai. 😃 Welcome to the MRD forum...
Edited by an12345678 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey bonai welcome yaar.
and yes welcome to the poet list of mohe rang de.
i mean skippy ,dawn,you.
and yes this is really nice one.
keepsending this kind of poems yaar.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome post a very good effort indeed. 👏👏
Bonai thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wa! Wa! kia khoob baiyan kia hai aapne..👏 i would have replied in verse but m not much of a poet...

but i loved it.. and i hope u post more often😊

And welcome to the forum
😊
Thank you very much Arwen for the encouragement. This is the first ever reply (someone else other than my sister) I got regarding something I wrote. This is special.
Edited by Bonai - 16 years ago
Bonai thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: poetic

Good one Bonai. 👏 Welcome to the MRD Forum.

And yes, Kranti was looking very beautiful with her hair open.

Thank u very much Poetic.

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