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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Meri-

Its beautiful
finally mayank - nupur got married
wising them a happy and fight free married life which seems impossible to me. :)


it will b possible
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pihu.

awww another fantastic update👏
i really enjoyed a lot😃
though nupurs conversation with her MOM was heart wrenching- poor nupur
but no prob- the groom is mayank na - so it would be fun to enjoy their married life.
😆😃😆


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Dalia.

Superb Update
you are awesome writer dear
please do create some cute romantic scene between them


thanks there will be
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Posted: 11 years ago
ye meri sabse fav FF hai
iski update parke meri dil khush ho jati hai
though mayur fight with each other too much but still i loved them
thjey are damn sweet, cute , adorable and last but not n the list is JHAGRALU..LOL hehehe
but they are the best
i know mayank and nupur got married due thier family pressure but soon they gonna start to love each other. heheheeh aisemaine nehi pandit ne kaha tha. lekin kab kaise kya pata. aur tou aur ye bhi kaha tha ki in dono ki pyaar ki takat in dono ko strength degi to fight against any problem in their life. but dont know ki ye pyaar kaise start hogi..

anyway mayur night was cute as as usal i expected. but i felt a lil bit bad for nupur. nupur- nups mom convo was realistic. even oi wonder ki how Nupurs mom was agreed for thsi proposal as mayank was good for nothing( oye still he is my Nups Hero.so i really like him. bass thoda responsible ho jaye).
Loved it
Keep it up
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria.

ye meri sabse fav FF hai
iski update parke meri dil khush ho jati hai
though mayur fight with each other too much but still i loved them
thjey are damn sweet, cute , adorable and last but not n the list is JHAGRALU..LOL hehehe
but they are the best
i know mayank and nupur got married due thier family pressure but soon they gonna start to love each other. heheheeh aisemaine nehi pandit ne kaha tha. lekin kab kaise kya pata. aur tou aur ye bhi kaha tha ki in dono ki pyaar ki takat in dono ko strength degi to fight against any problem in their life. but dont know ki ye pyaar kaise start hogi..

anyway mayur night was cute as as usal i expected. but i felt a lil bit bad for nupur. nupur- nups mom convo was realistic. even oi wonder ki how Nupurs mom was agreed for thsi proposal as mayank was good for nothing( oye still he is my Nups Hero.so i really like him. bass thoda responsible ho jaye).
Loved it
Keep it up

thanks parti reh kyuki mujhe khudko nehi pata onke beech pyar kaise hoga
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Posted: 11 years ago
👏amazing update , it will be gud to read further 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shivangi838

