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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: aashuu07

available nahi hota, woh sirf samrat apni chashmish ke liye le kar aa sakta hai😉

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Vishi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

Hola guys 😎
Me back again after long to torture you all with my crappy updates .. 😈
I know I am late... Plz maaf kardo.. 😊
Was busy due to exams and updating other SS/FF 😛
Dil se Sorry 🤗

I have not proof read this .. Plz ignore typos 😊

OK enough of my ranting.. 😛

Here you go 😉

Happy Reading 🤓

-Chapter 7-

Chapter 7:

Gunjan standing still...
Samrat smirking..
Board members: kya ? 😲 Mr Samrat apne shadi kab ki? 😲
Samrat: Train mein 😃
Gunjan stating at him and want to punch him..
Board members: Train mein? 😕😲
Samrat: aa aa I mean 3 months before we met in train.. Bas phir love hua aur last month humne bhaag k train mein shadi karli... Aur abhi abhi aate waqt train mein humare beech ☺️
Before he could proceed further.. Gunjan whispers.. Nai nai nai ye sab jhoot hai.. Main iski koi wife vife nai hoon aur na hi maine isko train mein hug kiya 😡 .. Realises what she just said..and stammers Vo Vo...
Samrat: Kya jaan humare beech Kya Kya hua Vo sab tum publicly btaogi 😲☺️
Board members giggling..
Gunjan gets annoy and says.. Kisi ko mukamaal jahaan nai Milta khwaish hai ki bas mil jaye ek sur ka ashiyaan .. Stars sobbing..
Samrat not able to see her crying..says ek kaam ho sakta hai main as a judge resign karta hoon.. Ab toh meri wife iss competition mein participate kar sakti hai na 😃
Gunjan thinks.. 😲 iss Mr Stalker Sadu gyaneshwar baba ko Kya ho gaya? Mere liye sacrifice kyun?
Samrat thinks.. Jyda sochne ki jarurat nai hai chashmish.. Bas Vo main kisi ka sapna apni wajh se tootne nai de Sakta..

Board members: ye idea theek hai.. Sir lekin aap humare show k special guest toh ban hi sakte hai 😊
Samrat: sure 😊 ..ok guys I need to freshn up... See you all later..

Hotel manager alloting keys to participants..
Gunjan comes and asks for her room key..
Manager hands over her room no 107 key..
As she was about to go..
Board members who are passing by from there stops her from going and takes back her key..
Gunjan: Ye Kya aplog meri room key kyun wapas le rahe hai?
Main participate toh kar sakti hoon na? 😲
Board members: Don't worry mam 😊 aap ko Kon rok sakta hai participate karne se 😊 Vo mam hum bas itna chahate hai ki aap sir k sath unke room mein rahe 😳
One members whispers aur Voi kare jo train mein .. Giggles...
Gunjan: 😲 par kyun?
Main toh ek participant hoon so mujhe participants k sath hi rehna chahiye na?
Board member: mam aap participant baad mein hai aur Sir k wife pehle 😳
Gunjan: Lekin vekin Kuch nai mam.. Sir ka room 5th floor pe hai Room No. 505 aap wahi chali jaiye..
Gunjan: Par..
Board members leave..
Gunjan: ye Kya hua.. Kaise hua.. Na main janu na.. Tu jaane.. Hits her hair with hands.. Uff Gunjan Kya ho gaya tujhe Ab song k lyrics bhi galat gaa rahi hai.. 😲 ye sab us gyaaneshwar baba ki wjh se ho raha hai.. 😡 Kuch toh karna hi parega..soch Gunjan soch ..

