~|| SaJan FF~ Dark Paradise - Emptiness.. CH 5 PG 35 ||~ - Page 25

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am absolutely loving how the story is processing.
SaJan are on fire and their growing closeness is getting interesting as it is proceeding. Loving the way Samrat is taking care of her. The relationship that they share have a strange kind of comfort in it that is grabbing all the eyeballs.
Well done Vish and continue soon :)
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Hola people 🤗
I am back with my crappy sa update 🤣
I haven't proof read it 🤣 so ignore all typos 🤣

Happy Reading 🤓

Pink = Gunjan
Blue = Samrat
Brown = Rishi
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Chapter - 5

"Come inside , its your home now " He said grabbing my fingers and took me inside his house .. I always wished to shift in new house with my life partner only. But destiny was not in favour of my wish. Keeping aside every thing what had happened with me I seriously felt connected with my lightining boy's house.

I noticed she was not comfortable after all its difficult for anyone to leave their own house where they had made beautiful memories. "Samrat you have a beautiful house" She said smiling at me.
" I know Gunjan our home is really beautiful" I said winking at her.
"Our"? She asked raising her eyebrows
" Yes our its mine and ur house that clearly means its our house.. Make yourself comfortable here" I said wipping off her sweat from my handkerchief.

He is a face reader. Just by seeing my face he understood I was bit uncomfortable.
He not only wipped away my sweat but also wipped away my loneliness. I feel complete with him. I wanted to get lost in his lightning eyes but he had some important call to make. I was hungry and so was him. I decided to look for kitchen and make some noodles and hot chocole for us. Just as I thought about noodles , last night memories flashed over my mind and curved my rosy lips with a smile.

She is not then a child. Though I admire her chil like innocence. Her mouth was full of chocolate. Her rosy lips turned chocolatey.
Something stirred me to taste her chocolatey lips.
But then shrugged of this thought and through my fingers I signal her to clean her mouth. "You do please with handkerchief" she said
I went towards her and cleaned it. She again sipped hot chocolate and asked me to clean it for her.
" wait.. How will you clean it? You have spoiled the handkerchief.. " she winked
She trapped me and I had no other choice. I closed the distance in between. Within a moment I pressed my lips on hers. Her lips tasted like a sweet desert to me. Our kiss turned passionate and then intense. I broked it after few minutes and we breathed heavily.

His lightning eyes speaks alot and I easily understood what he wished for. I intentionally asked him to clean chocolate from my mouth. It was just an unexplainable moment which urged me to do this.
We have kissed before too..and whenever he kissed me I felt a new energy in me which helped me healing my own pain.
His lips were light as feather. He broke off the kiss after few minutes but my heart was not satisfied. Mind channeled me to stop that right away. But heart overtook brain.
I thrown myself onto sofa and pulled him on my body. I closed my eyes which was signal for him to kiss me all over again and heal my all pain. I wanted to forget everything in that moment and remember only us and our unspoken love. Our lips met again. And the kiss deepened more and more. His feather like lips touched my lips , my eyes , my cheeks. His phone ringed.

The intimacy between us changed the colour of her face from snowy white to pink. My phone ringed and flashed ' DEVILERS "Don't wait for me .. I am not sure when I ll will return .. It can be today , tomorrow , a week or a month.. Stay safe .. I ll call you " I said and rushed towards door.
I realized I forget to say something important to her .. I turned back and said " Please Stay Away From My Room .. "


I stood up to close the door. "Whats there in his room?" I wondered.
My phone ringed and flashed " Rishi "
I picked up a call .. "Gunjan there?" His voice echoed in my ears..
"Yes it's me Rishi " I said smiling
He invited me to cafeteria as he had something important to discuss with me. I went inside my new room to change. Like always it was difficult for me to choose a dress. Unpacked stuff reminded me how my lightning boy packed everything for me last night.

