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Dawn

@Dawn Idol

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#21

Ok Guys ............. Fire away .......... I will get back in the morning ............

Got to wind up my official work now ..........

Ciao ...........

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Taiyo

@Taiyo

Stunner

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Posted: 17 years ago

#22

Dawn,

Congartulations... sorry, for being late... hope to be back very soon with my Qs. They have dug up the whole city and along with that my DSL cable ... anyways, hope to get the connection back ASAP....

Enjoy the Week.... 😊

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vasantha

@vasantha_rao07

Stunner

Posted: 17 years ago

#23

Telegenic Shabbir 😆 he indeed is so.... though not a conventionally handsome looking guy..he has his own charm😆with rugged looks.. with a massive height and personality..above all..the boy toy😆 emotes well😎I love him more as an actor...👍🏼 DI ..I read all u r answers...well put 😃

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#24

1. Ouch Skep .......Is that a shivering RAT ??? - Awww..... Then - to you its Raj ....

To console myself I say he's cute 😃 ……. (unless I'm way off target ) correct

2. Wolf - Tribhuvan Lal correct

3. Sherni - Kranti correct

4. Cow - Mamiji ( too cute to be mamiji) correct

5. Crow – I'm toatally at sea here …….. Lovely

6. Deer – Nirmal correct

7. Bull – Kulbhushan 😳 correct

8. Vixen – BBRani 👎🏼 wrong thats Tribhuvi's sister. BBR is madhumakkhi. Hahahaha

9. Cub – Maybe Lovely ( I doubt …… ) Prakash

Skep ............. I'm sweating ............wiping my brow ...............it's like I'm back in school and waiting for my Teacher's reprimand - for not paying attn in class.........

Hhmmmmmmm I give you ............. A++

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#25

1, The fan shaped leaves of the palm and the heart shaped leaves of the clover ( at least part of the leaf ) 10 / 10

2. If Joey is hooked on to her shirtless wonder, Vasu is hooked on to .Telegenic Shabbir (that's what she calls him ) Hahahahahahaha

3. If Dawn is associated with a fairy, Skep is associated with a Professor 0 / 10 It's Witch

4. If water stands for relief, fire stands for passion 10 / 10

5. If you dislike pomp, then you also dislike ostentation & brazeness 😳 10 / 10

6. If you cherish the quality of loyalty, then you also cherish the quality of friendship 10 / 10

7. If morning is associated with the lark, then night is associated with moonbeams 😍 wow thats cute

8. D_I's favourite author as a child was Enid Blyton and now her favourite author is Ruskin Bond / PG Wodehouse / and all sundry M & B authors 10 / 10

9. If it's hook, line and sinker, then it's faith, hope and love ehhhh faith, hope and charity but its yr POV so 10 / 10

10. 1000 days is associated with Anne Boleyn, 1000 ships is associated with Helen of Troy .... 10 / 10

Very Good A++

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: vasantha_rao07
Telegenic Shabbir 😆 he indeed is so.... though not a conventionally handsome looking guy..he has his own charm😆with rugged looks.. with a massive height and personality..above all..the boy toy😆 emotes well😎I love him more as an actor...👍🏼 DI ..I read all u r answers...well put 😃

MPM Vasu

More than one line???????????????????????????????????

Is this what this guy makes you do????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Joey surely has a partner now in gush and rush. Hahahahahahahahaha!

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Nupur

@Nupur9

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#27

Congrats DI....keep it rocking...will be back with my Q

~N~

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Dawn

@Dawn Idol

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: skeptical

1. Ouch Skep .......Is that a shivering RAT ??? - Awww..... Then - to you its Raj ....

To console myself I say he's cute 😃 ??. (unless I'm way off target ) correct

2. Wolf - Tribhuvan Lal correct

3. Sherni - Kranti correct

4. Cow - Mamiji ( too cute to be mamiji) correct

5. Crow ? I'm toatally at sea here ??.. Lovely

6. Deer ? Nirmal correct

7. Bull ? Kulbhushan 😳 correct

8. Vixen ? BBRani 👎🏼 wrong thats Tribhuvi's sister. BBR is madhumakkhi. Hahahaha

9. Cub ? Maybe Lovely ( I doubt ?? ) Prakash

Skep ............. I'm sweating ............wiping my brow ...............it's like I'm back in school and waiting for my Teacher's reprimand - for not paying attn in class.........

Hhmmmmmmm I give you ............. A++

I PASSED ................. Ayyyeeeeeee !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks Prof ................. *bow*

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Dawn

@Dawn Idol

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: skeptical

1, The fan shaped leaves of the palm and the heart shaped leaves of the clover ( at least part of the leaf ) 10 / 10

2. If Joey is hooked on to her shirtless wonder, Vasu is hooked on to .Telegenic Shabbir (that's what she calls him ) Hahahahahahaha

3. If Dawn is associated with a fairy, Skep is associated with a Professor 0 / 10 It's Witch

4. If water stands for relief, fire stands for passion 10 / 10

5. If you dislike pomp, then you also dislike ostentation & brazeness 😳 10 / 10

6. If you cherish the quality of loyalty, then you also cherish the quality of friendship 10 / 10

7. If morning is associated with the lark, then night is associated with moonbeams 😍 wow thats cute

8. D_I's favourite author as a child was Enid Blyton and now her favourite author is Ruskin Bond / PG Wodehouse / and all sundry M & B authors 10 / 10

9. If it's hook, line and sinker, then it's faith, hope and love ehhhh faith, hope and charity but its yr POV so 10 / 10

10. 1000 days is associated with Anne Boleyn, 1000 ships is associated with Helen of Troy .... 10 / 10

Very Good A++

2 straight As ............... I haven't done so well even while at school ............. I'm thrilled ............😃😃

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Dawn

@Dawn Idol

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Dawn Idol

Thanks Purvi ........... plz give me sometime for the FF 😃

Well Purvi .. ....... Since u wanted a cute & hilarious scene betwn R & K ........... I'm going to introduce lajjo once again.........