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-College-

Mayank busy clicking selfies with girls .. Sees Nupur coming.. Goes towards her...Hii 😃..
Nupur: Hii *gives dull smile*
Mayank: kisko dhundh rahi ho?
Nupur: apne friends ko..
Mayank: Main toh yahin hoon 😎
Nupur: So? 😳
Mayank: So matlb? Main bhi toh tumhara friend hi hoon na? 😃
Nupur: Friend? Vo bhi tum? Oh please ..!!
Main right thi tum bhi typical boy ho 😳 ladki ne hug karke Thankyou Kya bola tum toh peeche hi par gye 🥱
You know what Nupur se friendship karna itna asaan nai hai .. 😈
Nupur ka friend bane k liye tumhe special bana parega 😎
Mayank: [:o ] Tume itnna attitude kyun hai?
Nupur: excuse me 😳
Mayank: OK fine!! Kya karna hoga mujhe?
Nupur smirks and say jyda Kuch nai bas meri chillar party ko impress karna hoga 😈
Unke friend banoge tabhi mere friend ban paoge 😉
Mayank: ab ye chillar party Kya hai yaar 😕
Nupur: Chillar Party meri happiness k key hai 😳 My Partners in Crime 😈
Samjh lo they are my photocopy.. Main hoon mango bite aur Vo hai meri xeroxcopy kaccha mango bite 😃
Mayank: Kya? 😲
Ek jhansi ki rani kam thi Kya jo ab aur jhansi ki ranis aa gyi 🥱
Nupur: Kya Kaha tumne.. [: ] Holds his collar..and comes close to him..
Mayank: Kuch nai main toh mazaak kar raha tha..Mayank realises the closeness..and smiles saying..Waise aaj tum gusse mein Bht cute lag rahi ho..
Nupur leaves his collar.. Jyda buttering karne ki jarurat nai hai.. Waise bhi Bygod mujhe Bol bacchan buttering se jyda Amul butter jyda pasand hai 😎
Mayank: Toh chale?
Nupur: Kaha?
Mayank: Kaccha mango bites k paas I mean chillar party k paaas 🥱
Nupur: Yaa let's go 😃

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Gunjan reaches 5th floor..and opens rooms..
Gunjan: Gaata rahe mera dil... Ye hi hai meri manzil.. Opens room... Hmm not bad ye toh bilkul mere room jaisa room hai .. 😎
Keeps luggage inside cupboard and lies on bed.. Decreases temperature..sings Thandi Thandi AC ki pawan chale tanman mein haaye aag lage..Thankgod Mr Gyaaneshwar baba ji yahaan nai hai abhi 🥳
Chalo apne Mr S jaanu ko msg karti hoon 😳
Types:
Hey ya my sweetu jaanu.. Miss you :* :*
Tumhare bina din jaise ho boiled drinking water k andar karela..
Aur raat jaise khaana pare us karele ko
Tum bhi mujhe miss karte ho na jannu? ☺️
Reply soon...before moon..
She sleeps...
Samrat comes out from washroom and gets shock to see Gunjan lying on hid bed.. He gets furious and fumes.. Wat the hell?
Tries to wake her up..shakes her.. Chashmish Chashmish utho..
Gunjan in sleep.. Kya hai mom.. Sone do na..
Samrat: mom? Main tumhe mom dikhta hoon?
Gunjan: Bunty Tu hai Kya.. Gunjan while sleeping holds his hands and pulls Samrat towards her.. He falls on her ...

BG: Ho rabba sss ho, rabba sss rabba ho rabba
Ishq-Aa-Walla, Kar de Challa, Jisnu lag jaye, Ho jaye Kalla.

Samrat lost in her sleeping beauty..

Ishq-Aa-Walla, Kar de Challa, Jisnu lag jaye, Ho jaye Kalla.

He tries to get up..but Gunjan holds him tightly..

Ho ishq jgaye inhe raato ko na sote hai
Ek duje ke liye din raat rote hai,
Dushwariyo se bhari ishq ki galiya,
Hus ke gvara inhe kante ho ya kaliya,

Samrat admiring her beauty..says khoobsurat..par sote hue toh har koi khoobsurat aur innocent lagta hai..

Ishq Ishq rab hai, rab rab hai, Ishq Ishq rab hai.

He gets idea..and starts brushing his hands on her face.. Comes too close to kiss her ..
She felt something weird and opened her eyes and is shock to see him near..

