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Chapter 6:
Part 1:
BHUSHAN HOUSE:

Nupur opens her room door..
Gunur's mom: Haaye rabba kudiye tu andar kya kr rahi thi itnni aawaze kaha se aa rhi thi.. bimat hai phir bhi toofan giri krna nahi chodegi ye ladki..
Aur darwaza kholne mein toh itnna time laga diya k khade khade meri kamar akad gyi
Kisi ladkr k aawaaz bhi aa rhi thi kli andar hai kya? πŸ˜•
She is looking here & der..
Finally Nupur utters.. mata shri ab main bimar hoon iska matlb ye nahi ki saara time soti rahu.. main tv dekh rhi thi.. shyd apko vo Tera Pati mera hai serial k shaurya k aawaz apko sunayi di hogi 😳
Gunur's mom: Haaye rabba ye kaise serial dekhti hai tu Tera Pati Mera hai chi chi..
Nupur: Mata shri thanks alot apne mujhe itna paka daala hai k ab main ek main aur yahaan ruki toh paka behosh ho jaungi.. isilye main college ja rhi hoon.. she runs..
Gunur's mom yelling arey toofan main ruk ja tu bahar nai ja sakti.. 😑
Gunur's Grand Father comes & asks her to chill...
Gunur's Dadu: Beta ji thand rakho pepsi piyo pepsi πŸ˜ƒ
Gunur's mom: Par bauji uski tabyat kharab hai 😲
Gunur's dadu: Thodi der bahar rahegi toh tabyat theek ho jayegi uski 😊

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Shimla Express (Train)

Song Ends...
Black Dark tunnel ends too..
Samrat pushes Gunjan away from him..
Gunjan: Oouch.. Ye accha hai pehle hug karo aur phir dhaaka maar k dur kro 😑
Mannerless gyaansehwar baba 😑

Samrat: Dekho Chashmish agar main tumhr hug nai krta toh vo buddha tumhe hug krke tumhara fayda utha leta 😳
Gunjan: Oh us buddhe ko beech mein mat laao uski toh main..
Gunjan turns to look at dat old drunken man.. but he ran away... & stolen Gunjan's luggage & purse..
Gunjan: 😲 vo buddha kaha gya 😲
Aur mera samaan.. mera samaan kaha gya 😲
Samrat laughs πŸ˜† Lo tum soch rhi thi vo tumme interested hai par vo toh tumhare saamaan mein interested tha πŸ˜›
Vo toh phur hogya ab main bhi jaldi se phur ho jau wrna tum mere peeche par jaogi 😲 πŸ˜›
Gunjan: us buddhe ki toh [xxx] aur tum kaise insaan ho ek ladki musibat mein hai aur tum use akela chod kr bhaag rahe ho 😲
Samrat: kon ladki πŸ˜•
Gunjan: main aur kon 😑
Samrat: Tum to karate champion ho.. Apna dhyaan khud rakh sakti ho.. mujhe maaf kro.. mai chala.. πŸ˜‰
*He leaves*
Gunjan: 😲
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Outside BHUSHAN HOUSE:
Mayank waiting for Nupur..
Nupur comes...
And Mayank's cell phone rings..
Tune maari enteriyaan re
Dil mein baji ghantiyaa re..
Tang Tang Tang Tang..
Dis annoys Nupur & she snatches Mayank's phone & cuts d call..
Mayank: Ye kya kiya tumne..
Nupur: voi jo tumne mere sath kiya kuch time pehle 😑
Ab late nai ho rhi?
Clg chale ki mahurat nikalu pandit ji ko call krke 😑
** Mayank Thinks huh ye soch rhi hai main ise clg leke ja rha hoon ise kya pta aaj iski acchi band bajne wali hai [}:)) **
Mayank: Haan chalo car mein baitho..
They sits inside car..
Mayank ons Ac..
Nupur feeling cold..
Mayank: kya hua tabyat kharab toh nai tumhari Niss Weakling *smirks*
Nupur: Just shut up.. meri koi tabyat vabyat kharab nai hai.. samjhe tum Mr Sadu 😑
Aur ye konsa root liya hai tumne πŸ˜• ye clg ka root toh nai hai πŸ˜•
Mayank: Chill Jhansi Ki Rani kam Miss Weakling thodi der mein tumhe sab pata chal jayega πŸ˜‰
** Nupur Thinks ab kya gadbad krne wala hai ye sadu πŸ˜• **