👏amazing update , it will be gud to read further 😃

thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER - 14

CHAPTER - 15

Next morning,Nupur woke up early and got ready as there are some rituals which are to be performed by her.She went to take shower and after returning,she found Mayank was still sleeping like a dog.She gave him a hopeless look and she said to God,"Ek saal ke liye bhi aapko yehi larka mila tha mera pati banaane ke liye?Hadh hai!"She got ready and went to the prayer house where Maadhvi was waiting for her.Payal too came there.On seeing her Maadhvi asked,"Payal tu kyu aayi?Maine tujhe zyaada se zyaada araam karne ko kaha tha na?"Payal replied,"Mummyji,ab hamesha jaldi uthkar aadat ho gayi hai na meri.Kya karu?Hamesha isiwaqt neend toot jaati hai."Nupur took Maadhvi's and Payal's blessings.Maadhvi said,"Nupur aaj tera pehla din hai ghar mein,isliye aaj ki puja tu hi karegi."Nupur nodded her head.She remembered how Sunaina and Kutumb used to do the morning prayers and accordingly did that.After that,she took up the aarti thaali and went to every room and gave aarti to everyone and took their blessings.At last,when she came in front of her room,Payal said,"Devrani ji jaiye abhi jaakar apne patidev ko uthaaiye."Nupur smiled to her but in her heart,only she knew how irritated she was.She entered inside and walked towards Mayank.She called him up but he didn't wake up.Instead he turned on the other side.Nupur said,"Mayank uthkar aarti le lo uske baad phir se gadho ki tarah so jaana kuch nehi kahungi."Nupur again called him but he didn't wake up.At last Nupur started pushing him and said,"Mayank get up!Mujhe abhi bohot kaam hai,pura time yaha nehi beth sakti.Chupchap aarti lo aur mujhe baksh do."Mayank,in his sleep,said,"Bhabhi...please sone do na,ya to tum aarti dedo mujhe."Nupur always becomes irritated when she had to come to Mayank and on hearing the word BHABHI for her from his mouth,Nupur was so angry that she picked up the glass of water and grinned,"Bhabhi ke pyaare devar,urati hu ab tumhaari neend."Saying she emptied the whole glass of water on his face and yelled,"Main bhabhi lagti hu tumhaari?"Mayank screamed and jumped up on the bed and the moment he saw Nupur,he yelled,"What the hell???Ye kya tha?"Nupur replied,"Jab ghee seedhi ungli se na nikle to ungli tedhi karni parti hai.Ye kahaavat to suni hogi na tumne?"Mayank replied,"Listen Nupur,ye ghar bhi mera hai aur gharwaale bhi mere hai aur ye karma bhi mera hai,isiliye mere kamre mein khare hokar mujhse is tarah se tum baat nehi kar sakti."Nupur said,"Kisi tarah se choro mujhe to tumse baat karne ko bhi ratti bhar dil nehi karta hai.Tumse baat karna main apni insult samajhti hu.Aarti lekar aayi hu aarti lelo phir chahe zindagi bhar sote raho I don't care.Vaise bhi sone ke aur apne papa aur bhaiya ke mehnat ke paise uraane ke alava aur kuch aata bhi to nehi hai na."Nupur then put forward the thaali and signalled at it.Mayank glared at her and took the aarti.Nupur said,"Good night again!Kyuki morning to tumhaare jaise aadmi ke zindagi mein kabhi ho hi nehi sakti aur vo bhi good to hargiz nehi."Saying she left.

In the dining table,when everyone were gathered and having breakfast,Payal took Nupur to the kitchen and said,"Abhi tumhe apne rasoi ki rasam bhi nibhaani hogi.Aaj tum hum sabke liye kuch na kuch meetha banaaogi."Nupur said,"Par didi mujhe to kuch bhi banaani nehi aati.Vo main to job karti thi na to mujhe kabhi bhi kitchen mein jaaneka mauka hi nehi mila."Payal replied,"Koi baat nehi main seekha deti hu tumhe."Payal then instructed her what and how to make.While telling her,Payal said,"Agar tum dono ki shaadi aam shaadiyo ke tarah hoti na to main tumhaari taang khichaayi zarur karti ke suhag-raat mein kya hua,par main aisa kuch nehi karungi kyuki mujhe pata hai,kuch nehi hua hoga."Nupur looked at her with a jerk.Payal said,"Main Mayank ko bohot achche se jaanti hu aur in kuch dino mein tumhe bhi bohot achche se na sahi par thora bohot pehchaan hi liya hai.Main jaanti hu apne family ke pressure mein aakar tum dono ne ye shaadi ki hai,par abhitak tum dono ne ek dusre ko accept nehi kiya hai.I can understand,usme thora time bhi lagega."Payal told Nupur many things about this family and Mayank and by that time,Nupur made the sweet dish.After that,both Payal and Nupur went to the dining table where all were waiting for them.When they all except Nupur sat on the dining table,everyone saw Mayank was coming to have his breakfast.Nupur didn't look at him.Nupur started serving food to everyone with Payal's help.Nupur said,"Didi aap beth jaaiye.Aise time pe zyaada samay tak khare nehi rehte hai.Bethiye.Ab main hu na."Maadhvi said,"Nupur tum pag phero ke baad se apne hotel ja sakti ho."Nupur said,"Nehi mummyji,maine apni job chor di hai."All were surprised.Payal asked,"Tumne job kyu chor di?"Nupur replied,"Agar main chali gayi to aapka dhyaan kaun rakhega didi?Maine suna hai ke aapko doctor ne bohot savdhaani se rehne ko kaha hai kyuki aapki bohot late pregnancy hai na.Isliye maine job chor di hai,taaki main pura waqt is ghar ko de saku."Mayank stared at her for sometime and then resumed eating.Nupur served everyone the sweet-dish.Dhruv said,"Job chor diya hai koi baat nehi hai,par mere paas Nupur ke liye ek proposal hai."Nupur asked,"Vo kya?"He said,"Maine suna hai,Nupur bohot achche accounts check karti hai.To aaj se ghar mein rehne ke saath saath,tum hamaare compny ke accounts check karke dogi aur iske badle tumhe vohi salary milegi jo tumhaare papa tumhe dete the."Nupur said,"Done!Par aapko ye baat kaise pata chali?"Dhruv made a naughty grin and said,"Dhruv Diwan ko har zaruri khabar mil hi jaati hai."Nupur gave a broad smile.After the breakfast,everyone,except,Mayank praised Nupur's sweet-dish.She replied,"Mujhe to khana banaana aata hi nehi hai,didi ne meri madat ki hai."Payal asked,"Mayank tu to kuch bol ke kaisa hua?"Mayank made a face and said,"Thik hi hai."Maadhvi asked,"Ye kya tareeka hua bolne ka?"Nupur spoke up,before letting her complete,"Rehne dijiye mummyji,100 mein se agar 10 mark kat jaaye to koi fail nehi hota aur khaaskar vo jo show off ke liye milta hai."Everyone started giggling.Mayank made a fist out of anger but could not reply.Dhruv said,"Arey vaah,Nupur ne kaha tha ke Mayank juice nikaalegi par yaha to aate hi aadha juice nikal chuka hai."Payal said,"Off oh Dhruv!Aap bhi na!Ye dono pati-patni hai jo chahe kare aap isme beth kar aag mein ghee daalne ka kaam mat kijiye."After that Nupur took Payal to her room,gave her medicine and asked her to take rest.