Ishq ka rasta sabse pyaara, Sab jeeta wo jo dil hara
Few seconds of eye lock and she finally jerks him away..
Tumhari himmat kaise hui mere paas aane? 😡
Samrat: oh hello mujhe koi shauk nai hai tumhe choo k apne haath gande karne ka 😡 Tumne mujhe khud pakda tha samjhi 🥱
Gunjan yells at him ... samrat comes forwards and covers her mouth from his hands.. Shut up.. Ek shabd aur nahi.. Aur Waise bhi tum mere room mein Khud ayi ho..
Gunjan punches on his face ...
Samrat: Oouch.. Ye Kya kiya tumne ...
Gunjan: tumhari himmat Kaise hui mera muh band karne ki.. Socha tha tumhe Thankyou bolungi k tumne mere sapno pe water throw nai kiya par tum Thankyou deserve nai karte sirf punch deserve karte ho 😈
Aur ek baad main yahaan apni marzi se nai ayi .. Sabko lagta hai hum married hai isilye ek sath room mein rehne ko Kaha..
Samrat: Wat the hell? Ye sab tumhari wajh se ho raha hai.. Na tum mujhe train mein apna hubby bolti na ye sab hota 😡
Gunjan: Maine toh train mein Kaha tha tumne toh yahaan aake dhindora peet diya.. 😡
Samrat: Vo toh tumhe sabak seekhane k liye maine aisa kiya..
Light goes off.. Darkness..
Samrat: ye light kaise chali gyi..
Gunjan: Height of bad luck ki dukan you gyaneshwar baba 😡
Due to darkness both not able to search their cell phones and bumps on eachother.. Samrat looses balance caught hold of Gunjan's hand to maintain balance.. But both slips on ground.. ❤️🤣

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-Khul Ja Sim Sim Park-

Chillar party Adda..
Kids gossiping about Ganju Batliwala's daughter Bebo who ran away with his bf.. Pinki (member of Chillar party 9yrs old girl) sees Nupur coming..
Pinki: Didi Doll aagyi par ye Didi k sath namuna Kon aa raha hai 😕
Chotu: Humara naya bakra aur Kon 😉
Nupur comes and gives hi5 to Chotu.. Bol chotu aaj Kya khabar laya hai? Khabar mein spice toh hai na? 😎
Mayank: Nupur mujhe introduce nai kawaogi?
Nupur: Friendship tumhe karni hai tum Khud introduce karo 😳
Mayank thinks.. Kya musibat hai.. Says hello beautiful lovely kids 😊
Main Mayank Nupur ka frien... Looks at Nupur who was staring him
Chillar Party: Hum tume beautiful aur lovely kids lagte hai? 😈
Chotu: We are naughtiest party.. Aur ek baat koi bhi hum kids ko kids bole ye Hume pasand nai 😡
Pinki and Rahul: Tumne Hume kids bolke humari insult ki hai.. Aab tumhe uski sazaa milegi.. Barabar milegi.. 😡
Nupur smirked.. Hmm right sazaa toh milni hi chahiye..
Mayank: Kya sazaa? Itnni si baat k liye koi sazaa deta hai?
OK fine then lets do one deal ..agar maine tumhari di hui sazaa puri karli toh tum sabko mujhe apni chillar party k new member k roop mein accept karna hoga 😛
Nupur: Ye kaisi deal hai..?
Chotu: Hume deal manzoor hai.. Chill Didi hum ise aisa task denge ki ye pura hi nai kar payega 😈
Rahul: Tume ek pair par khade hoke dance karna hoga pure 10 mins tak 😈
Ek baar bhi gire yaa pair neeche kiya toh you will loose 😎
Mayank thinks.. Kaha ek tarf ladkiya mujhse friendship krne k liye marri ja rahi hai aur yahaan main iss jhansi ki rani ki friendship k liye crazy hue ja raha hoon.. He agrees..
Mayank starts dancing on one leg.. Singing.. Idhar chala main udhar chala Jane kaha main kidhar chala.. Nupur giggles and sings arey phisal gaya...
Mayank: abhi nai phisla...
Chillar party members rofling seeing Mayank's condition.. Passers by make fun of him and call him Monkey Donkey..