Shimla Express (Train):
Gunjan singing main pareshan pareshan pareshan pareshan...
Meri toh tickets bhi mere purse mein thi
Gunjan sees TT checking tickets..
Gunjan: kya kru kya na kru ye kaisi mushkil haaye.. dadu ko call kiya toh wapas bula lenge aur phir mera sapna chur chur.. naiii kuch to golmal krna hi parega.n soch Gunjan soch πŸ€” ..
Idea clicks her mind 😎
TT comes to her & asks her wht she us standing here?
TT: madam aap yahaan kya kr rhi hai? Aur apki ticket toh dikhayie zara?
Gunjan starts crying like baby uaaan main loot gyi.. barbaad hogyi.. 😭
TT: arey arey kya hua madam aap ro kyun rhi hai? Gvs her tissue ppr.
Gunjan snatches Tissue ppr.. sneazes.. 🀒
And says ab kya btau TT Bhaiya apko ?
TT gets emotional.. apne mujhe bhaiya kaha.. 😲 😊
Gunjan: Ji ap mere bhaiya jaise hi toh hai.. apse kya chupana.. vo andar suit boot mein tan k jo admi ac k hawa kha raha hai na vo mere pati hai..
TT: Toh isme problem kya hai? πŸ˜•
Gunjan: Arey bhaiya isme hi toh problem hai.. ab bolo bhala maine inhe subah breakfast mein jale hue toast kya khila diye aur ek kiss dene se kya mana krdiya ye mujhe chod k Shimla jane lage 😭
Mere paas ticket kaise hogi main toh inke peeche bhaagte bhaagte train mein ayi hoon na.. 😭
TT gets super emotional & starts crying 😭 behna tu ro mat main hoon na tera bhai.. main tujhe insaaf dilwaunga..
Both goes to Samrat..
Samrat sees dem coming towards him & thinks ye aise meri tarf kyun aa rhe hai paka kuch gadbad hai..
TT comes & yells at Samrat.. repeats Gunjan's word of incident.. Samrat in shock.. Gunjan smirking..
Samrat: Enough is Enough.. ye ladki meri patni nai hai.. infact m baechlor..
Gunjan starts crying haaye rabba ab ye apne aap ko bechlor kehne lage ye sunne se pehle *Thinks Gunjan tu apne aap ko kyun curse kr rhi hai* changes sentence & says ye bolne se pehle inki zubaan kat kyun nai gyi 😭
TT: Ro mat behna main kaat dunga iski zubaan 😑
Samrat: Behna πŸ˜•
TT: Haan abhi abhi bhagwan ji ne mujhe ek behna gift ki hai πŸ˜ƒ aur tum use rula rahe ho 😑
Lady (Passenger) comes & says ye ladki bilkul theek keh rhi hai ye ladka iska pati hi hai maine indono ko husband wife k tarh ladte aur phr gale milke mohabbat krte hue dekha tha 😳
Gunjan: Haina apne dekha tha na 😭
Lady: Haan bilkul dekha tha 😳
Sanrat pissed off wid melo drama accepts Gunjan as his wife & gvs money to TT for Gunjan's ticket.. TT leaves..
Gunjan: waise toh mujhe tumhe thankyou bolna nai chahiye kyunki uss buddhe ne mera samman tumhari wjh se chori kiya tha par phr bhi main ek acche ghar ki ladki hoon so Thankyou Muh bole Pati dev *Shows attitude*
Samrart: Just shut up.. m not your husband in any way 😑
Just leave me alone..
Both goes in opposite directions..

