SaJan SS. If its not forever .........its not love - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: SM_317

Hey muskaan.,,shreya here..awesomee start..loved it..😃sajan.separated..:-( :-( .update soon..

Thank u shreya darling . Next aprt updated waiting for tour comment .
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
great story and update dear..loved it.loved the way u described the whole flashback and then sajan seperation..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Well nest part is here
Edited by monaya2sajan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Holla well .
Demand is not complete but still the views are 388 and m happy .
Here is the 3rd part . Hope u all will enjoy .and yes suspense is near .šŸ˜‰

I still expect some likes and comment hope u guys do it . I wont ask for demand

A BIGGER UPDATE
A SUPRISE IN THIS PART . TWO NEW CHARECTERS HOPE U WILL LOVE THEM TOO AS SAJAN .
ATLEAST LET ME KNOW HOW THE SUPRISE IS .




AFTER FEW DAYS

It was a black day for samrat . Indeed a very dark day . Its been a year on this very day she left him the very day on 20th april 2014 and today was 20th April 2015 .she said nothing and left a note with him . Which he reads everyday but today he reads it in every 5 mins . He could feel unknown pain in that letter . Something said every time he read the letter .
He read it again for a zillionth time .it read .

Dear Samrat ,

Sorry today for the first time i would break your promise i would not get up the same way , not hug u and have a breakfast but i have my reasons . I am leaving u samrat forever . Please yeh mat sochna ki tumhari koi galti thi , u have been a perfect husband to me but i couldnt be a perfect wife .u loved me way to much but i couldnt with the same intensity .
I love u samrat kal aaj aur hamesha marte dam tak . I dont want u to hate me isliye mein tumhe reason nahi bata rahi mere yu jaane se . Ho sake to mujhe bhul jaana aur move on karna . Aur haan please samrat mujhe tumhe basketball mein number one dekhna hai usse kabhi mat chodna . Aur kabhi bhi ulti sidhi harkate mat karna aur apna khayal rakhna .
I dpnt want to be a jinx in your life to . I have spoiled many of them but not yours .
Samrat ek promise mujhe dena , meri last wish hai yeh tumse ki tum mujhe kabhi dhundne ki koshish nahi karenge please .
I love u samrat and always will .

Tumhari CHASHMISH .

He let the tear flow . He culd feel the same pain .same urge to find her hug her love her.
His thoughts were disturbed by a phone ring . Who could it be . He had told everyone to leave him alone tht day . When he saw the caller tune he was shocked .

Its was phone from his only friend and head of the team council MOHIT . he was a charming person and a introvert guy . He had many friends but samrat was special to him . He also had a wife Sanaya . He loved her beyond the words . Mohit knew this sad story of samrat and had promised to handle everything but he called and that shocked samrat most.
He picked up the call .
M: hello samrat . Sorry i know mujhe tumhe call nahi karna chaiye but urgent tha issliye . As u know u r also all india basket ball team of girls coatch and u also know we have done audition in all other state except mumbai amd i have been there but pls go for the mumbai audition u know sanaya is pregnent and this is her 9th month and mujhe uske saath rena hai . Pls samrat .
He said everything in one goo and breathed .

S: theek hai mohit i will go .
M: thank u samrat i know it is difficult for u but i cant leave sanaya like that .
S: i understand mohit .
M: samrat am sending u your ticket and plan of work u have a midnigth flight today .
S: hmmm okay mohit bbye take care ,aur sanaya ka bhi.

He kept the phone and sighed he had traveled every where but always refused to travel mumbai . He had to many memories of her there whoch would end up loosing himself . But now he had to go for his friend if he was in place of mohit he would have done same he smiled by imaging gunjan with the bump .

*FlashBack*

Gunjan was sitting in her room and reading a book . Thats when samrat came after finishing his work in the library . He came removed the book from her hand , kept his head on her lap and her hand on his head .
G: kya hua .
S: kuch nahi bas yuhi .
G:hmmm
S:acha chasmish do u want a girl or a boy .
G: yeh kaisa question hua
S: pls bolo na . Samrat pouted .
G: mujhe koi bhi chalega ek angel bhi ya phir ek naughty chota samrat ya dono . And she blushed .

