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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
Awesome part... Plz continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shafy_MN

are you updating..!!

yup!!
had to my sys crashed!! my update is gone ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: luvumjht

yup!!
had to my sys crashed!! my update is gone ..


hawww😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Sorry for the late update, my system crashed :(
hope u njy the story!
Chapter 10

Recap
Gunjan, "we have found traces of poison in your body, it blocks your nervous system. The person is in a trans when they take it. Your body is so used to it, now since you don't consume it, your body is reacting", Nupur was still then she replied, "She gave me a glass of milk everyday". Gunjan, "don't worry di, u will be fine. You need care, stay here for few days.i am here. Otherwise we need to shift you to hospital"
Nupur :"I am fine here Gunjan."

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She was deep in her sleep, images flashed in front of her eyes. They were disturbing. The sudden removal of poison was affecting Nupur. Her body was not numb, but still she was not comfortable. She needed fresh air.
She went to the balcony. All her life was in front of her. The more she thought about it, the more it hurt.

She remembered Gunjan, her father. A deep sorrow engulfed her. She knew that her father was in a sad state because of her. Gunjan had lost her childhood to find Nupur.

Nupur was the reason for their sorrow. she hated herself. They loved her so much but Nupur was still a stranger to the family she was a part of. She connected to Gunjan but she had missed out on a lot. The gap was too huge to fill.
Nupur felt suffocated. She did not realize that she was so lost in the thoughts that she reached the edge of the terrace. Suddenly she felt a warm touch on her hand. Out of no where she was pulled back. She turned around to see who saved her. It was Mayank.
Nupur left Mayank's hand.
Mayank : "What are you doing, be careful!!"
Nupur was dumbstruck. She kept looking at Mayank.
Mayank : "What happened? You fine!!"
Nupur didnot know how to react to mayank. She hated him, but he helped her. She even forgot that the house where she was staying belonged to Mayank: "Nupur, are you fine, you could have fallen down. What were you thinking? You are not well, go to ur bedroom". With that he held Nupur's arm and pulled her towards the bedroom.
Nupur realizing it was Mayank pulled her hand back.
Nupur:"I am fine."
She started moving towards her room.
Mayank :"Nupur, I am not your enemy! You can tell me what is disturbing you"
Nupur in a plain voice said : "I do not trust you."
Mayank was about to say something, when he stopped and turned around.






Edited by luvumjht - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
nice...start...
I know how much diffculty you have faced as your system crashed.
But still you updated.
Thanks for it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Very short update
Next time try to update a longer part please
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Fantastic Part
But Nupur was rude to mayank
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Beautiful part
Do update next part soon-

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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
The last part was not over but many of u read it, so the new part


Chapter 11


Recap


She started moving towards her room.
Mayank :"Nupur, I am not your enemy! You can tell me what is disturbing you"
Nupur in a plain voice said : "I do not trust you."
Mayank was about to say something, when he stopped and turned around.


Nupur moved few steps forward, but then stopped.
She was sorry for her behavior, but there were no words to express herself.
She only said, "Mayank"
when he replied,"I understand."
Nupur,"I am so confused with my life. I am the reason of sorrow for everyone who loves me."
Mayank, "You are not"
Nupur,"Look at Gunj.."
Mayank cut her in between, "I look at you. Gunjan didnot marry samrat, coz she promised her father to gether sister back. now it is ur responsibility, to c Gunji is

happy."


Nupur :"What can I do"
Mayank "Think beyond yourself. be a part of others joy to forget ur pain.Truly speaking u have not lost a lot."
Nupur just stared at Mayank with her lovely doe eyes.
Mayank: "BTW I am leaving tomorrow. So no more mayank sighting for you. "
Nupur: "It is not like that. I.."
Mayank : "Its ok."
Nupur: "Where are you going?"
mayank : "Toronto, i live there. Bye Nupur"


Nupur "I thought you lived here."
Mayank: "No, btw call up ur directors, dont stall the projects u r working on"
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Mayank left the next morning, but he pumped life in the soulless Nupur. She contacted ppl at work and rescheduled all the movies after Gunji and Samrat's wedding. Yes!

she took up upon herself to repay her sister. The wedding preparations were on in full spirit.
In the ceremony she realized she was just like her family. She connected t o them in a way she never thought was possible.
She found her happiness and inner peace in their smile. Heart of heart she thanked Mayank.
A night before the wedding she was going to Gunji's room, when the phn rang.
As soon as she picked the phn she realised Gunjan had received the call.
She was about to keep the call, when she realised someone crying on the phone. Gunjan tried to pacify the person but the crying told thee untold story. It was pain

sheer pain. Nupur didnot realise who it was, .but the pain touched her.

Next day the marraige ceremony ended.
Nupur hugged her sister and stood as a support to her father.
Nupur started shooting for her movies, but she also opened an NGO for girls. She didnot want any girl to go through her pain.The hostel had working girls but one

small kid was left by a stranger in the hostel.
It was a small 4 year old girl named Mayuri.
Nupur liked Mayuri in one go. Nupup planned to quit the movie industry once her current project were over.

One day Nupur got an SMS on the phone. Reading it she rushed to the hostel. The hostel was burnt down. All the girls were safe but the hostel was ruinned.
Nupur simply went and hugged Mayuri,the little child was so scared.
At that moment Nupur got an SMS on her phone "Hand over Mayuri to us, or else this is just a trailer baby"






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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
awesome..
getting quiet interesting...

Mayank ko wapis le aao uske bina kuch acha nahi hain

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