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--Snowy Disco chada nasha pyaar ka--

Nupur: Ye kaha leke aye ho tum mujhe? 😲
Ye humara clg toh nai hai πŸ˜•
Mayank: Its snowy disco.. kal tumne mujhe garmi wale Store room mein phasaya tha na.. Mayank Singhaniya kabhi kisi ka due nai rakhta so here I m.. main tumhe yahaan thandi cool place mein leke aya hoon.. jahaan snowfall hogi aur hum dance krenge..
Daro mat yahaan hum music pe dance krenge kal jaise cockroaches ko dekhne k baad wala dance nahi πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰
Nupur shows finger.. Mr Sadu tum acche se jante ho ki meri..
Mayank: Meri kya? πŸ˜• hmm kahi tum ye toh nai kehna chahati k tumhari tabyat kharab hai Miss Typical Weakling ? πŸ˜ƒ
Nupur: Main koi weakling nai hoon 😑
Mayank: Then Prove yourself πŸ˜‰ I challenge you.. mere sath andar chali disco mein aur enjoy kro.. 😎
Nupur: Ok Done
Both goes inside..

Inside disco:
Temp is low... its freezing.. Ppl dancing..

Music in background: Saturday Saturday krdi rehndi hai kudi saturday saturday saturday..
Manyank asks Nupur to dance.. Nupur not feeling well.. bt masks wid smile..
They starts dancing..
Nupur feeling extremely cold.. Mayank smirking..
** Mayank thinks ab toh paka bolegi Mayank plz yahaan se bahar chalo na m not well **
But Nupur continues Dancing..
Mayank's gets tensed.. & goes towards her & says.. Nupur I think you are not well lets go..
Nupur nahi main bilkul theek hoon.. dancing & dancing + shivering.. & faints 🀒
Mayank: 😲 Nupur holds her in his arms...
Nupur utho Nupur..
Her body is freezing.. he carries her in his arms & takes her inside his car..
Thinking he commited blunder.. his prank backfired on him..

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Edited by Barbievishi20 - 11 years ago
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Part 2:

Outside BHUSHAN HOUSE:

Kunal was just going inside when he saw Mayan taking Nupur our from his car..
Kunal 😲 πŸ˜•
Ye Nupur ko kya hua? πŸ˜•
Aur ye tumhare sath? πŸ˜•
Mayank vo..vo.. ye clg mein faint hogyi toh maine soch ise iske ghar drop kr du..
Kunal: Bilkul theek kiya tumne.. ye Nupur bhi na.. tabyat kharab thi phir bhi clg gyi.. Anyways Thanks buddy.. main hoona na main ise andar le jaunga ..
Kunal carries Nupur in his arms & takes her inside..

After 2 hrs..
SINGHANIYA MANSION:
Mayank in his room.. not able to sleep.. feeling guilty..
Pata nai kaisi hogi vo.. ye sab meri wajh se hua.. bhai ne itnni baar samjhaya hai ki prank sirf ek limit tak sahi hai.. agr mazak limit cross kr jaye toh vo mazaak nai reh jata..
Use phone kru.. nai agr so rhi hogi toh neend kharab ho jayegi.. ek kaam krta hoon uske ghar jake dekh leta hoon..

BHUSHAN HOUSE:
All sleeping..
Nupur in her room shivering while sleeping..
Mayank enters her room through window..
See Nupur Shivering.. gets scared.. runs towards her.. Takes out another blanket & covers her body..
Mayank: While Rubering her hand.. Nupur dnt wry main hoon yahaan pe fan bhu close krdiya.. ab tumhe thand nai lagegi..

After sometime.. he sees Nupur sleeping peacefully.n decides to go.. but as he was abt to go.. Nupur holds his hand & pull him towards her.. talking while sleeping.. plz mujhe chod k mat jao.. mujhe dar lag rha hai..
Mayank says haan theek hai main tumhe chod k kahi nai jaunga m here..
Mayank admiring her beauty.. she looks innocent & angel while sleeping..
Mayank too falls asleep..
Both sleeping holing eachother's hand..


Morning..