Basically gunjan samrat did family planning they didnt want a baby too soon . Samrat explained iit to gunjan that once he settles his job he will plan a baby as he wants to secure future of the both .

S: chasmish imagaine tum uss bade se gol pate mein kitni cute dikhogi na .
G: but achanak se aisi bata kyu ?
S: bas aise hi , actually kya haina mere goal mujhe thoda aur door hai phir mein tum aur baby .
Gunjan blushed smiled and laughed at the same time feeling content .


*FlashBack ends*

Samrat imagines that moment and her face and sighs .just then the door bell rings and his watch man gives him a envolp the envolop had ticket of mumbai and plan of work .
He had to leave pune at 2:oo am and reach airport by 3:00 am and he will reach mumbai by 5:00 .

Timing of Audition : 9 oclock onwards
Venue : EXCEL COLLEGE .
And this shocked him the most . He didnt know why god was playing with him so cruelly .
Firstly it takes him to mumbai where he could feel only her and then it takes him to the excel college where all the memories of her , them are there . He felt something which he could not define , maybe pain , maybe hurt or maybe nothing.
Tears where flowing from his eyes but he dint stop them. He was shattered but he didnt put himself back . But samrat was proffesional without a word any how if he told who would listen the walls , doors or the silence . He packed and moved off to the airport . He was scared . He felt like someone has stamped on his wounded hurt again . He knew she was admant so he also knew that she will never ever cum back .

*FlashBack*

Gunjan was making food . In fact she was making samrats favourite . Rajma Chawal . There was nothing special but for her everyday she spent with samrat was special . She was lost in her spthoughts when her phone rang . She blushed seeing the caller tune it was samrats phone .

G: tum sau saal jiyoge samrat
S: wahoo woh kyu .
G: kyu ki main abhi tumhe yaad kar rahi thi aur tumhara phone aya .
S: chasmish agar mein din mein das baar call karu na toh mein crore saal tak ji sakta . Kyuki tum mujhe hamesh yaad karti hona .
G: hmmm woh toh hai and she blushed .
S:kash mein tum blush karte hue dekh sakta .
G: acha waise kyu phone kiya ??
S: chasmish kya tumne khana banaliya .
G: ha ! Par kyu .
S: nahi kuch nahi .
G: bolo ki main naraz ho jayu
S: acha baba bolta hu . Woh kya hai na aaj woh team ke saath dinner pe jana tha . Toh mein tumhe bolne wala tha ki khana mat bano mere liye but ab jab tumne bana liya toh mein nahi jata .
G: tum kitne cute ho baby . Par khane ki tension matlo . Tum jao aur enjoy karo bahut ym hoga tumne chill nahi mara ab jao .
S: nahi chasmish .
G: ha smarat
S: nahi .
G: ha matlab ha she said in stern and loud voice,
S: acha theek hai . Okay chalo bbyeab kaam hai thoda .
G: bye shona love u .
S: love u too my jaan.

*FlashBack end*

He smiled as he remeber their sweet nok jhok .
He sat in the plane and had reached mumbai . Rather than stayinh in his house he decided to stay in hotel .

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Posted: 10 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: neha_mjht

great story and update dear..loved it.loved the way u described the whole flashback and then sajan seperation..



Thank u darling . Well next part update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
hey muskaan.. Great you finally posted ur 1st Sajan SS..
will read n comment soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
awesome.update again..sajan flashbacks are soo.cute.u introduced monaya..hahaa..now will love them too. <3 samrat in mumbai..will he meet gunjan??update the next part soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: monaya2sajan


Thanx u sooo much deep . Means alot to me dear


My pleasure Muskaan 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Wow u made Monaya and Sajan story together this gonna be awesome šŸ‘šŸ¼
Good going loved how u narrate the flashback ā¤ļø
Waiting for next update.


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Posted: 10 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: charmee_sammy

hey muskaan.. Great you finally posted ur 1st Sajan SS..

will read n comment soon..


Well am waiting . Read soon and tell me howzz it waiting

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