I waved her hi from a distance. She looked beautiful in light blue jacket. I thought she will be mine soon. "Hello Rishi" she whispered and smiled. I didn't missed a chance and hugged her and said "Hello ba... Hello Gunjan .. Nice to see you.. Hope you are fine now?.. Come have a seat" I said

" I have a job offer for you" Rishi said . Iwas so elated to hear this. It was a job that I required most at this stage of my life. I had to pay for a violin class and I had to give house rent to my lightning boy too.
"What? Are you serious? What kind of job and where?" I asked him excitedly.
"Actually its my friend's cafe and they require a waitress.. So you can try here only if you don't mind?" Rishi asked my view.
"What's the pay?" I asked
"Fifteen thousand in rupees per month" Rishi said
" OK done.. But I have to give some sort of interview for that?" I asked
"No .. I was sure you will agree that's why I have already talked to my friend before.. You can join in from tomorrow" Rishi said and smiled

"Rishi Thank you so much.. You have solved a big problem of my life.. Pleased to have a friend like you" She said and kept her soft fingers onto my hands. Her touch filled my mind with some dirty thoughts but then I shrugged them off. I know she is living with that Samrat. It was the right time to execute my plan. "You are staying with whom?" I asked intentionally
" A friend " she replied
My phone vibrated it was Samrat's call.
"OK Gunjan I have to leave now. But before leaving I want to say.. Don't trust anyone.. I hope you have checked your friend's house properly?" I said so that she doubt Samrat. I was sure diamonds are in his home. Gunjan will help me to get that diamonds. If you need anything call me.. I said and rushed towards my car.

I unlocked the door and entered the house. I sighed as I wanted to share my first job appointment news with my lightning boy. My eyes captured a sight of his room. I stepped towards his room. Something inside me urged me to open the door but I shrugged off the thought as I don't want to break his trust. I sighed and turned back only to witness him. He stood straight behind me. "What are you doing here?" He asked.
I had no answer. "I told you stay away from my room.. Do you have hearing problem? How could you open the door in my absence? I trusted you and look what you did " He shouted
He was angry. So was I after listening to his words which pinched my heart. " I owe no explanation to you. I didn't opened your room once. " I sighed and walked away.

I shouted at her for the first time. I didn't intended to hurt her. I don't want my dark world shadow to effect Gunjan in anyway. I want to keep her away from this darkness.
She already went through alot and today I shouted at her. I had to do something to make it up.

Its a dark night in hill station Manali.. Clouds had covered moon.
Gunjan was seen watching the dark sky. She wished to talk to stars.. Which was no where to be seen. Crystal like droplets fell down from her alluring eyes.
Gunjan was then seen sitting on the bench. She played violin. Music is something which can sooth her at this point of time.

Her melodious tune of violin echoed and water droplets from sky flowed. It rained heavily not only from sky but from Gunjan's eyes too.

Gunjan had seen Samrat approaching towards her. She stopped playing violin and stood up to leave.
"Gunjan" He said and grabbed her hand to not let her go.
She sighed and turned.. Samrat bent down. He holded his ears and whispered " Sorry "

Gunjan's eyes captured the sight of Samrat's lightning eyes.

Music in background - Kuchh kam roshan hai roshni
Kuchh kam geeli hai baarishein
Kuchh kam leheraati hai hawa
Kuchh kam hai dil mein khwahishein
Tham sa gya hai ye waqt aise
Tere liye hi thehra ho jaise
Hmm hmm,..
Hmm hmm...

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I know its maha bakwas 🤣
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Edited by Barbievishi20 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks
Lovely update
Hope gunjan know Rishi truth soon
Loved the way samrat said sorry

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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved each n everything 😃👍🏼
SaJan Chocolate wala romance was so hawttt☺️
phone romance k dushmann 😡😡 🤣 🤣...Phone silent mode me rakho aur chocolate khao 😡😡 🤣 🤣

Gunjan phir kab Chocolate khayegi ? 😕 😉🤣 🤣


waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Daffodil..

Loved each n everything 😃👍🏼

SaJan Chocolate wala romance was so hawttt☺️
phone romance k dushmann 😡😡 🤣 🤣...Phone silent mode me rakho aur chocolate khao 😡😡 🤣 🤣

Gunjan phir kab Chocolate khayegi ? 😕 😉🤣 🤣


waiting for next part

Priyu 🤗
Tune comment kiya 😲😃
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Mainu bahut accha laging ki tune comment kiya 😭 ( Khushi k aansu ) 🥳

Chocolatey romance suddenly ho gya ☺️

Next update pakka 1st of June 😃
Isi month update kar deti par ghar mein function hai so time nai miling update likhne ka ..
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