When Nupur returned to her room,she found Mayank was playing video game on the TV.She closed her eyes with disgust.Mayank asked,"Bohot gusse mein lag rahi ho?"Nupur asked,"Any problem with that?"Mayank raised his hands and then said,"Tumne meri sabke saamne insult ki,gussa to mujhe hona chahiye,par yaha tum gusse mein ho."Nupur said,"Mujhe gussa kis baat par aa raha hai,thats none of you business,Mayank,tumhe jo gussa nehi aa raha hai,insult ke baad bhi vo mujhe pata hai,kyuki gussa unko aata hai,jinke paas self-respect ho,jo tumhaare paas nehi hai.Agar tumhe gussa aata na,tab main sach mein surprise hoti."Mayank said,"Humne ek dusre se vaada kiya tha ke hum ek dusre ke life mein kabhi dakhal nehi denge.I think you forgot it."Nupur replied,"Nah!Main nehi bhuli.Main to bas tumhaare baat ka jawaab de rahi hu.Jaise baat karoge vaise hi jawaab bhi milega.Tum mujhse baat hi mat karo,problem is solved."Mayank said,"Aaj jab tumne vo sweet dish banaayi,to main na bilkul hi surprise ho gaya.Maine ye socha ke jis larki ki zabaan itni karvi ho,vo itna achcha sweet dish kaise bana sakti hai?Sach bolo na kya tumhaari ma ne paida hone ke baad tumhe shehed chakaana bhul gayi thi?"She replied with a smile,"Nehi bhuli,par tumhaari shakal hi aisi bandaro jaisi hai ke shehed bhi karela ban jaata hai aur sweet dish to choro,mera bas chalta to main usme bhi jamaalghota daalkar tumhe khilaati,taaki tum washroom se kabhi bahaar hi na aate aur mujhe ye sari hui bengan jaisi tumhaari shakal nehi dekhni parti."Mayank said,"Kaho to tumhaare liye imported jmaalghota mangvaadu,subhe sham khaati rehna aur washroom ke andar hi jawaan se budhdhi ho jaana aur vaise na galti tumhaari nehi hai,jinki khudki shakal tumhaari jaisi gali hui tamaatar jaisi ho,usey baaki sab sare huye bengan hi lagte hai."Saying he concentrated on his games.After sometime,he said,"Aaj reception hai yaad hai na."Nupur replied,"Mujhe amnesia ki bimari nehi hai."Mayank became irritated and asked,"Tum kisi bhi baat ka seedha seedha jawaab nehi de sakti?"Nupur replied,"Tumhe dekh kar mera mood hi chala jaata hai seedha jawaab dene ka."Saying she went to the washroom.She closed the door and started weeping siently in anger by putting the sink knob on.She said slowly,"Ghar ke saare mard office jaate hai,kaam karte hai aur ek ye hai,ghar par beth kar video game khel raha hai.Pata nehi mujhe kis janam ki saza mil rahi hai jo mujhe aise aadmi se shaadi karni pari hai.Isse achcha meri ma apne hi haatho se mera gala daba deti,aise humiliated life se to chutkara mil jaata.Roz mujhe iski shakal dekhni paregi."She sprinkled water on her face and then wiped her face with the towel.

