Pretty pretty Nirmal

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Pretty pretty Nirmal

She wore her clothes of dark red

And lilies she wore on her head

Ready she kept the soup and bread

As she waited for him near the bed.

Her eyes like a doe's limpid and brown

Flitted to the door, then up and down

Shyly she looked away, thinking of him

Till the moon shone bright and the stars dimmed.

She sat by the steps and looked down the way

She'd been waiting for him the whole day

Where was he and why was he late?

She looked expectantly at the garden gate.

The sky was black and the moths flew

The scented breeze gently blew

The crickets played their violins anew

She laid her head back where the creepers grew.

She got weary and her lids fell

When he would return no one could tell

Her head she put on her arms and slept

She didn't know when in he stepped.

He looked down at her pretty face,

Her hair with the flowers in a lace

He prayed that with God's grace

Joy with happiness would keep pace.

Theirs would be a beautiful life
Where happiness would linger and no strife
Day after day there would be contentment
To savour delight and enjoyment.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Skept, the poetess, the writer, and puzzle maker, the artist... what all are you? I am amazed by your talent. Let me take a bow... 👏

And, the speed with which your creativity flows ... I am astonished.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awwwwwwwwww Thanks Numes. ☺️
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Goodness Skep.. WOW !!!
Is there anything you dont do sweets???
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: morningdew

Goodness Skep.. WOW !!!

Is there anything you dont do sweets???

😉 😉 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Skepti simply amazing👏..U r a terrific writer and u hv got a grt knowledge in how to rhyme the words👍🏼...
Nirmal was really looking very pretty today😳...I think Sanjay-Nirmal track too is slowly developing now😳
Skepti just add this poen in your poetry post where u hv kept all the poems😳..u will find the post in the Archives link only😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyoti06

Skepti simply amazing👏..U r a terrific writer and u hv got a grt knowledge in how to rhyme the words👍🏼...

Nirmal was really looking very pretty today😳...I think Sanjay-Nirmal track too is slowly developing now😳
Skepti just add this poen in your poetry post where u hv kept all the poems😳..u will find the post in the Archives link only😃

Yes I shall put it in the Archives link.
Actually altho Sanjay is not very attractive as a character, the gentle Nirmal more than makes up for him. You dont mind him because she loves him. This girl has the most expressive eyes. She never needs to say anything, its her eyes that do all the speaking. She was so simply dressed. Only flowers to adorn her. The red colour, the evening and her waiting eyes were protrayed so beautifully. And much of the credit goes to all three - the actress, the director and the script writer.
Usually I write two posts after I finish seeing the epi. The two incidents that I feel were important to me for the day. One is invariably on my kudi (she is the heroine after all) and the other on someone else. Yesterday, it was Nirmal. When I began to write, I felt the only way I could describe how much I liked that silent waiting, that shyness in her longing and the final gentleness shown by Sanjay to his sleeping wife, - was through verse. And it came quite smoothly and quickly.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: an12345678

Skept, the poetess, the writer, and puzzle maker, the artist... what all are you? I am amazed by your talent. Let me take a bow... 👏

And, the speed with which your creativity flows ... I am astonished.

DITTO!!!!👏
Numero You said everything i would have said....thanks for typing for me!!!! 😛
Skips You ROCK!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nupur9

DITTO!!!!👏
Numero You said everything i would have said....thanks for typing for me!!!! 😛
Skips You ROCK!!!

Thanks sweetie. Your words mean a lot. 😳 ☺️
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awww .............Skep ........👍🏼
That was brilliant ............. Enchanting really ...............😍
You have the magical touch with words ............. 👏
* Deep bow*

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