Deep breath ........ here goes ........

Bbr was relieved, the elders had bought her sob story that Lajjo had no where to go as her father was in prison and her mother away to stay with some sick relative. They agreed albeit reluctantly that she could stay here for week. Bbr was already thinking how to make best use of Lajjo's stay.

Lajjo's entry was 'dhamakedhar' to say the least. She marched into the house, 'ghoonghat' pulled down and promptly crashed in to Raj who was just leaving for the court. "Hai ma", she shrieked, while Raj took one look at her and fled with a hurried 'sorry' muttered under his breath. He was glad his job kept him busy till late evening. At least he would be away from that disaster of a female. "I hope she gets on Kranti's nerves too" he thot maliciously.

On the contrary, in the kitchen K & L got along like a house on fire. K recognised a powerful ally in L, i.e. to irritate Raj, at least. She smiled grimly as she watched L blundering about in the kitchen. And she began to plot. She decided that as of now she would give L the 'responsibility' of taking 'care' of Raj. And she would stand back and watch what promised to be an entertaining week. She went about her chores with a song on her lips.

But what she had not bargained for, was that she was also stuck with L till R returned. In the course of the day she saw L stumble from disaster to disaster around the house. The only thing that kept her sane was the thot that she could unleash L on R once he returned.

R returned well after 8.00 pm exhausted and longing for a cup of tea. K's ears perked up at the sound of his footsteps. As he entered, she gave him a bright smile," I'll get you some hot tea", she said. He stared suprised, what's wrong with her, he wondered. Having no energy to pursue the matter, he went to freshen up.

After a few minutes, dressed in a cool, crisp, white cotton kurtha he was seated on his fav armchair, feeling quite at peace with himself and the world at large. Suddenly, before he could register anything L had breezed into the room, tripped on the carpet and bathed him in piping hot tea !! He stood there, unable to comprehend what went wrong in the span of a couple of mins. With a detached air he watched L shriek and felt her tugging at his kurtha crying out about the stain.

He slowly and painfully dragged himself back to reality. Firmly he pushed L to one side and went back to change his clothes.

After half an hour, he joined the family at he dinner table. K was bustling about acting very efficient and giving him innocent looks. He shot her a warning glare. It didn't seem to do much good. K was busy instructing L to take care of R. This led to a sequence of disasters with L & R involved in each one. At first it

was the piping hot curry served on his hand, then the roti on his shoulder, finally the dal on his lap. R sat there stoically, braving the ordeal, politely refusing the suggestions from Buaji that he should go and change.

Once dinner was done he retired to his room in a zombie-like trance and shut the door. After a while he heard a knock, "What ?" he yelled. "Milk for you Rajveerji", trilled L. "Leave it by the door", he snapped. After, what he considered a safe interval he opened the door , grabbed the glass and shut the door with a bang. He drank the milk and retired to bed turning off the lights hoping this was the end of the disasterous evening.

The door opened slowly and he saw K walk in silently, He saw her nervously look in his direction, and gave a grim smile. "So she was nervous, good", he thot, he was going to make her pay for spoiling his evening.

Just as she lay down, "Kranti", he called " You have not filled the jug, I need a drink of water". "Get it yourself ", she snapped. "Dont worry", he said with false sweetness, "I'll call Chaiji". " Oh shut up, stop being a

baby", she said.

Cursing him under her breath, she entered the kitchen with the jug. Just as she was filling the water, the lights went off. She sucked her breath and whirled around, a shadowy figure was at the door. "Rajveer", she warned, "its not funny, turn on the light". The figure kept moving towards her silently. Wasn't it Raj ? she panicked. She had left him comfortably snuggled in bed, he didn't seem inclined to get up and

come downstairs.

Was it an intruder? "Stay away from me", she warned, grabbing a ladle. Before she could realise what was happening a hand clamped her mouth, another snaked around her waist and she was bodily lifted off the ground. She struggled in vain to set herself free. She was well and truly shaken now. The intruder carried her towards the door, and suddenly the lights came on.

She found herself staring at a grinning R. Her heart was racing and she was breathing heavily at the exertion. "Well", he said with a laugh, "how does it feel when someone plays a prank on you?". "Let me go",

she hissed. "OK", he shrugged and released her, she stumbled before she found her balance.

"Good night, my dear wife", he drawled and turned to go. With a swift move K grabbed the jug and sploshed the contents on a startled R. For the 3rd time that evening R was forced to change his clothes.

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How was that ???????????

Hope you all liked it............... 😃😃

Edited by Dawn Idol - 17 years ago