mjht revisited 3. last part /page 69 - Page 16

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

yeah skip kerdain hum

OMG it was so awesum thngs tht i missd in MJHT, specially my shilpa anty, wooo...

it was such an awesum update..

the bst is tht u r nt only showing nupurs grief but also mayank's

gr8 gr8

thanks for replying always..
i m actually leaning newer stuff from all these comments.
i didnt even realise that mayanks pain was here till i read ur comment and reread the part and found it ! thanks

MJHT revisited 3

mere dimaakh mein shayad wo hamara pehla waala samrat ka outhouse hi tha. Achanak se yahaan aake thoda ajeeb laga

As though it wasn't only the viewers that travelled through the time leap. Excellent introduction.

us ehsaas ko bhulgaya tha – jab bhi tum mere saath hoti thi ,,tab aisa lagtha tha ki main zinda hoon. Beautifully written. I have always loved the sentiment and it reminded me of these lines of lyrics, Kahun kya bhala, Tumhi ko to mein chahta hoon Suno
Tumhein jo mila, Mene jana main bhi zinda hoon

"par samrat in teen saal mein, tum sab se zyaada changed hogayeho."nupur teased him as he looked at her questioningly, " tumhaare chashmein lag gaye."Although said half in jest, I loved the truth of this statement. As though he was trying to replace the irreplaceable through imitation.

nupur who had read every expression of his and perhaps even the ones which weren't on his face. That understanding that even years of age can not remove.

I loved that slow development of their physical intimacy, that slight struggle that as you say we didn't get in the original, for it seems more natural this way. I too re wrote this chapter of MN too, as did many BUT mine seems very melo dramatic whilst also diluted when compared to yours for you have managed to capture that true to life quality that is beautiful as it is haunting. Well written.

With love, Sabah

lovely update...becuz you brought back my favorite character after mayur...and you know that she can never be a haddi between them like everyone else...in fact she always brings them closer 😊

amazing part

nice cont soon dear 😊

Originally posted by: sumonetolub

lovely update...becuz you brought back my favorite character after mayur...and you know that she can never be a haddi between them like everyone else...in fact she always brings them closer 😊

you are beginning to read my mind😊

thanks for reading and replying

Originally posted by: a little faith

MJHT revisited 3

mere dimaakh mein shayad wo hamara pehla waala samrat ka outhouse hi tha. Achanak se yahaan aake thoda ajeeb laga

As though it wasn't only the viewers that travelled through the time leap. Excellent introduction.

us ehsaas ko bhulgaya tha ' jab bhi tum mere saath hoti thi ,,tab aisa lagtha tha ki main zinda hoon. Beautifully written. I have always loved the sentiment and it reminded me of these lines of lyrics, Kahun kya bhala, Tumhi ko to mein chahta hoon Suno
Tumhein jo mila, Mene jana main bhi zinda hoon

"par samrat in teen saal mein, tum sab se zyaada changed hogayeho."nupur teased him as he looked at her questioningly, " tumhaare chashmein lag gaye."Although said half in jest, I loved the truth of this statement. As though he was trying to replace the irreplaceable through imitation.

nupur who had read every expression of his and perhaps even the ones which weren't on his face. That understanding that even years of age can not remove.

I loved that slow development of their physical intimacy, that slight struggle that as you say we didn't get in the original, for it seems more natural this way. I too re wrote this chapter of MN too, as did many BUT mine seems very melo dramatic whilst also diluted when compared to yours for you have managed to capture that true to life quality that is beautiful as it is haunting. Well written.

With love, Sabah

thanks for reading and replying.

what you say as true to life can border on boring at times!!! though its nice to hear you calling it beautiful !😊

hay Why we skipped it

Originally posted by: sumonetolub

loving the pace...and such an emotional yet beautiful update 😊