6 mins paas he is still dancing.. Nupur laughing continuously.. Sees her laughing..starts admiring..gets lost in her beauty .. While dancing comes close towards Nupur.. He was so lost admiring her looses her balance and was about to slip.. Nupur comes for his rescue.. She tries to held his wrist but she too falls on grass with him..
Both rolling rolling.. Finally stops.. Too close..
Gets their eyes lock..
BG: Mann yeh saahib ji, jaane hai sab ji
Phir bhi banaye bahaane
Naina nawaabi ji, dekhe hain sab ji
Phir bhi na samjhe ishaare
Mann yeh saahib ji haan karta bahaane
Naina nawaabi ji na samjhe ishaare
(na samjhe ishaare)
Dheere dheere, nainon ko dheere dheere
Jiya ko dheere dheere bhaayo re Saibo
Dheere dheere, begaana dheere dheere
Apna sa dheere dheere lage re Saibo
Surkhhiyaan hain hawaaon mein, do dilon ke milne ki
Ho! Arziyaan hain nazaaron mein, lamha yeh tham
jaane ki
Kaisi huzoori ji yeh lab dikhlaaye
Chuppi laga ke bhi ghazab hai yeh dhaaye
Dheere dheere, nainon ko dheere dheere
Jiya ko dheere dheere bhaayo re Saibo
Dheere dheere, begaana dheere dheere
Apna sa dheere dheere lage re Saibo
Saibo... Saibo...
Dheere Dheere... Dheere Dheere... ❤️❤️

Rahul: ye kya ho raha hai arey ye Kya ho raha hai?
Pinki: Kuch nai Kuch nai pyaar ho raha hai..

MaYur gains back their senses and wakes up..
Nupur's cheeks turned red..

Chotu: arey buddhus pyaar toh Nupur di Kunal bhaiya se karti hai

Rahul: Jo bhi ho Ye Mayank bhaiya toh haar gye..

Mayank: Plz mujhe ek aur chance dedo plz
Nupur and chillar party starts laughing..
Comes forward and whispers Friends?
Mayank: 😲😕.😃🤔 yes ofcourse Friends Forever 😳
Nupur: Friend toh Maine tumhe subah hi maan liya tha .. Ye sab toh bas ek chota sa prank tha 😉
Mayank: Kya 😲
Toh tum sab milke itnni der se mere sath prank kar rahe the? Not fair 🥱
Chotu: Actually hum apki ragging kar rahe the 😃 Sorry Bhaiya 😛
Mayank: sorry se kaam nai chalega.. Sabko mere sath ice cream parlour chalna hoga..
Nupur and chillar party becomes excited and joyfully says yay ice cream party 🥳

Precap: Samrat & Mayank Dad's entry..
Nupur's engagement with Kunal
Mayank's realisation of love..
Gunjan's singing audition..
SaJan's shower romance..

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pheww finally update over ho gyi..
Tomatoes and Chappals all are welcome 🥳
Except Eggs as I am Veggie 😛

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Edited by Barbievishi20 - 11 years ago

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Vishi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

Will send PMs later

Edited by Barbievishi20 - 11 years ago

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arushi_130989

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Lovely update just love ot yippee I am first to comment

Edited by arushi_130989 - 11 years ago

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ritzsammy

@ritzsammy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

Finally read it vishu.
Beautiful update
loved sajan nok jokh.

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Deepshikha23

@Deepshikha23

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#146

Just awesome Update Vishakha

Very interesting story u write.

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Jerin.

@Jerin.

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#147

both mayur and sajan were awesome

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Ayesha

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Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#148

Wow Vishu,,, what an update. SaJan part thora he tha but jitna bhi tha bohat he amazing tha... SaJan scenes zyada likha karo... bohat maza aata hai parh ke. Tu ne itna late update kiya. Next time jaldi karna aur pulej (please) SaJan part bohat zyada dena. Bohat acha likhti ho. Jaldi se ye wali SS complete kar, phir moi teri baki ki fictions bhi parhun gi. 😃 😃 😃