In the evening,Payal and other girls helped Nupur to get ready for the reception.She wore a new saree given to her by Payal.Mayank to wore a suit presented to him by Dhruv.In the party,everyone welcomed the newly wedded couple with applause.Unwantedly,Mayank had to give her his arm and Nupur had to hold that.When Nupur saw her father,she almost ran to him and wept.Ashok asked,"Tu thik to hai na beta?"Nupur nodded her head in a yes and said,"Ha papa main bilkul thik hu."She wiped her tears and met with everyone of her family.Ishaan said,"Bua main aapko bohot miss karta hu."Nupur hugged him and said,"Main bhi."Mayank came and took their blessings.The DF welcomed them whole-heartedly.Maadhvi introduced Nupur to all the guests.Some women of Maadhvi's kitty party started talking with her.One woman asked,"Nupur beta humne suna hai ke tum kisi hotel mein manager ho?"Nupur replied,"Ji auntyji,thi,ab nehi hu.Maine vo job chor di hai.Ab main puri tarah se house wife hu."The woman said,"Mayank ab to apni company join karlo,after all ab biwi ghar mein aa gayi hai."Mayank smiled shamelessly whereas Nupur was hurt somewhere.Another woman said,"Ha abto Mayank ko kamaana shuru kar dena chahiye.Vaise...kamaane ki kya zarurat hai,itni bari empire ka dusra waaris hai.Aakhir sab kuch baad mein isika hi to hoga.Inki to kahi generations,bina kaam kiye hi reh sakti hai."All giggled.Nupur felt very embarrassed.Mayank,already fled away from there very smartly and gathered with his friends.Maadhvi,on seeing Nupur's face understood that she was not liking all those things.So,she immediately,said to them,"Arey tum log bhi na kyu meri bahu ka pareshaan kar rahe ho.Chalo yaha se,main tumhe dusre logo se milwaati hu."They left Nupur alone.Nupur had tears in her eyes.Just then,a hand with a tissue paper forwarded towards her.She raised her face and found Gunjan.Nupur hugged her and then took the paper from her hand and wiped her tears.Gunjan asked,"Tu kyu aise logo ki baatein dil par lagaati hai Nupur?"Nupur replied,"Mujhe bhi koi shaukh nehi hai Gunjan,par,sach to hai na ye baat ke Mayank koi kaam nehi karta.Main ye bhi jaanti hu ke meri ye shaadi uske saath ek compromise marriage hai.Sirf ma ke liye ye shaadi ki hai maine.Mujhe uske life mein koi interest nehi hai,par kya karu,chahe jaisa bhi hai,duniya ke nazar mein to ye mera pati hai na aur is baat ko to main jhutla nehi sakti.Mera abhi se hi dam ghut raha hai is rishte mein,pata nehi aagey kaise nibhaaungi is rishte ko."Gunjan put her hand on her shoulder and said,"Tu fikar mat kar Nupur,sab thik ho jaayega.Tu dekh lena,ek din Mayank ko bhi apni responsibility ka ehsaas hoga.Vo zarur badlega."Nupur smiled sarcastically and said,"Jisme badalne ki chah hoti hai,vohi badalta hai Gunjan.Aise insaan se badalne ki ummeed karna bhi waqt ki barbaadi hai.Khair!Ye sab chor.Koi aur baat karte hai."Nupur then started talking with Gunjan on other topics than Mayank.

CHAPTER - 16

Edited by -Paulomi- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice updt
cont soon
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