Shimla Express (train) reaches its destination i.e. Shimla..
SaJan comes out from train.. ignoring eyelock with eachother..
Gunjan: aahaan ye hi hai vo jgh jo mujhe mere sapne ko pura krene mein madad kregi 😳


Samrat's manager comes & gives him parcel..
Samrat reads tag.. Only for Mr S written on it..
Samrat uff phirse.. hadd hai.. he was abt to throw it widout opening but thn thinks its wrong to hurt girl's feelings..
He opens.. & sees Pink colour cell phone..

It rings... Hey Shona Hey Shona..
Samrat picks up call..
Gunjan: Hello Mr S
Samrat: 😲 Thinks mujhe aisa kyun lagta hai ye voi hai
*Flashback of der 1st meet*
Gunjan: Hello anyone der?????
Samrat: Hhhello
Gunjan: Tum toh aise sharma rahe ho jaise pehli baar baat kr rhe ho *Laughs*
Samrat: haan
Gunjan: kya haan?
Hum pehli baar baat thodi kr rhe hai jaanu 😳
Samrat: kya kya kaha apne Jannu?
Gunjan: Haan jannu nai toh kya darling kahu?
Samrat: Aap hai kon?
Gunjan: *Thinks accha ji bht ban rahe hai janab chalo hum bhi mazee lete hai* Tumhari Shona aur kon..
Samrat: Wrong no.
Gunjan: Nai ye right no. Hai pyaar ka no.
Tum mere Mr S aur main tumhari hone wali Mrs G ☺️
Jannu dekho tumse duri bardaash nai ho rhi thi isilye tumhe ye pinku cell gift kiya taki hum isme ghanto baate kr sake.. iss phone mein maine apna no. Feed kr diya hai Shona k name se πŸ˜‰ .. iss phone mein aur kisi ka no. Mat save krna ye sirf humare liye hai... accha jaanu bye love you muwaaah :* :* ❀️❀️ cuts d call..
Samrat: 😲
Pink colour ka cell koi kisi ladke ko gift krta hai -_______-

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BHUSHAN HOUSE:
Nupur's Room:
She wakes up & sees Mayank holding her hand... she remembers what happened last night..
Mayank too wakes up..
Nupur vo m sorry pata nai kab aankh lag gyi.. vo actually main yahaan..
Nupur puts her finger on his mouth.. he feels magic..
Nupur: ssshh mujhe san pata hai.. tumne kya kiya..
Mayank thinks she is talking abt disco prank..
Mayank: Nupur dekho vo sab bas ek..

Nupur hugs Mayank tightly.. & whispers thanks alor Mayank agar tum nai hote toh by god mera RIP hojata..
Mayank: shows attitude & says its ok Nupur tumhari jgh koi aur bhi hoti toh main yahi krta..
Nupur again hugs him tightly.. he can feel her heartbeat.. ❀️
Nupur: nai Mayank maine hamesha tumhe galat samjha par tum waise nai ho jaisa maine socha tha..
Mayank says he is geting late for clg.. he leaves..

Mayank while driving.. thinking about Nupur & hug..
Samrat thinking about pink colou phone & miss G..

