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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks dear for ur comment😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

MD is evil. plz dont separate Mayur


thanks dear for ur comment 😃

mayur hoga wohi jo hona hain
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Irum.

superb update👏

Hmm...ab yeh Mayank ka Dad kya krne wala hai.🤓
Thanx for PM Janni🤗


thank u 🤗

pata nahi mayank ke dad ke dimag me kya chal raha hai 🤔
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

it was such a beautiful update

aur ab kahani mein twist...hmm


thanks dear for ur comment 😃

hmmm kahani me twist dekhte hain kya rang lata hain mayur ki life me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks parul for ur comment 😃
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Part 8

At 10 am Mayank and nupur left to visit doctor and SA Anjali & MD was at home.

SA has to go for some work out side so anjali and MD was alone at home. Anjali was lying in cradle and playing and MD was sitting far away from her and watching her playing and want to go to her first he was hesitate what if shilpa aur mayank nupur will be return waise bhi wo uske saath khelna chahte the usko gale lagana chahte the aur dadu ka pyar dena chahte the lekin anjali ke paas koi na koi hota tha lekin aaj koi nahi hain to kyun na mauke ka fayda uthaya jaye . Wo dheere se anjali ke paas gaye aur apni gaud me utha liya aur anjali unko dekhkar hasne lagi aur khush ho gayi finally usko apne dadu ka pyar mil gaya aur MD uske sath khelne lage and anjali was also enjoying with him its like she is always play with him.

Pari main tumhe pari bulauga main humesha se chahta tha ke meri ek beti bhi ho jiska naam pari rakhu lekin aisa kabhi hua nahi lekin bhagwan ne meri wish aise puri kar di aur waise bhi tu pari hain hamare ghar ki main tumhare saath humesha khelna chahta tha lekin mere ego ki wajah se nahi aaya and anjali make pout, awww pari beta main tumse nahi dur rehta tha lekin tumhare dad ki wajah se rehta tha usne mujhe bahut hurt kiya tha lekin maine bhi kam hurt nahi kiya usko pata nahi kyun main khush nahi tha uske decision se lekin ab main sab theek kar dunga ghabrao mat hain na hum sab theek kar lege hain a aur anjali made happy face.I really miss ur dad and miss all those moment which I spend with him I thought one day he will come back to me and ask for forgiveness and I will forgive him and we all will be together but he didn't come 3 yeards he didn't come I was dying each and every seconwithout I dint said this anything to any one but only you and when I came to know that u born I cant stop myself to come to meet you but couldn't come ur dad didn't inform me he inform only to ur dadi and I was hurt & may he doesn't feel worth me to inform me so I didn't come may be ur dad move on in ur life he doesn't need me anymore he is grown up now.

When he was saying all this to anjali he doesn't know that someone is listening his one side conversation and its none other than MayUr and this made them more guilty, thanks to door voice MD realize that mayur are there on door, instead of keeping anjali aside and gave some random reason he continue to play with anjali and behave like they were not there but still they were standing at door so finally MD spoke

MD : apne hi ghar me aaye ho kisi aur ke nahi ke darwaze pe hi khade ho wohi pe khade rehne ka irada hain kya

Its nupur who come inside and stand infront of MD and said

N : uncle aapne anjali ko apna liya lekin main janti hoon mujhe apna nahi paoge kyunki maine aapka bahut dil dukhaya hain lekin main khush hoon ke aapne anjali ko apna liya aur anjali ko apne dada aur dadi dono ka pyar milega

MD doesn't know what to say, Till now SA to come and saw the view and first she wass shock and later happy.

MD : Shilpa hum kal ghar jaa rahe hain

Till now mayank was quite but he spoke after hearing this

M : kyun dad itni bhi narajgi ki humse mana ke humse galti hui hain lekin kya humari galti itni badi hain ke aap humse zindagibhar dur rahoge kyun dad aap humein maaf nahi karte please dad forgive us now I cant bear any more, dad bhale hi main aaj bada ho gaya hoon lekin mujhe aaj bhi aapki jarurat hain aapke bina main kuch nahi please maine kafi time socha ke main aapke paas aau aur mafi mango lekin darta tha ke kahi aap humein apnanae se inkaar na kardo himat nahi thi aapka samna karne ki please dad don't go and forgive us he said pleadingly and nupur was crying looking this.

