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Babaji Ka Thullu

@BabajiKaThullu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: HealMeForever
omfffggg:D
i couldnt ever imagine tune title ye rakha hogaa karkee...!!!
firstlyy even i m gladdd dat u took upon writing!!i alwayz wanted u to!
secondly rockingggh updateee...jaldi nxt parttt upd kar..i just loveddd it..tere choice of words mastaaa hai!!
lastly d title rocksss!!! i loveddd it n it has a deeper meaninggg!!..hats off to ur creayivity!!!:)

Damn was waiting for your comment

Charmee & kinjal commented but you didnt 😆

of course i have to WRITE if not for me then For few kamine fraandss 😆

Yup title Rocks 🤣 i still dont know real meaning of title 🤣

Thanks for the COMMENT yaar i didnt expect this soon

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Omfggg
kamini rampire what the gell u wrote bey

nalayak...you how BRILLIANT THIS STORY IS!
My my...such a marvelous part

and ur creativity in terms of those names is truely COMMENDABLE...

Am shortof words to describe how beautiful this part is
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Loved the way u showed the smartness of gunjan for making samrat open up his feelings...that was great...
Just brilliant
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And then those beauiful lines u wrote for the beach part that was superb re
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1st part padhke laga tha aanewale part me zaarur un chapters ko unfold karegi
and
BANG ON...i was right
yaay
first chapter itself gave me tears with goosebumps...

Baapre aur bohot chapters hai
pata nai mera kya hoga

Like i always knew the real radhi is hiding behind those kutta rofls...

THIS IS YOU

i so damn love three of us aditi charmee nd kinjal(me) rocks
thanks us...life me un gine chune ache kaamo me se ek hai tujse yeh likhwana...haayee
*hi 5 guys*

ps - 3 - 4 spell errors hai correct them

Edited by -Ocean.eyes- - 12 years ago

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Aditi nalayak kabhi mere shop pe toh comment marne time nai hota
yaha barabar tapak gai huh!
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And i was waiting for my 1st comment
aur tu kamini aagai beech me
huh

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-Marie-

@-Marie-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Res I read but I want comment long radhi will comment in night m from cel abhi okie

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Babaji Ka Thullu

@BabajiKaThullu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: -Ocean.eyes-
Aditi nalayak kabhi mere shop pe toh comment marne time nai hota
yaha barabar tapak gai huh!
.
.
And i was waiting for my 1st comment
aur tu kamini aagai beech me
huh

haawww wo teri shop pe comment nahi maarti 😲🤣

i know wo kaise bich me aagayi 🤣 🤣