Music follows in Background:
Iklauta mera dil tha
Bhola-bhaala simple tha
Tujh se main takraayaa
Sarphira ho gaya
Mujhe pyaar laga jo
Tujhe laga bhai-chara
Armaan to jaage
Main magar so gaya
It was my single heart,
innocent and simple,
I collided with youm
and became mad..
While I felt it was love,
you thought it was friendliness..
My hopes awakened [as in, spirits of love
awakened, I fell in love]
but I slept..
Ban ke museebat, peechhe padi hai
Ye comedy hai, ya tragedy hai
Na hona tha kyun ho gaya
Locha-e-Ulfat ho gaya
Like a problem,
it's behind me [or she's behind me]
Is this comedy, or tragedy..
It didn't have to happen, why did it happen?
The problem of love happened.
Tere mere do nazariye, nazdeek hain lekin
Ik baal barabar beech mein line hai
Chubhta hi rehta hai
Gadta hi rehta hai
Tujhe fark nahi hai, Tu badi fine hai
Two viewpoints of yours and mine, are close
but,
There is a hair-like line in between
It keeps pinching,
keeps thrusting in..
You don't care, you're very fine..
Ban ke museebat
Peechhe padi hai
Ye comedy hai
Ya tragedy hai
Na hona tha kyun ho gaya
Locha e Ulfat ho gaya
Locha-e-Ulfat ho gaya..
Ye haal behuda hai
Kis mood mein khuda hai
Kyun dil ki dhadkanon se
Maze mein khele ye ludo samjhaao
Kya khaak dosti hai
Daftar ki naukri hai
Karne ko dil nahi hai magar kare jaaun..
This situation is strange,
In what mood is God,
Why does he play Ludo, having fun,
with the heartbeats..
what a friendship it is..
It's an office job..
I don't want to do, but keep on going..
Tere aane se pehle theek tha
Ab murjhaya sa jaise koi phool hoon
Pehle tha banda kitna kaam ka
Khaali refill jaisa ab fizool hoon
Raaton ko.. main jaagoon, main jaagun
Saari neendein, wo le gayi.. chura ke, chura
ke
Sun to.. khwabon ki khwabon ki
Khidkiyon se.. aa ke phir jhaanke
Chal tu hi batlaa de na
It was okay before you came,
now I am some dead flower..
earlier I was a useful guy,
Now I am useless like an emptied refill,
In the nights, I stay awake..
All my sleeps, she took away..
stealing them..
Listen, from the windows of dreams
she comes and peeps..
You only tell me..
Ban ke museebat
Peechhe padi hai
Yeh comedy hai
Yaa tragedy hai
Naa hona tha kyun ho gaya
Locha-e-Ulfat ho gaya
Locha-e-Ulfat ho gaya

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Gunjan reaches registration centre for registering her name...

Gunjan sees Samrat der..
Gunjan goes towarda him & yell at him.. You stalker phir mera peecha krte yahaan aagye tum..
Samrat: Sorry...
Gunjan: What sorry?
Samrat: Sorry.. oar stalker main nai tum ho 😊
Gunjan was about to punch Samrat but someone comes der & says arey madam kya kr rhi hai aap ye humare chief guest hai.. Sparkling Singing Super Star k special judge.. ye company inki hi toh hai..
Gunjan: 😲 kya Thinks main toh gyi...
*Samrat smirks*
Samrat: Ye yahaan kya kr rhi hai?
Man: Sir ye contestant hai audition k liye ayi hai..
Idea clicks Samrat's mind & he immediately calls board meeting..
Samrat announces Gunjan is disqualified as if she participates it ll be cheating..
Gunjan: 😲
Board members asks why she can't participate?
Samrat says coz she is my wife..
Dhaye dhaye camera rolls focouses on Gunjan's face 3 times (like ekta mate's shows- thoda drama banta hai boss 😎 πŸ˜› )
*Samrat smirks*
Screen freezes on Gunjan's shock face...

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Precap:
Scene 1: Borad members ask Gunjan to share her room wid her hubby Samrat.

Scene 2: Nupur puts condition infront of Mayank that if he wants to be her friend he shld 1st impress her chillar party members..


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Writers Note: All the names, places , people, things, themes, sequences everything used in this chapter are purely fiction..
Resemblence to any kind of reel or real things is just purely coincidence..
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[B] Plz ignore typo mistakes 😊
Edited by Barbievishi20 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Updated 😊
Happy Reading πŸ€“

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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update.
Loved mayur scene :-)
hmmm feeling smthing smthing dey r goin to be honey bunny :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
as usual a very sweet and cute update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fantastic Part
Keep it up
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

Nice update.
Loved mayur scene :-)
hmmm feeling smthing smthing dey r goin to be honey bunny :-)

Thanks alot 😊 Hunny bunny hmm lets see πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sreevijayan

as usual a very sweet and cute update...

Thankyou so much 😊 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Angle.

Fantastic Part
Keep it up

Thankyou so much 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely Part
Mayur and Sajan both were good

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