MD heart melt watching his son like this he just want to hugged him and console him but he control his emotion and said

MD : tumhari aadat abhi tak gayi nahi samane wale ki puri baat sun liya karo maine kaha hum ghar jaa rahe hum matlab hum sab jaa rahe and he smile at him

Every one was shock to hear that they cant believe what his dad said

Aap log mujhe aise kyun dekh rahe ho jaise ke main bhoot hoon khade kya ho tum dono jao aur packing karo ghar jane ki

M & N : blank

MD : anjali tumhare mom dad ko dekho kaise statue ki tarah khade hain, tum log jao yaha se use pehle ke main apna faisala badal du

M & N : nodded and run as soon as possible in to their room

And MD giggle and look towards SA and show her staring at him

MD : I know I am handsome but baccho ke samane thodi to sharam karo

SA : hawww aap bhi na lekin haye re mere sweetoo najar na lage waah kya kamal kar diya aaj waah and patted his back

MD : don't call me sweetoo openly kisi ne sun liya to kya sochege

SA : aww mera sweetoo Sharma raha hain waise mayank aap par hi gaya hain is mamale me wo bhi tokta hain jab bhi main usko mayu bulati hoon

MD : obv hain na tum aise ajeeb se naam jo deti ho waise khabardar meri poti ko koi aisa ajeeb sa naam diya to

SA : hello sweetoo wo meri bhi poti hain aur mera hak banta hain

MD : mera bhi hak banta (mimicking her)

SA : khair chhod aaj aapne jo kiya uske liye aapki yeh baat manli aap bhi kya yaad rakhoge

MD : shukriya aapka ehsaan me zindagi bhar nahi bhuluga

SA : main aise ehsaan karte rehti hoon

MD : haan haan janta hoon

SA : seriously I am so proud of you and I love you sweetoo and run away from there before any word from MD

MD : don't called me (shoutingly) sweetoo and he look at here and there that mayank or nupur didn't hear sweetoo word and look towards anjali who was looking at him teri dadi bhi na bilkul but I really love her and I love u too and rubbed his nose with anjali

Inside MayUr room

Mayank was avoiding nupur and nupur understtod why

N : mayank

M : haan

Nupur just hugged him tightly

N : mera akdu pati apne aansu chupa raha hain mujhse haan

M just hug her back tightly and didn't said anything and nupur was quite for some time and let him cry becoz he is crying after so long time and all he has inside has to be come out

M : after sometime I still cant believe that dad forgive us and we are going home our home it seems like dream to me

Nupur pinch him

M : ouch nupur lagta hain

N : ab yakin hua ke yeh sach hain sapna nahi

M : haan to koi itna jor se maarta hain

N : sorry kaan pakadkar

M : itni aasani se nahi

N : to kaise

Mayank pull her towards him and just kissed her and after kissing session they start there packing

Its night time after dinner everyone was sitting in hall and playing with anjali, though things still not like earlier but slowly slowly coming to its place and everyone are happy with the pace

MD phone rang he excuse them

MD : (on phone) hello sari preparartion ho gayi kya mujhe koi bhi kami nahi chahiye usme and cut the call and look towards trio who are busy with Anjali, Just wait nupur tum nahi janti ki tumhare saath kya honewala hain ke tum zindagi bhar yaad rakhogi and gave evil smile

Precap :

Nupur : 😲😲😲

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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
reserve for last part 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
awesome part..
Finally Mayank's Dada forgiven Him..
aww..
it was really very sweet part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kaffi din ho gaye tujhe hug nahi diya tu is liye ye le.
🤗
Awww ...I loved Dada and poti relations.
Anjali was listening to MD keenly and respondin him.
Finally he forgave Mayank.But ab yeh Nupur k sat kya krne wala hai.
😲
Thnx for PM Janni😳
Edited by Irum. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
dekha... mujhe maloom tha..MD ka evil face ka baare mein!
wt happd 2 nupur now!

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